COS Battle Damage Dome Train Crew Thought I Was Broken

It's a very good book, and I feel like it captures the characters very well. Including the protagonist's initial struggles, I feel like he is a very cute child. I hope everyone can accept this real "him". Now I am going to Xianzhou Luofu. I am looking forward to it. When Jing Yuanyuan is wronged, he will really call me Qingtang Master hahahahahaha. I am looking forward to it! I hope you write better and better!

A particularly beautiful novel that makes you tear up. The male protagonist was miserable, but after coming to the world of iron collapse, he was miserable and healed, trying his best not to let regrets happen. Some of the settings in it are very interesting and logical, and it's really fun to read them with your brain. The relationship between the train family is very sincere and warm, especially Qiong. I feel so heart-warming after watching it. I hope that the male protagonist can have a good ending in the world of iron collapse.

Not bad, not bad. First of all, let me explain that I have never been exposed to this game. I don't know the plot and the characters. The only picture I have seen is the rabbit walking in stride when drawing cards. Because I am lazy, I just find a book and eat a few bites. It feels good so far. The writing is not embarrassing. The description of misunderstandings is not the kind of unnecessary moaning and mind-blowing. The plot can be understood. It is very good. Recommend [Like]

Two words! Nice! ! Woohoo! Finally found someone who wrote this! ! !

Jing Yuanyuan's character is well grasped, with that general temperament and the feeling of having everything under control... And the Shura field between Uncle Yang and Rakshasa, the writing is exactly how I imagined it, funny and vivid

One of my favorite Bengtie fanfics. It's very kind and makes me feel like I'm home. I have read so many novels and played many games. If I could break the dimension, my biggest obsession would be to become a nameless guest. I want to board the star train, I want to be a partner of justice! Don't compromise with fate. I like Chen's story, and at the same time, I sincerely envy him for being able to realize dreams that are beyond our reach. The past also touched me. I have been walking alone in loneliness for more than 20 years, with no relatives or friends. Being treated as an alien, being ostracized and suffering from loneliness. Until... Fate sets off ripples I met my real family. From this, the clouds and mist are cleared away to see the dawn. I look forward to the rest of the story. I sincerely hope that the author will not interrupt the update or make it unfinished! All of us will always be your strongest support, come on!

It's good-looking, and the subject matter is relatively new. But I feel that the portrayal of the Trail Blazers is a bit strange. In my impression, the Trail Blazers should always be a calm type. Even if I see the battle-damaged version of myself, my reaction will not be so intense. Then there is the protagonist. Since they are all We can use the power of the Four Life Charts, and we can use more highlights. Now that we have awakened the memory of life, Mimi should be able to summon it. It will be more interesting to have Mimi in the plot. Xi Lian, who failed to elbow the Iron Curtain, and the battle-damaged version of Zhen, I think it will be very interesting.

It is a vernacular novel with an easy-to-understand structure and rich emotions. There are appropriate changes to the original plot. The time-travelers are willing to change the ending of "destruction" at all costs for their partners (the train family). The logic is roughly consistent with the original game. Although there are plot differences, they are regarded as necessary for the plot... Because of the cosplay war, how can I face the pioneers of the Star Train if I am reborn? What should I do if the original protagonist Qiong is in front of me? I seem to be a fake? What on earth should I do? As a person from the third perspective of an omniscient person, I was surprised but anxious at the same time. When I look back, I seem to have more than just pure love, right? Character interactions, (with a knife) lyrical, hilarious family concept. I hope the author will maintain his bold, careful and innovative path of pioneering new routes [Salute]

Overall, it is a very good book to read, but there are some minor flaws in the emotional handling in the early stages. Take March 7, for example, I feel that March's tears are so worthless, and March is so silly and sweet, I think that to deal with it, the emotions can be handled a little more positively (I haven't read it yet, this is just a brief review after reading the first 100 chapters) and there will be less crying scenes. Overall evaluation: Excellent work! Recommend

Let me first talk about the only point that I cannot accept at the moment, the dialogue between characters: No matter which character it is, there are a lot of ellipses in the words, which looks really weird. During the story of Collapse of Iron, there was no pause every few sentences, which made the tone feel weak. The second thing is that almost everything the protagonist says has ellipses. I remember that the protagonist just can't reveal some information that affects the main plot. He is shy and afraid of society, so he doesn't have to stop half a sentence. There are so many ellipses in each chapter, which looks really awkward (I feel aggrieved, because everyone can obviously finish it in one breath) To add a little more, I feel that Qiong's writing is too tool-like. Except for the extras, almost all of Qiong's descriptions are about caring about the protagonist or accompanying the protagonist. Doesn't he have to do anything alone? Regardless of these, it is still a very good novel. The plot of "Train Crew" makes people feel warm and feels like home (but it is a bit too much. If it can be reflected in some small details, don't worry about it all the time) The plot about Luofu is really surprising. Most of the fans are boring in the early stage, and it gets better in Pinoconi (personal opinion). This Luofu is very exciting. The final battle is more exciting than the original plot, and there is nothing unreasonable at the same time. Both the protagonist and Qiong poked fun at me, both of them are very cute, some small interactions are quite interesting, and they are also very serious when they are serious (this is Qiong in my mind, rather than being crazy everywhere regardless of the occasion) I can see that the dome at the back is pretty well drawn, it doesn't look like a tool anymore (it's more cute)

