I'm Traveling to the West, and I Apprentice with Brother Monkey at the Beginning.

This book revolves around the story of the time traveler Su Chen and the Monkey King who do not want to learn scriptures and are lackeys in the heaven. It opens a new chapter in the ancient times. The structure, the new characters are not cliche, it is interesting and super good-looking, but the update is too slow. [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

First of all, the author's prehistoric worldview is complete, he has a lot of prehistoric common sense, and the settings are basically correct. It can be said that the prehistoric background is very correct. The content written on this basis is detailed and in-depth, the plot is interesting without losing connotation, the emotions and inner activities are not protracted, the plot is also very exciting and comfortable, and the foreshadowing is deep enough. I think it is a very beautiful prehistoric setting flow. The settings for the prehistoric era are accurate and detailed, in line with the mainstream prehistoric settings, and the plot is not draggy, which is very attractive to me.

What a wonderful experience! A mortal body breaks into the Great Tribulation of Journey to the West, man can conquer heaven! It comes with [Tian Ji Bao Jian] and grows step by step. Use wisdom and human heart to resist the injustice of God. It is not a brainless and invincible article [Like][Like][Like]

It feels okay, a little bit toxic but acceptable, the plot is good, please encourage me. Later on, the protagonist became more and more capable of pretending. It was very uncomfortable to watch. It felt like he was just pretending to be bragging about nothing. Some people thought that the protagonist was so awesome but had no strength and no background. He was just a pretender. No charisma at all. The preface is becoming more and more irrelevant. . . . .

I almost read it in one go. Except for a few poisonous points, the overall readability is high. The author's writing style is experienced and definitely not a newcomer. The setting of the prehistoric era is rich. Now it is getting better. The pattern is wide open. It has basically changed its destiny. Although it is called Journey to the West, it has already been related to Journey to the West. Decoupling is a genre of its own. It is recommended to appear in the later stages to supplement some of the settings and characters of the traditional Journey to the West. The officialdom of Buddhism and Taoism can be described in more detail, the details of some of the main supporting characters can be more detailed and vivid, and the overall development of group portraits will be more vivid.

The subject matter is not eye-catching, but the angle is eye-catching, and the description is very delicate and logical. This is not a work written by ordinary novel lovers. He is an author with relatively good literary background. It's a pleasure to read the latest chapter in one breath. It's so good.

I am not boasting, but the people here are all majestic, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, jade trees facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient in their work, reaching the pinnacle, flying sand and stones, miraculous craftsmanship, inspiring. Na, the candle illuminates the world, you can see thousands of miles clearly, the rain and dew are all over the world, the trees are everywhere, the eagle watches the wolf, the dragon walks and the tiger strides, the hero is majestic, the high-rise building, the benevolence and morality, the suave and selfless, looks like Pan An, is more talented than Song Yu, a pear tree weighs the begonia, You have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have righteousness, you have the breeze on your sleeves, you have good virtues, you have a pure heart, you have a beautiful view of the mountains, you have high sentiments, you have great virtues, you have immeasurable merits, you have good gold and beautiful jade, you have bright virtues, you have a beautiful heart, you have a good heart, you have a noble heart, you have a lot of good things, and you have great virtues. A person with lofty ideals and a benevolent person, a white crane in the clouds, a man of great splendor, a romantic figure, a dragon and a phoenix chick, unparalleled in the world, an unrivaled hero, unrivaled, a branch of Guilin, a man with the sound of cranes, a first-class person, unparalleled in the world, a gold medal, a piece of jade in Kunshan, unparalleled.

Good, good, good, good, good, good description, in case the human body comes step by step, good, good, good, good description, in case the human body comes step by step, this is the foundation of cultivating immortality.

The author has profound literary skills and a rare good book

This is a well-written story in the Journey to the West series, and it has been changed to fit the process of Journey to the West. Monkey's talent and strength have not been cut off. Unlike other Journey to the West works, the monkeys are either belittled or turned into little followers. Or replace it. Or borrow the name of Journey to the West and start a new one.

The sea of ​​books is full of shells, and wisdom can be seen between the lines. The plot is fascinating, the characters are vivid, and the aftertaste is long. It is worth reading again and again.

After reading it for a few hours, I almost finished it. I added a bookshelf to prepare for the book collection. To be honest, there is really nothing sinister about this book. The plot is also very well written. The rating of 7.4 Is really low. It starts from 9 points in my case. I read those low-scoring comments and they were all talking about how Li Shiming appeared so early. I was wondering if the people who commented on these comments had really read the novel. The article did mention a character like Li Chengqian, but I didn't see the author saying that this person had the slightest relationship with Li Shiming. Li Chengqian just played the role of a human warrior who shouted the slogan "Man can conquer nature". What does it have to do with Li Shiming? This is a fantasy novel and not a historical novel, so the characters are inexplicably brought into it.

It's a good book. I thought it was a cool article that follows the crowd, but I didn't expect that the author still has real power. His writing style is smooth and his thinking is clear. Maybe the author's reputation will one day be comparable to that of a powerful person like Sun Wukong.

At present, I personally think it is still readable, although there are some places that are not necessarily related to the main plot. For example, I feel that going to the underworld is very irrelevant, and then the number of words is still too few. Finally, I hope the author will work harder and update to prevent the eunuch from being unfinished.

It's very beautiful. The author has a rich imagination and classic language. It makes me vibrate every time I watch it. I can't stop.

It's good to watch, the protagonist becomes stronger step by step, and there won't be a sudden jump in power due to the plot.

The plot, details, and writing style, I can't see any flaws for the time being. But the story has just begun, the main plot has not yet been developed, and the five points are only temporary. Later, the writing of "Journey to the West" will fall into place, but if we can introduce new ideas. It's worth 5 points.

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It's very exciting, the plot is rich and coherent, and the writing is good.

The writing is good, the rhythm is orderly, the progression is organized, the plot is clear, I love reading it!

A very rare good book, cleverly conceived and wonderful in content, worth reading.

The writing style of this novel is relatively fresh and refined, with a flavor like "Lan Ke Qi Yuan". At the same time, the plot content and settings are more in line with the settings and speculations in ancient times and Journey to the West. In addition, the author's grasp of the rhythm is also good, whether it is fast or slow, and also logical, it is not the kind of brainless and invincible. Overall, I recommend giving it a try (personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, thank you)

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: Start today and never change. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

The person who wrote this is really good and very interesting. At least it makes you want to watch and keep watching.

The writing is very good. The logic is clear and the plots are interlocking. This book is still highly recommended.

The story is well told and engaging.

It feels and makes sense. The protagonist grows up step by step. The plot against the heaven is so interesting to me. Please update it quickly, daddy.

One thing I don't think is right now is how to deal with the woodcutter. When the protagonist was taken away by Bodhi, he didn't go back to say anything. It's understandable. After all, it was the patriarch who took him back directly. But when he left Fangcun Mountain later, didn't he think of taking a look at the woodcutter's family? You must know that the protagonist got the beginning of his journey from the woodcutter. Regardless of how to repay, it is always okay to go and take a look, right?

[Laughing evilly] Calm down and really take a look. 5X presented!