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Shimura Kaede felt very uncomfortable after traveling to Naruto's world in a daze.
Who doesn't know that this world is very dangerous.
Outside there is a raging war in the ninja world, inside there is Konoha F4 constantly acting like a monster, there is an old and immortal Dance King squatting in the corner, and there is a black Zetsu who wants to save his mother.
Etc? !
The pot shadow is actually my father?
That's so scary! In Konoha, I am the only one who can shadow people, so how can I let others shadow me? !
My father Danzo has the final say whether Konoha will be in chaos or not!
What's even more surprising is that Shimura Kaede also awakened his golden finger.
It's just that this golden finger is a bit weird...
Shimura Kaede: "Wait a minute! What do you mean that I have all five attributes? Is it a five-system miscellaneous spiritual root?!"
Reader comments
It's a pretty good Naruto fanfic, but it's a pity that the main heroine is Lin. She's much prettier than her (especially the camouflage on her face that looks like a tattoo). If Kurenai Yuhi is around the protagonist, she will just go with the flow and give it to Asma.
There's nothing wrong with the plot. It looks like it's going to be a single female protagonist. Nohara Rin. I still prefer to watch the protagonist show off, fight against each other, and have multiple female protagonists. And the protagonist gives me a look that I only like Nohara Rin. The high-looking female characters in the same batch, such as Yuhi Kurenai and Yuzuki Yuyan, have almost no drama, so it's not a good watch. This is just the reason why I like to watch Harem. The protagonist's character is modest (). Use actions and expressions to achieve something. The protagonist also wants to change some historical trajectories by himself. He has a clear mind and knows that the three generations of brainwashing are powerful. His father is relatively dark. After all, he is an adult soul. Another point is that I don't recommend that the author fix some of the shortcomings of traditional protagonists, such as nosebleeds when looking naked, or being afraid of being unable to exert your strength. Just perform normally.
A divine book! It is truly a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry after reading it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is the reincarnation of the four great classics, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins"? It lost a bit of literary talent in front of it! "Dou Po"? In front of it, it owes a little bit. Connotation! "Zhu Xian"? In front of it, there are wisps of feelings! "Shading the Sky"? In front of it, there is a third of imagination! "Buddha"? In front of it, half of the layout is missing! This is a classic that has not been seen in a hundred years on the Internet! The greatest literary masterpiece of the 21st century! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Kong Mo Laozhuang, Shixian Shisheng, Sansu Jiaxuan; from Qin Emperor Hanwu, Tang Zongzu Song Zu, Genghis Khan, to Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle - who has read it and not been amazed? This book by the author is really the writing of heaven and man! The writing is brilliant and the diction is exquisite. It inherits the style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties and promotes the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties. It is profound! It is truly a blessing to read this book in my lifetime! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: If I never see this masterpiece again in the future, what is the point of my life? What is the point of my life?! Fortunately! I made a decision immediately and put it on the bookshelf! Only then can my restless heart find peace for a moment. However! If these masterpieces are covered in dust and the world cannot see them, wouldn't they be a waste of precious treasures and the author's hard work?! After a battle between heaven and man, he finally made up his mind to sacrifice his ego to fulfill the greater self! This book review is dedicated to the world's appreciation of this book. It must be praised again and again, up to the sky, and let the world know it! Walking between the heaven and the earth, the scorching sun and the bright moon are the proof: Is this book enjoyable enough? - Not enough! Traveling across the rivers and lakes, rivers and seas are the proof: Is this book enjoyable? - Not enough! Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoed: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters! Not fast enough! Not enough content! Not enough at all! Come on] [Come on] [Kayou] [Come on] [Come on]
Generally speaking, the writing is okay, and there are no unacceptable bugs. But aside from the setting of Danzo's son, it is just a normal Naruto story with plug-ins, and there are quite a lot of Naruto stories that travel through Danzo and Danzo's son recently. Although there are no problems with the writing, there is nothing outstanding. I still recommend it when you are in a book shortage.
Now that I've watched it, I still think it's pretty good. The main heroine is Rin, and the emotional line is occasionally brought out. The writing is very good, and the daily life is also very funny. The right-hand men are Obito and Kakashi. The male protagonist is the best single spirit root. The wind spirit root makes me laugh. The combat power is not broken. He only opens here in Fengdun. Xiao Gua seems to be pretty good. I won't forget about the harem later on. It's okay to give out benefits. I hope it's still a single heroine and Tonic is too focused on the emotional drama. After all, this is a childhood sweetheart. It's good to mention it in daily life. Now it's written like this and it's very good. The bookshelf is full of them.
