The Honkai: Star Rail Crew Thought I’d Shattered When I Cosplayed Them All Battle-Damaged

It's a very good book, and I feel like it captures the characters very well. Including the protagonist's initial struggles, I feel like he is a very cute child. I hope everyone can accept this real "him". Now I am going to Xianzhou Luofu. I am looking forward to it. When Jing Yuanyuan is wronged, he will really call me Qingtang Master hahahahahaha. I am looking forward to it! I hope you write better and better!

A particularly beautiful novel that makes you tear up. The male protagonist was miserable, but after coming to the world of iron collapse, he was miserable and healed, trying his best not to let regrets happen. Some of the settings in it are very interesting and logical, and it's really fun to read them with your brain. The relationship between the train family is very sincere and warm, especially Qiong. I feel so heart-warming after watching it. I hope that the male protagonist can have a good ending in the world of iron collapse.

Not bad, not bad. First of all, let me explain that I have never been exposed to this game. I don't know the plot and the characters. The only picture I have seen is the rabbit walking in stride when drawing cards. Because I am lazy, I just find a book and eat a few bites. It feels good so far. The writing is not embarrassing. The description of misunderstandings is not the kind of unnecessary moaning and mind-blowing. The plot can be understood. It is very good. Recommend [Like]

Two words! Nice! ! Woohoo! Finally found someone who wrote this! ! !

Jing Yuanyuan's character is well grasped, with that general temperament and the feeling of having everything under control... And the Shura field between Uncle Yang and Rakshasa, the writing is exactly how I imagined it, funny and vivid

One of my favorite Bengtie fanfics. It's very kind and makes me feel like I'm home. I have read so many novels and played many games. If I could break the dimension, my biggest obsession would be to become a nameless guest. I want to board the star train, I want to be a partner of justice! Don't compromise with fate. I like Chen's story, and at the same time, I sincerely envy him for being able to realize dreams that are beyond our reach. The past also touched me. I have been walking alone in loneliness for more than 20 years, with no relatives or friends. Being treated as an alien, being ostracized and suffering from loneliness. Until... Fate sets off ripples I met my real family. From this, the clouds and mist are cleared away to see the dawn. I look forward to the rest of the story. I sincerely hope that the author will not interrupt the update or make it unfinished! All of us will always be your strongest support, come on!

It's good-looking, and the subject matter is relatively new. But I feel that the portrayal of the Trail Blazers is a bit strange. In my impression, the Trail Blazers should always be a calm type. Even if I see the battle-damaged version of myself, my reaction will not be so intense. Then there is the protagonist. Since they are all We can use the power of the Four Life Charts, and we can use more highlights. Now that we have awakened the memory of life, Mimi should be able to summon it. It will be more interesting to have Mimi in the plot. Xi Lian, who failed to elbow the Iron Curtain, and the battle-damaged version of Zhen, I think it will be very interesting.

It is a vernacular novel with an easy-to-understand structure and rich emotions. There are appropriate changes to the original plot. The time-travelers are willing to change the ending of "destruction" at all costs for their partners (the train family). The logic is roughly consistent with the original game. Although there are plot differences, they are regarded as necessary for the plot... Because of the cosplay war, how can I face the pioneers of the Star Train if I am reborn? What should I do if the original protagonist Qiong is in front of me? I seem to be a fake? What on earth should I do? As a person from the third perspective of an omniscient person, I was surprised but anxious at the same time. When I look back, I seem to have more than just pure love, right? Character interactions, (with a knife) lyrical, hilarious family concept. I hope the author will maintain his bold, careful and innovative path of pioneering new routes [Salute]

Overall, it is a very good book to read, but there are some minor flaws in the emotional handling in the early stages. Take March 7, for example, I feel that March's tears are so worthless, and March is so silly and sweet, I think that to deal with it, the emotions can be handled a little more positively (I haven't read it yet, this is just a brief review after reading the first 100 chapters) and there will be less crying scenes. Overall evaluation: Excellent work! Recommend

Let me first talk about the only point that I cannot accept at the moment, the dialogue between characters: No matter which character it is, there are a lot of ellipses in the words, which looks really weird. During the story of Collapse of Iron, there was no pause every few sentences, which made the tone feel weak. The second thing is that almost everything the protagonist says has ellipses. I remember that the protagonist just can't reveal some information that affects the main plot. He is shy and afraid of society, so he doesn't have to stop half a sentence. There are so many ellipses in each chapter, which looks really awkward (I feel aggrieved, because everyone can obviously finish it in one breath) To add a little more, I feel that Qiong's writing is too tool-like. Except for the extras, almost all of Qiong's descriptions are about caring about the protagonist or accompanying the protagonist. Doesn't he have to do anything alone? Regardless of these, it is still a very good novel. The plot of "Train Crew" makes people feel warm and feels like home (but it is a bit too much. If it can be reflected in some small details, don't worry about it all the time) The plot about Luofu is really surprising. Most of the fans are boring in the early stage, and it gets better in Pinoconi (personal opinion). This Luofu is very exciting. The final battle is more exciting than the original plot, and there is nothing unreasonable at the same time. Both the protagonist and Qiong poked fun at me, both of them are very cute, some small interactions are quite interesting, and they are also very serious when they are serious (this is Qiong in my mind, rather than being crazy everywhere regardless of the occasion) I can see that the dome at the back is pretty well drawn, it doesn't look like a tool anymore (it's more cute)