After staying up all night to finish the original Swallowed Star, Lin Yichen opens his eyes and finds himself transmigrated to Jiangnan Base City, overrun by monsters. It is a brutal world where humanity huddles behind its fortifications to survive, and even a War General Level monster can tear an ordinary person to pieces.
At this critical moment, the [God-Level Lottery System] binds to him! His beginner draw gives him the "Eternal Body (Incomplete Version)," making his physical form immune to attacks below Star Level and instantly unlocking his genetic lock to Planetary Level. From the moment he transmigrates, he is already on par with Earth's strongest, Hong and Thunder God!
Clear out a Sabertooth Beast nest, and he gets two more draws. Repel an attack by a Nine-Headed Hydra Dragon, and he draws a Universe Level Cloud-Touching Vine sapling. Venture beyond Earth into the Qianwu Starfield, and he casually draws an Immortal Level weapon and insights into the Chaos Stele. At the Genius Battle, he uses the Eternal Laws unlocked by his draws to crush the genius contestants of the Demon Race and Machine Race, claiming the championship!
From an unknown nobody in an Earth Base City, to an Immortal War God who dominates the universe, and then to the Eternal Emperor who ends the World Beast Crisis and commands the Primal Universe, Lin Yichen's path to invincibility is paved entirely by lottery draws!
Can you take a look at what you are writing?
I don't understand what's written at all.
It's too fake. If you adapt it, tell me the comparison of the realms you changed. Don't say anything. It will make people feel the same as the original work. Fighting on several planets will be 666.
The changed gp is not
Let's clarify the realm first, okay? I can't stand it like this.
Unreasonable and a bit mindless.