The current impression is ok. The protagonist has a system for cultivating immortals but the rewards are all localized. He is not cultivating immortals in the world of Naruto. He and Lin are childhood friends and have just entered school.
The function of the gold finger opening is a bit average but sufficient. I feel that there is still a lot of room for development, so it is considered a slow start.
The number of chapters is a bit small, so it's okay for now. It's not as eye-catching as it is, but it's still pretty good.
PS: I am very optimistic about Obito and Anko in the book
The heroine alone is an immediate five-star rating. After reading the comment section, I felt relieved to watch the heroine alone [laughs]
Fairy tale world, beautiful story
Overall, it's pretty good to watch. However, it started to feel a bit awkward at the end, maybe because of me. The writing is pretty good and not too bad. The plot is pretty good in the early and middle stages, but it's a little less interesting in the later stages. In terms of the heroine, there may be multiple heroines, or there may be a single heroine. In summary, it's okay.
What I'm writing so far is okay.
The world of Naruto is divided into realms and quasi-shadows
Why is Obito a bit gay [facepalm] But it looks like he's in a relationship with Anko
I won't give it five stars. It's of no use even if I give it. I feel like the author is getting smoother as he writes. Of course, Obito and Anko's perverted behavior makes me feel pretty good [laughter]
Have more girls, single girl is no fun
It's pretty good. Why is the rating so low? I recommend it.
I want to see the protagonist learn the wind breath of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, it seems to match well.
If I want to see the protagonist have the ability to breathe wind, the author will reply. Please [send heart]
Very good books to read
If you like it, I will watch it [laughing] [laughing]
This book is really beautiful
I burst into tears, the child was so proud. It would be great if I had this son
It's not bad, it's probably more than 8 points, why is it so low?
Very interesting (Happy Reunion) I don't understand why the rating is so low
It looks great, why is it rated so low?
How could such a beautiful book have such a low rating?
Support the author, the writing is good, but the subsequent ratings will depend on how to deal with people who have an ambiguous relationship with the protagonist.
Full marks! Must have perfect score, chase all the way till now! ❤️Good looking
It's pretty good, just follow your own ideas, it doesn't matter if it's a single heroine or a harem, as long as you can grasp it
The plot from Chapter 58 to Chapter 61 is very curious. When did Jiraiya become a member of Kirigakure Village? Six hundred and sixty-six, the writer was changed without any notice.
It's good to watch. I love watching it. It's the best Naruto multiplayer movie I've watched.
It's a pretty good Naruto fanfic, but it's a pity that the main heroine is Lin. She's much prettier than her (especially the camouflage on her face that looks like a tattoo). If Kurenai Yuhi is around the protagonist, she will just go with the flow and give it to Asma.
There's nothing wrong with the plot. It looks like it's going to be a single female protagonist. Nohara Rin. I still prefer to watch the protagonist show off, fight against each other, and have multiple female protagonists. And the protagonist gives me a look that I only like Nohara Rin. The high-looking female characters in the same batch, such as Yuhi Kurenai and Yuzuki Yuyan, have almost no drama, so it's not a good watch. This is just the reason why I like to watch Harem. The protagonist's character is modest (). Use actions and expressions to achieve something. The protagonist also wants to change some historical trajectories by himself. He has a clear mind and knows that the three generations of brainwashing are powerful. His father is relatively dark. After all, he is an adult soul. Another point is that I don't recommend that the author fix some of the shortcomings of traditional protagonists, such as nosebleeds when looking naked, or being afraid of being unable to exert your strength. Just perform normally.
