The Me Now Can Contact Her in the Past

5 Stars, the subject matter is very good, time and space paradox, Everything that happens is destined to happen. Even if you want to change the past now, it is actually because of this idea that you become what you are now. Everything the protagonist does now has already been realized. If the protagonist feels that he has influenced the sudden birth of a certain idea now, these are already destined, so there is no time and space paradox.

The subject matter is good. At Chapter 22, the story of the first female protagonist is over. In Chapter 21, the male protagonist thinks it is the thinking of the game🤔. It should be brought in by the author himself. Some people feel that it is sugary. How should I put it? The reason for feeling sugary may be because of the story of the first female protagonist. The narration is either very rich and full, or the content is too empty. Some irrelevant things have been removed. The plot that really describes the male and female protagonists may only be about 15-16 chapters. There are too few links in the novel about the emotional advancement of the male and female protagonists. What I feel after reading it is that the male protagonist is constantly pushing me. The commercial development of the heroine, and the lack of content about daily plots to promote emotional development, will make people feel that the inner struggle of the male protagonist after the first part of the development is just moaning, inexplicable, and self-motivated [face covering]. If it is correct, the second part of the development should be the same. With the same problem, if the author wants to make the reader's experience better, he can try to add some daily links, and he can also add some settings, such as entities entering the cultivation (it is known that it is not a game at this time) and adding some interactions (you can learn from some sweet articles). That's all. Come on, update!

Currently 54, the writing is really good, the writing is very good, and the sense of substitution is strong. The plot is probably about the protagonist cultivating a goddess in the past through the game, and then the protagonist drives a big car in reality [laughing] More, not enough. There are no shortcomings. The subject matter is novel and the sense of immersion is strong. To put it bluntly, the updates are too slow [angry][angry]

It's quite good to watch, the true feelings are revealed, and the plot is interlocking. I look forward to the day when the male protagonist hugs the beauty and returns home [face covering], but there are too few chapters. The current situation is just a kiss. As for the deeper development, we will have to look at it later. There will be some red-themed sensitive settings in the middle, which will deviate greatly from the overall style. If you don't like this kind of movie, you can skip watching it because it will affect the perception relatively speaking. But if you like it, it will be fine. The protagonist is still very patriotic.

The subject matter is good, but it has a childish flavor

Birds of a Feather is awesome. Although it is still a harem story in essence, with the addition of goddess cultivation and wormhole space, and the author's rigorous writing style (I didn't find any bugs after reading it halfway through), it is a completely different subject matter and style. It is very interesting.

A very good book in this genre. It's really interesting to do some cool things in time paradox. The combination of picking up girls across time and space + supporting yourself in the future is really interesting. The most important thing is that he is not pure yet. The present affects the future, and the future also affects the past. It becomes more interesting after quantum entanglement. Simply speaking, some logic or writing style are actually somewhat lacking, but the author's surging emotional rendering covers these small flaws very well. Overall, it is a very good novel. The biggest problem now is that it is not written so fast. When the number of words increases, the evaluation will be much higher.

The author's writing style is so good and his experience is so rich. He wrote about my addiction to the Internet in detail. Although he knew it was fake, he still put a lot of energy and emotion into it. Not only female gamers, but also many good brothers who accompany you. They are very good at comforting people. Many of them are small bosses. I am just a student. When I gave birth to a child, alas, it was like the mission was over, everything was over, what an unforgettable experience. After graduation, I accidentally went to Shanghai-Shenzhen Index University and was deeply educated. This university in society has never been short of themes and stories. The author is so awesome, write more and more [crying][crying][crying] I was wrong, it must have been, my hand slipped while I was sleeping [crying] [crying]! So pretty! Big cheers for the author! ! #@｝*：｜

A good book does not need to be evaluated [laughing] (The emotions are very delicate, the psychology of the protagonist is well portrayed, and from the initial dismissal, I gradually discovered that the game is similar to a time paradox. Come on, author! [Laughing])

Discovering a fairy grass in its growth stage, the theme of space-time paradox requires a very ingenious author to master. The complicated cause and effect involved will be more interesting than the plot. I hope the author can work hard and not explain everything by the deus ex machina in the end.

