Now I Can Contact Her in the Past

5 Stars, the subject matter is very good, time and space paradox, Everything that happens is destined to happen. Even if you want to change the past now, it is actually because of this idea that you become what you are now. Everything the protagonist does now has already been realized. If the protagonist feels that he has influenced the sudden birth of a certain idea now, these are already destined, so there is no time and space paradox.

The subject matter is good. At Chapter 22, the story of the first female protagonist is over. In Chapter 21, the male protagonist thinks it is the thinking of the game🤔. It should be brought in by the author himself. Some people feel that it is sugary. How should I put it? The reason for feeling sugary may be because of the story of the first female protagonist. The narration is either very rich and full, or the content is too empty. Some irrelevant things have been removed. The plot that really describes the male and female protagonists may only be about 15-16 chapters. There are too few links in the novel about the emotional advancement of the male and female protagonists. What I feel after reading it is that the male protagonist is constantly pushing me. The commercial development of the heroine, and the lack of content about daily plots to promote emotional development, will make people feel that the inner struggle of the male protagonist after the first part of the development is just moaning, inexplicable, and self-motivated [face covering]. If it is correct, the second part of the development should be the same. With the same problem, if the author wants to make the reader's experience better, he can try to add some daily links, and he can also add some settings, such as entities entering the cultivation (it is known that it is not a game at this time) and adding some interactions (you can learn from some sweet articles). That's all. Come on, update!

Currently 54, the writing is really good, the writing is very good, and the sense of substitution is strong. The plot is probably about the protagonist cultivating a goddess in the past through the game, and then the protagonist drives a big car in reality [laughing] More, not enough. There are no shortcomings. The subject matter is novel and the sense of immersion is strong. To put it bluntly, the updates are too slow [angry][angry]

It's quite good to watch, the true feelings are revealed, and the plot is interlocking. I look forward to the day when the male protagonist hugs the beauty and returns home [face covering], but there are too few chapters. The current situation is just a kiss. As for the deeper development, we will have to look at it later. There will be some red-themed sensitive settings in the middle, which will deviate greatly from the overall style. If you don't like this kind of movie, you can skip watching it because it will affect the perception relatively speaking. But if you like it, it will be fine. The protagonist is still very patriotic.

The subject matter is good, but it has a childish flavor

Birds of a Feather is awesome. Although it is still a harem story in essence, with the addition of goddess cultivation and wormhole space, and the author's rigorous writing style (I didn't find any bugs after reading it halfway through), it is a completely different subject matter and style. It is very interesting.

The author's writing style is so good and his experience is so rich. He wrote about my addiction to the Internet in detail. Although he knew it was fake, he still put a lot of energy and emotion into it. Not only female gamers, but also many good brothers who accompany you. They are very good at comforting people. Many of them are small bosses. I am just a student. When I gave birth to a child, alas, it was like the mission was over, everything was over, what an unforgettable experience. After graduation, I accidentally went to Shanghai-Shenzhen Index University and was deeply educated. This university in society has never been short of themes and stories. The author is so awesome, write more and more [crying][crying][crying] I was wrong, it must have been, my hand slipped while I was sleeping [crying] [crying]! So pretty! Big cheers for the author! ! #@｝*：｜

A very good book in this genre. It's really interesting to do some cool things in time paradox. The combination of picking up girls across time and space + supporting yourself in the future is really interesting. The most important thing is that he is not pure yet. The present affects the future, and the future also affects the past. It becomes more interesting after quantum entanglement. Simply speaking, some logic or writing style are actually somewhat lacking, but the author's surging emotional rendering covers these small flaws very well. Overall, it is a very good novel. The biggest problem now is that it is not written so fast. When the number of words increases, the evaluation will be much higher.

A good book does not need to be evaluated [laughing] (The emotions are very delicate, the psychology of the protagonist is well portrayed, and from the initial dismissal, I gradually discovered that the game is similar to a time paradox. Come on, author! [Laughing])

I read all the chapters in one go. It is really well written. This is the first time I have read so many novels and want to do literary criticism on the text. It is really eye-catching. Let me talk about the overall review first. The world view is very complete and it has not fallen into the cliche of monster hunting and upgrading or the trap of system invincibility. I think it can be said to be a first-rate masterpiece among Tomato novels. Advantages: The fictional world is handled very well, and the emotional drama of each heroine is very delicate. Many authors usually have a few fixed characters when writing multiple heroines: the royal sister, the sweet girl, the aloof, and the yandere. Probably to satisfy the XP of different readers. Although the multiple female protagonists in this book are fixed characters, each of them can be called a heroine and have their own personality. They and the male protagonist use their actions to interpret what love is: soul mates. The emotional scenes are really delicately portrayed, and it's not a mindless harem story. There are currently no major problems with the logic of the entire book, and the structure is also detailed and appropriate. I feel like the author is holding back something big, like The Flash, with several male protagonists existing in one time and space at the same time. Come on, author! Disadvantages: There are too many female protagonists. I hope not to add too many female protagonists, only one or two at most. The current logic has changed somewhat towards chaos. I hope the main line can be revealed as soon as possible: why the author did these things. I hope it can be written in a more profound way, but of course it shouldn't be too grand, and it shouldn't end with cultivating immortality and saving the world, as that would be too cliché. Finally, the theme of Time and Space Paradox➕System Development is very novel. I hope the author will work hard and write well, focusing on quality rather than quantity, so as not to disappoint the trust and expectations of readers.