When Ultimate Spider-Man Became a Member of the Original Avengers

It's been a long time since I've seen a fanfic that fits the character so well [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]. What others write is not Peter. What they write is purely a Chinese... Chinese people put on the skin of a Spider-Man, and it's particularly ugly. This book is super good-looking. If you like Spider-Man, you must read it👀 [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I highly recommend it. I have read many Marvel fics, and this is the best one I have seen so far. The writing style is not that of a local Chinese online novel, but has an American flavor. The overall Spider-Man character doesn't deviate. I feel that many people who write about Marvel are still writing in the shell of the Internet city, and they also have some of the author's own habits, but this book does not. Most of the people who write about Marvel are still in the same fantasy and urban style as the third generation, and their speech is not in line with the urinary attitude of Americans. There are some who have changed it a little bit, but they still can't write the dialogue that the author describes, and most of the dialogue they write is still a bit too exaggerated. Come on, author, keep writing

The Ultimate Bug animation is very good, with teachers and teammates. I hope we won't repeat the misfortunes of other bugs and be misunderstood by others [crying][crying][crying] Will you write about teammates from the Buggyuan universe?

This book is really great. Not only does the time travel seem very reasonable, there is nothing that makes Spider-Man make some Chinese jokes, and there is nothing like a Chinese wearing Spider-Man's holster. There are basically no OOC people, and the small theater is also very cute and has the personality of Spider-Man. On the contrary, I feel like I'm watching the sequel to Ultimate Spider-Man. I accidentally finished reading it in two days. I'm really looking forward to the author's update. [Top post][top post][top post]

It's really super good-looking, just like the Spider-Man in the animation. Two Q-version little spiders will suddenly appear and perform a small theater there. It's so cute. It feels like watching Ultimate Spider-Man before. The author will update it quickly!

It's great, I like Spider-Man the most. It's very restorative. The small theater has come out. I personally think that Aunt May can be taken over. Didn't Miles settle down in the world of Spider-Man with his mother later on.

The best serialized Spider-Man fanfic. The characters are not OOC, and there are no confusing plots. Everything is logical and has conflicts and stories. The core of Spider-Man has not been lost, not to mention anything else, good book, quick update

Very nice! It's very restorative. I've read 50 chapters so far and there's nothing poisonous about it. Well worth a read, especially for book lovers who like Spider-Man! The author's description of Ultimate Spider-Man is very restored, both the original characters and the character creation are top-notch. In particular, the loneliness that Spider-Man feels when he first travels to the new universe is very compelling. Of course there are some shortcomings. First of all, the author describes for the first time that the devil spider and the angel spider appear when Spider-Man is thinking in the original book. The author's description is very vivid and the interaction is very interesting, but the time of appearance is wrong. These two should appear in some funny situations, such as if there is a rebel who offers good conditions to lure Spider-Man to join, or when Nick Fury promises Spider-Man to join Rocket Pack, etc. Although it never affects Spider-Man's choice, it can increase the interest. But it shouldn't appear when Spider-Man is contemplating some major issues and directions. The two first appearances in the article are actually discussing whether the bad guys should be caught in advance? It really ruins the image. And Ultimate Spider-Man has a characteristic that whenever it's time to be serious, there won't be any wisecracks or anything that ruins the atmosphere. Secondly, there was the scene where Iron Man stood up for Spider-Man after he blew himself up. The incoherent description of Spider-Man being moved was too much, and it felt like he had directly degenerated into the Dutch version of Spider-Man. This is obviously Spider-Man who has penetrated the final plot, so his psychological maturity shouldn't be so low? It's really too much to be moved to the point of being incoherent. Finally, here is my little opinion. I hope the author can read more about the small theater in the reviews of book friends. I feel that many people have written very well and restored the characters very well. Consider adding corresponding descriptions. In the end, no matter what, this book is a very well-written masterpiece! I recommend everyone to check it out! I hope the author can stick with it! @Ah [Learned][Learned][Learned]

The degree of restoration of the protagonist's character is particularly high, and the performance of other supporting characters is also sufficient. It is recommended to read it together with several comments. There are some psychological descriptions of the scenes by book friends, and it also restores the famous scenes of Ultimate Spider-Man. It's an excellent Marvel fan work, but it's a pity that it appeared at the wrong time, but it's definitely worth a read, especially those who have read Ultimate Spider-Man. After reading it, you will only feel that it fits the character and will not ruin the character.

It's a great article, it's really, really, really good. I feel like anyone who has watched the Ultimate Spider-Man anime can read this article, because it really shows the character of Spider-Man to the fullest, and the little theaters are also very good. In fact, when I saw the announcement of Spider-Man's identity from another universe, I originally thought there would be a carousel of excuses, but this author's writing is really good, very detailed!

It's amazing. It fits the animation very well. When watching it, you seem to have already seen the picture in your mind. The dialogues of the characters are also automatically soundtracked in your mind. You can't stop watching it. It feels like you are really watching animation. It gives people a feeling that this is how it should be.