I read all the chapters in one go. It is really well written. This is the first time I have read so many novels and want to do literary criticism on the text. It is really eye-catching. Let me talk about the overall review first. The world view is very complete and it has not fallen into the cliche of monster hunting and upgrading or the trap of system invincibility. I think it can be said to be a first-rate masterpiece among Tomato novels. Advantages: The fictional world is handled very well, and the emotional drama of each heroine is very delicate. Many authors usually have a few fixed characters when writing multiple heroines: the royal sister, the sweet girl, the aloof, and the yandere. Probably to satisfy the XP of different readers. Although the multiple female protagonists in this book are fixed characters, each of them can be called a heroine and have their own personality. They and the male protagonist use their actions to interpret what love is: soul mates. The emotional scenes are really delicately portrayed, and it's not a mindless harem story. There are currently no major problems with the logic of the entire book, and the structure is also detailed and appropriate. I feel like the author is holding back something big, like The Flash, with several male protagonists existing in one time and space at the same time. Come on, author! Disadvantages: There are too many female protagonists. I hope not to add too many female protagonists, only one or two at most. The current logic has changed somewhat towards chaos. I hope the main line can be revealed as soon as possible: why the author did these things. I hope it can be written in a more profound way, but of course it shouldn't be too grand, and it shouldn't end with cultivating immortality and saving the world, as that would be too cliché. Finally, the theme of Time and Space Paradox➕System Development is very novel. I hope the author will work hard and write well, focusing on quality rather than quantity, so as not to disappoint the trust and expectations of readers.

This is the best multi-heroine I've ever seen. I have read a lot of heroines, and without exception, they are attractive at the beginning, but I don't want to watch them later. There are so many heroines that the author can't remember them. Hope this can be followed to the end.

This book is very similar to the "Legend Administration" written by members of the Insect Killing Team. They both unfold the narrative of the story in a time-space paradox. Personally, I feel that this subject matter is very novel and can capture the readers' hearts (at least mine). Among the thousands of similar online articles, this subject matter is very novel. I personally recommend that you study the details of the writing of the Insect Killing Team, the effort in foreshadowing, how to dig out this foreshadowing in the later chapters, etc. Anyway, please give it a try, author. I like this book very much and look forward to it.

It's very interesting. I've been watching it since last night and now at 6 o'clock in the morning [facepalm], I've been chasing it to the latest chapter. The main writing is good and the foreshadowing keeps exploding like landmines. It also seems like it's free of money and keeps burying it [facepalm], which makes people want to keep chasing [facepalm]

The writing is very good and the subject matter is novel. It travels to the past to help change the present, and even starts to help the present self in the future. Maybe the expectations were too high at the beginning. I feel that except for the first heroine who impressed me deeply, the following ones are a bit simplified. When I read the first heroine, I have already started the third one. The individual depictions are not particularly clear, but it does not affect the overall perception. It's just that I personally read a lot and have a lot of time. I started to be a bit picky.

Except for the awkward cliché of cuckolding an ex-girlfriend at the beginning, it can be called a masterpiece, but I watched it too early. I waited until 800,000 words to read it, and I had to rush for more updates just after the suspense was laid out. It is very similar to a certain previous book. The writing is not as good as that one, but I think this one was fun to read. That one was filled with girls who were pretending to be saints, but this one is much more fun. The goddess you raised is your own, and it is clear that you will have a multi-female harem.

Although the logical relationship is not very clear, it does not affect the fact that it is a good story! This is one of the few books on Tomato that brought tears to my eyes when I read it! What an amazing book! !

It's so beautiful. It's a new type of subject matter that I've never seen before. I hope the author can keep writing and get better and better [love] [love] [love] [like] [like] [like] I hope the author can update it soon, it's not enough. If you don't update, I will send you the blade [smile][smile][smile]

It looks good. There is still a connection between the two heroines in the past time and space.

