Uncle Jiu’s Abandoned Disciple: Beginning with My Own Eight Wonders

No, the protagonist in Chapter 52 calls Sister Ren Tingting, and Ren Tingting calls the protagonist Second Brother. What is your name?

The writing is okay and can be regarded as a masterpiece. I didn't lick Uncle Jiu and I didn't feel embarrassed. It's just that a few chapters were rewritten and repeated, and the level of improvement was too fast. This book doesn't have many chapters. The author might as well get a copy later! Or change the map

Good, finally dead. There is a novel that drives away the three evils of Uncle Nine.

Before I came in, I saw that the reviews were 5 stars, 3 stars and 2 stars. The 2-star character couldn't use gold fingers when writing about the protagonist, so I came in out of curiosity to take a look. It turned out that 2 stars was still too high. Not to mention the gold fingers are used to assist, and the gold fingers can create exercises. Others may think that creating a book of exercises that can cultivate immortality is not too much, right? Has the protagonist, the time traveler, never seen a pig running? It doesn't matter if the training world is too low, you can slowly upgrade it. This is a problem with Goldfinger. In the first part, Ren Tingting is the older sister. In the second part, the protagonist successfully practices weapons and calls the protagonist the second brother. The subject matter is good, but it's a pity that it starts high and goes low. I have no interest in reading anywhere in Jiumen.

The writing is very good, but the hook is a bit small, and the protagonist is a bit incapable of using the hook.

There are many inconsistencies and repetitions. My father and elder sister do not call each other by their names. There are many inconsistencies.

You are repeating too much! Slipping away

This book is good, very interesting, and the world is macroscopic enough. Taking the Ren family as the starting point to cultivate a cultivating family [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I give you 7 stars. You are not a qualified tailor. It is a mess and the preface and the follower are inconsistent.

The early pace is not laggy at all. It is a rare good book, but can it be updated faster? I get stuck every time. Can I finish it in one go? Woohoo! ! !