From my personal point of view, I quite like this book. The characters are well drawn and there is no OOC. Everyone on the train crew is so cute. There are quite a few chapters now, so don't worry about reading them all at once. The author updates almost twice a day. Overall, I hope everyone will take a look.

Ah? Yunduo☁️😆, dada↗da↗da↘da↘, I really want to play Genshin Impact🥺, Yunduo☁️Genshin Impact🥺, dang dang dang dang 😆, watch the excitement 👍🎉😆, Yun☁️Genshin Impact🥺, woooooooooo, I really want to play Genshin Impact😭😭Yun☁️Genshin Impact, my friends are here😆😆😆, let's play Genshin Impact together, Yun☁️Genshin Impact! Ahhhhhhhhhh🥺, I really want to play Genshin Impact🥺Yun☁️Genshin Impact, hahahahahahaha🤣🤣🤣, let's play Genshin Impact together, Yun Shen☁️Genshin Impact, I think about it so much,🥺 Want to play Genshin Impact 🥰 Web cloud, low power consumption and no distortion 🥰, WiFi network cable 💐, all can be 60 frames 🥰, come, come, come 👏, enter the cloud ☁️ Genshin Impact This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your Brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! When Zihan fought with Ye Fan in order to win the spot in the West, Li Kui went to persuade him to make peace. But on the way, he was tempted by foreign persimmons and strayed into the depths of the lotus root. He started a relationship with Xiao Longnu in Huanshi Water Pavilion, but was seen by Sato Kazuma. So Sato Kazuma got angry and went to another world to conquer the Delta Map with Doraemon, and finally became the plot of the Generation of Flame Emperor. The road to Shu is difficult and dangerous🥺How to transport grain and grass🥺The Northern Expedition is a waste of national power🥺It is better to imitate Soochow🥺There is only one person left among the Five Tigers😰Who dares to be the pioneer of the Northern Expedition🥺Why not?😤Since we have inherited the legacy of the late emperor😤How can we be stuck in the situation😤Hmmmmmm~Ha! ! 😡😡Me! ! Wei Yan😡 can only advance but not retreat! ! ! 😡😡If Wei Kou takes one hundred thousand Yan as his lord and annihilates them all 💪💪💪😡 and allows Cao Cao's thieves to attack the whole world 💪💪💪😡 Yan can also refuse to retreat with all his strength and defeat the enemy for lord 💪 😡😡: Your Majesty! 🤨 👏😡😡: Why did you break the Ultra Key? 🤨: It doesn't matter if the key is broken, do you think it's still an Astra? 🤨👍⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡😱😱→😈 😡: Your Majesty, why did you turn Astra into a Babar planet? The dueling arena in Jiuding is difficult and dangerous, how can Anbu advance to the top? It is better to imitate youth than to waste gold coins with clever tricks. There is only one person left in Da Yin, who dares to be a mad dog and bite him? Why not! Since I have inherited Quan Nai's legacy, how can I be trapped and stagnant? I, the zebra, can only advance but not retreat! ! ! If 3000 defeat the three Yin people in a round, Madara will be the one to wipe them all out for the Lord. Even if the underworld brings the Black Zetsu to attack, Madara can also fight with all his strength to refuse to retreat for the Lord to defeat the enemy. Like a fish drinking from water, Komama Madara is here! How dare you?

It's super good-looking, I like it, but it's not enough. Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much. Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh

The book is very good. There are few ratings, so the rating is low. 9.3-9.5 Is not a problem. The sentence at the end about the strong supporting the weak made me excited. I rarely see books with good writing. The current problem is that there are few words. There is also hope that the author can complete the settings of Weng Xing in the later part. I also want to ask the author, how to get new powers on the new planet. It's really good. The emotional rendering is very good. Please give me some points.

I have read nearly 200 chapters. Overall, there is a plot and characters. It doesn't drag on! The main reason is that Qiong is too cute (Qiongchu can't stand it!! It's so cute!) There are still some embarrassing and secondary scenes, but they're not big problems (hmm!) But this is the only Bengtie fanfic I can read at the moment because it's so well written that I really appreciate it! I love that everyone is spending time together! Moreover, the relationship between the protagonist and the various characters is well controlled. There is not much plot. If you are interested, you can contact OKok.