This is the best book I have read in the past few years. I have read more than 60 chapters now. I hope the author can write better and better. Don't be poisonous or collapse. After all... It is very rare to find such a touching book nowadays. Let me add that now that I have seen Chapter 186, it is not broken or poisonous. It is just that the foreshadowing is a bit big and a bit too much. It is the author's ability that is tested. Come on, while ensuring the quality, update more if you can. Quality comes first. I will reward you. Come on!

It's very cool. Just by looking at the name, you can tell it's a cool article. But the logic contained in it is very unique, and basically every part can be closed-looped. I was thinking about it some time ago, if it were me, what would I write? And then came the very difficult answer. Because there is too much preliminary preparation work to do, and attention must be paid to the degree of closed loop and the personalities of various characters. The author has "a lot" of practical experience, and I mean the little things in life. That's why I can write such rich articles.

The subject matter is very novel. After watching Lin Ruoxuan's mission, I felt very energetic and had a sense of immersion. However, I couldn't stand Su Qianran's constant chatter afterward. I immediately crossed out Chapter 71 when I saw it. It was still a bit toxic. Su Qianran always came to ruin the atmosphere.

I only commented after reading about 20 chapters. The characters are flesh and blood, the details are well described, and the emotional value is full. The author's writing skills are very good. Tomato didn't recommend this book to me earlier. It seems to be very good so far. I will read it now and look forward to the real-person reading version being online. I will listen to it again when the time comes. I hope the author won't dig too many holes later and get himself into it. Each character is so fully described and the process is so profound. Don't give a knife to any of them. Adults don't have to make choices. They have to take them all. If the law doesn't allow it, just go buy an island and live the dream life of a shameless and impetuous man. This is very reasonable. I won't accept refutation. Don't force me to beg you.

The setting is very interesting, girlfriend development plan, worldly tribulation, marriage, hahaha, now that I have seen it, I can give 9.5 Points to the previous stories. It is very interesting and interesting, the plot is simple, and it is not easy to read.

Awesome, awesome. The timeline is the best among the books I have read so far. The logic is clear, the characters are fleshed out, and most importantly, the foreshadowing before and after is just right. Don't miss this book!

The male protagonist makes a counterattack at the beginning, holding the development system to unlock various goddesses, including soft and cute sweet girls, cool and cool sisters, and vivid and unflattering characters. The development line is delicate, sweet and burning, the emotions are naturally warmed up without being blunt, the Shura field is exciting [laughing] (actually there is no Shura field, there are even many people [laughing]) but not bloody, the villain is very satisfying to slap in the face, the plot is compact and has no irritation, the goddess is a billion points wonderful, the more you watch, the more you get addicted.

After reading novels for more than 20 years, there are very few books that make me have the urge to read them. This book is indeed more in line with my aesthetic taste. It's a pity that it's not enough. I hope the author can work hard. I have collected it. Also, this score is at least among the top three of similar plots. The score of 9.3 Is not excessive. Why is it so low?

This is the first time I have read a book and given it 5 stars. Apart from some logical flaws, there are no other shortcomings. I cannot say that it can be compared with the top novels, but I would like to rate it as the top among niche novels. Brothers, they look good, you can take a look [laughing]

Five stars, the protagonist and the development characters achieve each other, the time and space reincarnation is better, the plot control and character creation are also better.

Currently, I am writing about Officer Wen. Looking at it now, the timeline spans a lot. Judging from this description, the game must be upgraded. The heroine from the Republic of China should be able to wear it or wear it for a short time. From this point of view, the female protagonist in the National Master period is relatively behind, she should be the second to last? The worst thing is the academician and the female CEO Zhou in the West. Both of them are born before you are born, and you are old when you are born. A bit miserable. The female general is actually better. In special times, there is more of a teacher-student relationship rather than a male-female relationship. In the mid-term, there should be a process of mental growth of the male protagonist. It's good not to delve too deeply into the time paradox. It's a cool novel that simulates the urban dragon king and has too many elements to read.