Game Invasion: She’s Overpowered, Yet Far Too Cautious

The plot is not bad, and it progresses very quickly as a revenge story, but there are too many psychological descriptions of the protagonist, and many unnecessary descriptions make it seem a bit troublesome. I hope it can be streamlined, and the skills are also the same. The awakening chapter seems very confusing, and the introduction is not very successful. It is recommended to streamline the list, first show the complete skills and then explain them one by one, and use short and concise sentences to describe them. What are the core skills, what are the auxiliary skills, and only after using the skills more often will everyone understand how to use them. For example, the skill in the book Xun Ge, the core is "wanting to make progress too much". I have used it too many times and received timely feedback. I have naturally engraved the feeling of "progress" into my bones. The heroine's personality is not outstanding. I hope to see a better portrayal in the future. Come on, author!

Tied, I would like to give you a five-star review first! As long as it doesn't deceive me, I will continue to read it. Author, don't be discouraged. This kind of article usually requires hundreds of chapters to attract more readers! There are no insulting words and no censorship. The heroine is a strong lone wolf with a lot of brains. The setting is novel. She is cruel to herself and even more cruel to others. She avenges her grudges on the spot. She is meticulous. The author is very humorous. I don't have any surprises at the moment.

Battle royale and auction are indeed dark (the darkness of human nature, the blood star of the picture). This type is not only rare in female videos, but also easy to be harmonized. The heroine also has a dark personality, a "boss who is very good at pretending", and is even more cruel to her enemies than to herself. It's very novel in every aspect, especially the skills and talents that make me wonder. The setting plot is unfolded slowly, rather than being given to the readers in one go (with less explanation), which will cause some readers to express doubts and even make bad comments. Most of the readers of Red Persimmon are the audience for mindless and light-hearted articles. This writing method may dissuade readers, but it will also leave loyal readers, which is considered to be purified. Moreover, the author often asks readers for suggestions in the article. You are a motivated author. Your personal style is quite distinctive and unique. Remember to retain the characteristics when revising the article. Five-star praise is encouraging. Anyway, I quite like it. Cheers, author.

If you want to be a lone wolf, you have to be at least stronger than an army, right? The anchor is between good and bad, good and bad, and adapts to changes in human form. Morality is between great kindness and great compassion and great evil and great evil. There are 81 different forms that can be adapted to suit the situation. Someone said that you can't trust what you read on the Internet. No one is really that charming. She was right. Because she is in real life! More attractive! Who knows? ! I have found a hidden model of a sickly beauty🥵🥵🥵But I suggest that everyone just worship her online [cool]. Because last time I accidentally licked her hand, it was so spicy that I couldn't move anymore and went straight into a deep sleep🤏 Then I opened my eyes again... It turned out that eighteen years had passed [sending heart] (sigh) The flesh and blood are suffering, I am a furnace, turning the broken body into disaster, Hungry Buddha🙏

The first few chapters were really not very attractive, and I even felt that the writing and characters were average, but because I was too bored, I continued reading. Unexpectedly, the back part is very attractive [Petrochemical] This is the first time I have seen a theme that combines digging and Ke style very well. It is very novel. The author has a great imagination, and I can see that there is foreshadowing in the front. If you like to watch Ke style, you can really take a look. The main character, Goldfinger, is very big, which is very enjoyable to watch, and the plot is not too brainless. What's a bit criticized (I think, don't pay too much attention to it) is that the protagonist's character is a lone wolf➕ cruel and ruthless, but many times, intentionally or unintentionally, they try to whitewash her image in other people's minds, trying to portray her as a "good person". This doesn't seem to fit in with the image of a villainous woman that readers have seen, and it gives people the feeling of wanting and wanting at the same time. I personally don't like this very much. The second is that the materials that the protagonist gets from opening the treasure box are written in too much detail. Many times, readers don't have the patience to see what they get. It is recommended that the author simplify it, or just list one or two common ones, and focus on the rest of the more important items. Otherwise, it will be very tiring to read, and you will not know what is more powerful or rare. All in all, it's still worth watching, recommended [like]

The previous descriptions of pain were too much and not enough to be "enjoyable", and the settings were hallucinated from other stories. I thought it was a rip-off, but I didn't expect it to be completely different. It turned out to be a genre! There are really few survival stories + g-type settings, but they are all well-written, and the settings for monsters and so on are also very novel. I personally feel that the background, painful memories, etc. In the early stage are too long-winded in some places and confusing in others. The part where the heroine swallows the tickle can be expanded and written in more detail to show the endurance and madness of the heroine in this life. When I saw this plot, I was shocked by her. I wanted to read the comments to find readers who had the same idea as me, but I found that there were not many comments. Maybe it was just a few words that brought the matter away, and readers failed to notice. Of course, these are my personal opinions. How to write it depends on the author himself.

The first three chapters were quite average and even not very attractive to me. I didn't know how to continue reading. But when the first monster appeared later, the plot started to get better and I felt that the author was writing the settings seriously. Some places are quite middle-grade, and the scenes and characters are more friendly to those who like to read comics. Protagonist: OK, but not suitable for people who like pure good guys and pure evil guys. The position is neutral and favored. It is not that the doormat will take revenge quickly, but the protagonist will not do evil if there is no conflict of interest. Classic operation. Orientation: Principled but flexible in bottom line. People who know the flexible protagonist can try it.

It is a survival type that I have never seen before. It is very interesting. The setting inside is completely different from those pure and normal survival games. It has been carefully set by the author. It is very innovative. What is the point of cookie-cutter survival? The novel is about innovation. There is a small flaw in the front and it looks a bit messy, but the more you read later, the smoother it becomes. The flaws are not concealed. Big boost for the author. Perseverance is victory!

The heroine's calm and decisive character is non-toxic, the plot is also very smooth, not mindless, and the graphic scenes are super well written...! I just hope my brother can be more miserable The misery of Shuangwen's brother, who uses revenge as a selling point, should be an important point of satisfaction, but now that the brother himself has not been harmed at all, he has been getting stronger. I hope the author will pay more attention to it🥺

Personally happy: No CP*Lone Wolf*Rebirth*Revenge*Apocalyptic Survival Game*Mining*Start with a 1 cubic space*Space can be upgraded*Non-Madonna*Microgram type*Barrage (blocked by props in the later stage)*Slight sand sculpture The contrast is cute (personal feeling) (like the title, obviously super strong but too cautious) (I say sorry, but then strike without mercy, I think it is super cute) (I think the underground survival system is also quite interesting, hahaha, congratulations) Personal highlights: Some dungeons will form teams * There are a few stinking men in the article many times * The heroine always asks others to open boxes because she is lucky, and sometimes gives half of the things to others... (However, the heroine seems to have found a prop that can reverse luck in the later period, but it can only be used for a few seconds and is one-time use)