[Single heroine + soul exchange + cool writing + enterprising heroine]
Because Chen Chang's qualifications are too poor, he has been cultivating immortals for fifty years and cannot break through the foundation building. The new junior sister in the sect is the top qualified immortal spirit body that can only be seen in the world of immortality in ten thousand years.
Chen Chang: Junior sister, senior brother has only a few days left, and now he will pass on his lifelong skills to you. It is normal for you to let go of your spirit and feel a little dizzy.
Mo Yiyi: Senior brother, you have finally been fooled!
Reader comments
Is the demon king's body, which has been cultivated for tens of thousands of years, used as a toy to give to an old man with low qualifications in qi refining to play soul exchange? It doesn't make sense [face covering].
Can't the Demon Lord reveal whatever cultivation level he wants to reveal? Why bother exchanging bodies with the soul of an ant whose life is numbered to cover up his cultivation level [face covering].
I advise you to revise and polish your logic. If you have a good mind, make a good outline before writing. People are like each other, and demons are like monsters. You must be able to convince readers to accept your logic and setting, so that they can attract people to read [OK].
Forcibly subduing the mind, killing the soul to see if it is still under control, the demon king himself does not want to be manipulated by the male protagonist
Ahem, I am a friend of the author. Let me add a setting. The real Demon Lord is dead. The fairy spirit body was actually taken by the Demon Lord. However, during the process of snatching the body, the fairy-level ban was triggered, which caused him to be wiped out. The original owner was influenced to think that he was the Demon Lord. In fact, he was still an immature little girl, so what he did was a bit ridiculous [laughter]
Since the bodies have been swapped, why does the protagonist still use "he"?
It's okay, just pick it up in the front, but it's better in the back. The logic is still self-consistent. It needs some poison resistance. Please update more.
After looking at the names, I read two more. It's okay. It would be great if he had a double child or a nine-life marriage. The female devil did not get the male lead and became a black man. She exchanged identities in this life and locked him up, not only not letting him but also not cheating. Let the male protagonist be a good boy and girl.
Is the demon king's body, which has been cultivated for tens of thousands of years, used as a toy to give to an old man with low qualifications in qi refining to play soul exchange? It doesn't make sense [face covering]. Can't the Demon Lord reveal whatever cultivation level he wants to reveal? Why bother exchanging bodies with the soul of an ant whose life is numbered to cover up his cultivation level [face covering]. I advise you to revise and polish your logic. If you have a good mind, make a good outline before writing. People are like each other, and demons are like monsters. You must be able to convince readers to accept your logic and setting, so that they can attract people to read [OK].
Forcibly subduing the mind, killing the soul to see if it is still under control, the demon king himself does not want to be manipulated by the male protagonist
Ahem, I am a friend of the author. Let me add a setting. The real Demon Lord is dead. The fairy spirit body was actually taken by the Demon Lord. However, during the process of snatching the body, the fairy-level ban was triggered, which caused him to be wiped out. The original owner was influenced to think that he was the Demon Lord. In fact, he was still an immature little girl, so what he did was a bit ridiculous [laughter]
Since the bodies have been swapped, why does the protagonist still use "he"?
It's okay, just pick it up in the front, but it's better in the back. The logic is still self-consistent. It needs some poison resistance. Please update more.
After looking at the names, I read two more. It's okay. It would be great if he had a double child or a nine-life marriage. The female devil did not get the male lead and became a black man. She exchanged identities in this life and locked him up, not only not letting him but also not cheating. Let the male protagonist be a good boy and girl.