[Almost invincible + purehearted, funny heroine who loves tails + tsundere hero who fiercely protects and adores his disciple + 1v1 + light comedy + a little dual perspective]
Yun Suli transmigrates into the body of a wicked disciple who has imprisoned her master, and is now kneeling on the brink of death.
System mission: Win him over and touch his tail!
Seeing the eight dream tails behind her master, Yun Suli promptly changes course.
What's the point of pursuing the Heartless Dao when tail-petting is so much better?
So, while reinforcing her master's seal, she confesses earnestly: “Master, shall we become Dao companions?”
Her master smiles gently. “How about you let me go first?”
Yun Suli adds three more locks. “The feelings are there, but we've got to take safety precautions too.”
From then on, with his affection rating at -99,999, she dances wildly along the edge of her master's limits.
Today she tricks him into granting her a title; tomorrow she wheedles a tail out of him to use as a pillow.
Until one day, when the seal shatters completely, her master corners her against the wall, his gaze dangerous:
“How does my tail feel?”
First thing, thank you @. For your support. Your comments are very important to me! First of all, the author is indeed a new writer, and this book is indeed his first novel. I accept the criticism from you guys for the messy writing, and I would like to say sorry to everyone. Regardless of the bad reviews or good reviews, it is a benefit to me. Please give this author some time. All the outlines and everything in this book have been written, so it is basically a bit difficult to revise it. I can only try not to make the relationship look so confusing when writing. But people will definitely make progress, right? Ah Li's mood has changed in this book. At first she was afraid of death and only liked tails. Now she can't hide her love for Bai Jingci no matter how hard she tries. She is a character in my writing, and it also represents the same for the author. I know that this book is basically impossible to satisfy babies, and I accept your criticism! I think this is my problem. This book will be finished as soon as possible, and the author will release the next book at the same time, with the same theme but different routines. At least my writing style and emotional delicacy will be improved, and the most important development and character relationships will not be confusing. I look forward to it. Maybe you will witness the rise of a new golden novel author whom you support and encourage (maybe it's my own passion, maybe it's because I want to eat swan meat), thank you, my lovely readers! 😘😘😘 I love you all, whether you give me a good review or a negative review. Finally, thank you again @. This baby, his comments are very important, and they are very important for the author's next book as well as the rectification and development of this book! 🥰🥰[Admiration]
? Both the timeline and the relationship between the characters are very messy... And the background setting is also very messy. Although it is about cultivating immortals, it has many modern vocabulary, so is it a cultivating immortality based on modern times? And this setting based on emotion as cultivation also has a lot of bugs. Isn't it too casual to use emotion for an object or a person as cultivation? There is a saying that says "I believe in sincerity, but sincerity changes rapidly." (Of course I came here for the love story, so just think that I have lost my mind, but I feel that the relationship between the characters is very confusing. Can the author provide a relationship diagram or write it in more detail?
In the early stage, I wrote about the development of my relationship with my master. Just reading the first 30 chapters I found it very interesting.