Reborn Boss B, I Slapped the Table Loudly

This novel is okay. As a reader who has been writing for more than 20 years, I started trying to write a novel on a whim for the first time. According to Li Ming, I was an average singer, an average dancer, an average actor, and an average looker. It was my first time to write a novel and my writing style was slightly lacking. What is the synopsis of the story? There is no outline, I just write whatever comes to my mind. Occasionally I get stuck. Even if I hold it in until midnight to write it, I feel it is just average. If I see some average chapters, it goes without saying that I am stuck and can't continue editing. Please forgive me. I love tomatoes. Tomatoes are super delicious, especially the yellow ones, but tomatoes won't let me. The ratings just came out. Please feel free to read it. I missed the title of the book in the post bar before. There are similar competitors and I deliberately left a negative review.

The story is not bad. The author may be writing for the first time, so he should remember to use dialogue to promote it. Don't use the author to describe it, use the plot characters to interpret it. Don't forget to describe details, scene atmosphere, expressions, etc.

It's okay. It's like telling a story, but there's no sense of immersion. The author needs to work harder [laughs][laughs]

I've read more than 20 chapters and it's pretty good. Now I see Big B thinking about ways to launder money. When he thinks of money laundering, he means making movies. It would be good to run a game arcade. The revenue is huge, so it should be possible to launder money. Moreover, making games in the 1980s was still very profitable, especially games like Pokémon Tetris, which can really be passed down to the family.

Big cheers for the author

Not bad, it's really a cool article

It's not healthy to laugh heartily and put an urn in a home-cooked restaurant. 😂😝😛🤣😌🤣😝🙃🙃😂😛😛🤣😂

The first time I saw Big Boss, I got excited. Every time I read other novels, the whole family was buried.

Like looking at a notepad [face covering] Overall pretty good

Why is the score so low? It looks pretty good.

Except for the lack of punctuation marks, the Hong Kong dramas I have watched are pretty good.

Super high yield, old sow, beautiful😏

Come on come on come on come on Come on come on come on come on

This book is awesome This is the boss who does whatever he wants

Beautiful and worth recommending.

Beautiful and worth recommending.

This sacred book has won my heart

Yes, Your Majesty, loyal

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good

It looks good, but there are too many women [shocked] jealous

The front is okay. I hope I can watch the back.

It's pretty good, but it's not the complete version. I don't like to keep up with updates, so I'll check it out again in a few months [laughs]

It's not ugly, nor is it plain, but it's okay to waste time. See the world from a third perspective.

The best Hong Kong movie novel I have ever read.

It's a very interesting and refreshing article. You can read it without thinking and just have a good time.

It looks good, very good-looking, come on! ! !

What a magical book

It's so fun to write, why the rating isn't high? It's because I'm afraid of being criticized, you know

Good, good, good