It's not the writing style of a traditional online novel, it's more in line with the description of American comics... I don't know if my description is appropriate, but that's how this novel feels to me. Among them, I think Spider-Man Peter Parker's tone of voice is more in line with the chatty style in the original work. No language in various Chinese contexts is used. So far, it's a very good fanfic. Well worth a look.

This is a Spider-Man story that makes people feel at peace after reading it. In the author's writing, he is so mature that it's heartbreaking, yet young but never immature. He is not a perfect hero, but it is in the ordinary and heavy burden that he supports the three words "security" Even if there are storms ahead, he will leave his back to the world and his tenderness to those who need it. A real hero is never omnipotent, but one who knows how difficult it is and still chooses to stand in the light

A very classic image of Spider-Man is that friendly neighborhood spider, talkative, sad, sunny, and responsible. He has matured, but it makes people feel more distressed. He has become everyone's senior, a model for learning, and has a leadership spirit. He teaches others how to be a superhero, and others will warm him. Spider-Man is really good. He has gone through ups and downs, and he is still a young man when he comes back.

Someone finally wrote my favorite Spider-Man, and it would be better if they put more effort into developing the character.

It's well written, but it's a pity about the Venom. I thought I could make a Venom suit, but I didn't expect to kill the Venom directly [face covering]

It can be said that he is one of the few Spider-Mans on Tomato who is most in line with the personality. The quality is as high as that of ao3 fanfics. I hope the author can continue to update until the end and not stop updating. I will give you some money as a reward. I hope it will be useful [please update]

The writing is very good, and the most important thing is Spider-Man... The Spider-Man in this book is a truly good person and even a saint... Although there is still a bit of the ultimate spider's psychological complaints, he seems to be much more mature in other aspects. To a certain extent, the Spider-Man in this book is a banner of the superheroes in this book, and his personality is ridiculously charming. Especially Spider-Man's help to the city after the war in New York, and the city's feedback to him. From here, the Spider-Man of this book really stands up.

The most interesting thing about this book is the readers' spontaneous little theater in the commentary. It fits the character of Ultimate Spider very well.

This book is really immersive, and it's hard to stop reading it. Until I saw the latest chapter, I felt that the characters in it all fit their own thinking patterns. When I read the content of Peter at Ben's house, I almost wanted to cry😭. The sadness and pain in it were conveyed, and I also liked the interaction between the characters in it. I hope this book can enrich me as soon as possible so that I can enjoy reading it all at once 🥰 Thank you to the author!

The writing skills are profound, the knowledge level is high, the plot design is interesting, the characters are vividly created, and the emotions are strong. The little spider is really perfect. He is smart, knowledgeable, has a strong sense of value, and his language is humorous. Not only does it make people feel cute, but it also makes people feel that he deserves to be loved [Blow kiss]

This is the ultimate insect fun! The inner little theater where the ultimate bug talks wisecracks is not OOC at all. The original animation has a strong flavor. I highly recommend it! The writing may be relatively white, but it is completely readable√ …I felt something was wrong later on, it felt very strange.

Who knew that after reading Ultimate Spider-Man, I felt at the end of my rope and thought I had nothing to eat, but Yang Persimmon suddenly recommended me a book called Thunder Good Food. The character design is quite appropriate and very faithful to the original work. Can the author add more funny plots?

The beginning is particularly good, and it looks very good and has the feel of the original. The dialogues between the characters are very consistent with the characters. I stayed up late and read more than a hundred chapters, but the later chapters, the more I felt that it was not right. The writing method of the article has changed. I feel that it is because of the use of AI. Spider-Man does not have so many witticisms. The dialogue between the characters is less than before, and most of it is used to describe items and environments. But I still recommend it because this Spider-Man is very cute.

Very good [Chigua] I hope there is a description of Ultimate Spider-Man's teammates. Also, make sure Ultimate Spider-Man has a good ending.

It's so beautiful [Adore][Adore][Adore], I really like the Ultimate Bug, it's so cute and cute, the characters are very restored [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss], and the plot is very coherent and exciting, the author's writing is very good ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉﾞ❀~

Highly recommended. This is the first time I watched Marvel with the Ultimate Bug. The characters are surprisingly well matched. The author may not have realized it in the early stage, but in the middle period, the special time-stop theater of the Ultimate Bug has been added, and some people in the comment area will show the small theater to watch. It is particularly interesting, but I don't know if there is a CP at the moment. If you can, I hope there is not, because I think this bug is still from the Ultimate Universe after all. If there is a CP, I hope to be reminded.

Great, great, really full of sunshine and happiness, unique to the heroic charm of Little Spider. It fits the character very well, and there are currently no problems with it such as combat strength and personality. Anyway, the little spider in this one has me hooked once again. [Like][Like][Like]

It's just a novel and the visuals are so strong. I believe this story will be very popular when made into a TV series.

Very good, the character of Spider-Man is very stable and the story is great. Keep up the good work, author! ... I started using AI probably after Chapter 110, and it became more and more intense later on. Of course the story is still good, but it's really weird to read and a bit unbearable.