A divine book! It is truly a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry after reading it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is the reincarnation of the four great classics, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins"? It lost a bit of literary talent in front of it! "Dou Po"? In front of it, it owes a little bit. Connotation! "Zhu Xian"? In front of it, there are wisps of feelings! "Shading the Sky"? In front of it, there is a third of imagination! "Buddha"? In front of it, half of the layout is missing! This is a classic that has not been seen in a hundred years on the Internet! The greatest literary masterpiece of the 21st century! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Kong Mo Laozhuang, Shixian Shisheng, Sansu Jiaxuan; from Qin Emperor Hanwu, Tang Zongzu Song Zu, Genghis Khan, to Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle - who has read it and not been amazed? This book by the author is really the writing of heaven and man! The writing is brilliant and the diction is exquisite. It inherits the style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties and promotes the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties. It is profound! It is truly a blessing to read this book in my lifetime! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: If I never see this masterpiece again in the future, what is the point of my life? What is the point of my life?! Fortunately! I made a decision immediately and put it on the bookshelf! Only then can my restless heart find peace for a moment. However! If these masterpieces are covered in dust and the world cannot see them, wouldn't they be a waste of precious treasures and the author's hard work?! After a battle between heaven and man, he finally made up his mind to sacrifice his ego to fulfill the greater self! This book review is dedicated to the world's appreciation of this book. It must be praised again and again, up to the sky, and let the world know it! Walking between the heaven and the earth, the scorching sun and the bright moon are the proof: Is this book enjoyable enough? - Not enough! Traveling across the rivers and lakes, rivers and seas are the proof: Is this book enjoyable? - Not enough! Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoed: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters! Not fast enough! Not enough content! Not enough at all! Come on] [Come on] [Kayou] [Come on] [Come on]
Generally speaking, the writing is okay, and there are no unacceptable bugs. But aside from the setting of Danzo's son, it is just a normal Naruto story with plug-ins, and there are quite a lot of Naruto stories that travel through Danzo and Danzo's son recently. Although there are no problems with the writing, there is nothing outstanding. I still recommend it when you are in a book shortage.
Now that I've watched it, I still think it's pretty good. The main heroine is Rin, and the emotional line is occasionally brought out. The writing is very good, and the daily life is also very funny. The right-hand men are Obito and Kakashi. The male protagonist is the best single spirit root. The wind spirit root makes me laugh. The combat power is not broken. He only opens here in Fengdun. Xiao Gua seems to be pretty good. I won't forget about the harem later on. It's okay to give out benefits. I hope it's still a single heroine and Tonic is too focused on the emotional drama. After all, this is a childhood sweetheart. It's good to mention it in daily life. Now it's written like this and it's very good. The bookshelf is full of them.
The current impression is ok. The protagonist has a system for cultivating immortals but the rewards are all localized. He is not cultivating immortals in the world of Naruto. He and Lin are childhood friends and have just entered school.
The function of the gold finger opening is a bit average but sufficient. I feel that there is still a lot of room for development, so it is considered a slow start. The number of chapters is a bit small, so it's okay for now. It's not as eye-catching as it is, but it's still pretty good. PS: I am very optimistic about Obito and Anko in the book
The heroine alone is an immediate five-star rating. After reading the comment section, I felt relieved to watch the heroine alone [laughs]
Fairy tale world, beautiful story
Overall, it's pretty good to watch. However, it started to feel a bit awkward at the end, maybe because of me. The writing is pretty good and not too bad. The plot is pretty good in the early and middle stages, but it's a little less interesting in the later stages. In terms of the heroine, there may be multiple heroines, or there may be a single heroine. In summary, it's okay.
What I'm writing so far is okay.
The world of Naruto is divided into realms and quasi-shadows
Why is Obito a bit gay [facepalm] But it looks like he's in a relationship with Anko
I won't give it five stars. It's of no use even if I give it. I feel like the author is getting smoother as he writes. Of course, Obito and Anko's perverted behavior makes me feel pretty good [laughter]
Have more girls, single girl is no fun
It's pretty good. Why is the rating so low? I recommend it.
I want to see the protagonist learn the wind breath of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, it seems to match well. If I want to see the protagonist have the ability to breathe wind, the author will reply. Please [send heart]
Very good books to read
If you like it, I will watch it [laughing] [laughing]
This book is really beautiful
I burst into tears, the child was so proud. It would be great if I had this son
It's not bad, it's probably more than 8 points, why is it so low?
Very interesting (Happy Reunion) I don't understand why the rating is so low
It looks great, why is it rated so low?
How could such a beautiful book have such a low rating?
Support the author, the writing is good, but the subsequent ratings will depend on how to deal with people who have an ambiguous relationship with the protagonist.
Full marks! Must have perfect score, chase all the way till now! ❤️Good looking
It's pretty good, just follow your own ideas, it doesn't matter if it's a single heroine or a harem, as long as you can grasp it
The plot from Chapter 58 to Chapter 61 is very curious. When did Jiraiya become a member of Kirigakure Village? Six hundred and sixty-six, the writer was changed without any notice.
It's good to watch. I love watching it. It's the best Naruto multiplayer movie I've watched.