Very beautiful, Qiongbao is so dumb Very cute [like]

It's really good-looking, and none of the characters are OOC. The relationship between the two Qions and the train crew is very loving and funny. Sugar and Knife are more moderate. The foreshadowing of the battle that damaged Qiong is also interesting to explore. In particular, I would like to praise the Luofu chapter and the general's creation by name. But I personally feel that Piloconi's writing is not exciting enough. Taking the Holy Grail War as the starting point is indeed relatively novel, but the overall effect feels very flat. When the main line does not progress, the sense of pull between the characters is not handled well enough, and this state lasts for a long time.

This book has a good idea, the character of the protagonist is pretty good, and the story is strong, but the writing style is a bit too strong and the writing fails to hit the point. Give me a method. When watering, pour water on the edge of the flowerpot. Although it can replenish water for plants, the harvest rate is not proportional. (Contemplation) The book is still very good, and I highly recommend it, but there is something very strange and weird about it that kept me coming back for more. Well, this is pretty good for a newbie. (Lie down peacefully)

Look good, look good... I'd say he's very explosive, hehe

So well written. It fits the character design, and it also relies on the balancing star god to solve the problem of the protagonist always being silent in this kind of novel.

I will always praise the protagonist who is really good, and everyone is also very good. I really feel that the writing is very good and eye-catching, and it makes me cry and laugh at the same time.

This book is really good to read, and the characters are not 0OC! Please tell me if there is any similar book! Is it that most authors who write similar books are afraid of not grasping the characters well? In fact, the writing is very beautiful [sending my heart]

I quite like the setting, but the character of the protagonist seems a bit inconsistent. The psychological activities are well described, but the external activities lack some feeling, but overall I quite like it.

Well, it's pretty good. This is the article I've read so far. It's obvious that it's written by a boy unless you click on it. I thought it was written by a girl. The author's writing is very good. Well, I can't stand what other male authors write. The author's writing is really good and there are no unnecessary descriptions. [Shy][Shy]

Delicious, shocking and delicious, with both laughs and knives (just more laughs. Why is it so delicious? I really want to know which chapter the plot of the IF line is in. I have only read more than 100 chapters now. Looking forward to it.

Comments from the public: I really can. The paragraphing is comfortable and the number of words per paragraph is eye-friendly. The plot is very smooth and mellow. While watching it, I was thinking, how did the author come up with such a good plot? Every appearance of the character is extremely reasonable, and several times it exceeded my expectations (ps: I really want to spoil it but I can't bear it...). The writing style doesn't feel like a novice, it's not the common vernacular on 🍅. There are often very small details that bring out the atmosphere of the entire scene, and the feeling of being able to move a thousand pounds with four or two is too overwhelming... According to the popular words recently, the language control ability is like an eagle, but I use it here purely as a compliment. It's quite healing to watch the protagonist grow. No spoilers, anyway, I personally like to watch the plot of losing one's love in battle, and that's true for all IPs. The only thing that might need to be mentioned is Qiong's character design. Are you more fussy and anxious, a little naive and ignorant of the world? (The adjective is not quite accurate, but I can't think of anything else.) I don't think it's a problem. After all, Qiong doesn't have a fixed personality. There are scornful ones, silent ones, joyful ones, and love-minded ones. When I read the article, I usually automatically render it in my mind, and change it in my head to the way I like Qiong's speech and behavior. In addition, the little Qiong in this article is also very cute. Selfish review: Speaking from the perspective of my chef Jing Yuan, Jing Yuanyuan's feeling is so accurate and expressive! ! ! It's a very complex feeling, majestic, gentle, cunning, resourceful, calm, and too smart. Oh my god, Jing Yuan came over and acted it out! ! ! General Shence 😭

A very enjoyable book, and no need to say that the author is awesome. It's so satisfying to understand people. I have never read a book so seriously on Tomato. The author's writing is also awesome. Although the psychological description may be a bit unclear, it is very interesting. Okay,

The emotions are delicate, and the characters are not OOC. Although the healthy Qiong Bao is indeed a bit abstract, the overall look and feel is quite good. Qian Bao and Qiong Bao, you must form a train set for life! ! ! !

Good reading [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] I have never heard of this game before, but after reading this book, I was really moved by the emotional attraction between the characters in this book. Especially watching the protagonist integrate into the train set step by step, I felt very warm. The plot is also ok, even those who have never understood the game can understand it. Very nice, really nice book [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss]

Overall, it's pretty good to watch. I like the middle and lower parts of Fairy Boat better. When I saw Pinoconi, it was okay at first. But later on, the plot was a bit too long. After a while, I became bored and couldn't bear to watch it. There are a lot of people resurrected, but that's okay. This novel is really great.