One Piece: Transformed into Kurumi Tokisaki, I Become an Admiral in the Marines

Judging from the current situation, this book still has great potential. It is not the traditional "following the boat" that has been criticized. Some settings and plots are arranged reasonably, and it will not make people feel uncomfortable. As for whether it is suitable? At least I think it is more in line with the public's taste, and there is no poisonous point so far. Although I have not read the original work of One Piece, I have also read a lot of fan fiction, and a few of them have made me feel less boring and boring like this book. Of course, this is only from my perspective, at least in my opinion. Finally, I still hope that the author can continue writing. After all, I like the current content of this book very much, and I look forward to seeing the subsequent development; come on~ The author of Ke Ke Di is greatly 👍

It's good to read, I followed 90 chapters in one night 🤭 Become a Hundred, Don't Follow the Ship, Navy (not soft-hearted) The plot is fast-paced, the logic is smooth, and the interaction with teammates is good. The writing is slightly lacking but it's okay, but be aware that when there are more teammates, it is easy to have problems such as the proportion of character space and the combat power of teammates. There is room for improvement in the narrative, writing style, and emotional scheduling. The current full score is a great help to the author. I hope I can stick to it [Blow kiss]

It's been a while since anyone wrote about Kuang San, come on!

1: The timeline is confusing, this can be regarded as a parallel world 2: The pace is too fast after joining the navy. Some places can be more detailed. Three: It's too taken for granted. It's the author's great effort. Four: After reading more than 80 chapters, I felt like I was wearing a navy pirate novel, with no organization or discipline. Generally speaking, there are no poisonous points, but I can't go into details. It's a good choice when I'm short of books.

You can read it. If you can listen to the book and work, you can pass the test here. The author should describe the villain more. The villain doesn't have any story background. You can basically explain what the villain did in one sentence. Those who haven't watched One Piece will probably be brushed off by the protagonist just like the NPC.

I have read more than 20 chapters so far, and I have already made two best friends. I remembered that the introduction mentioned flirting with girls, and I would like to remind the author not to engage in multi-girl ambiguity, otherwise the book will easily be 404ed. It is almost a matter of sooner or later. Don't violate the prohibition of the river crab master, I still want to see the ending.

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It's okay, but it doesn't have the same feeling as in the anime

A good subject, I hope the author can stick to it and write well! Come on come on!

I feel like this book is suitable for those who haven't read One Piece but know a little bit about One Piece.