Train Survival: My Corrupted Beloved Wife, My Shattered White Moonlight

There is something interesting about this novel [smile][smile] A wife who is humiliated on the surface but longs for it in her heart, a husband who is incompetent and timid, a strong, perverted and crazy muscular man, and a hunk who cooperates to suppress the husband. This book is interesting [smile][smile][smile] There is nothing cool about this book, but it is quite exciting [sinister laugh] [sexy laugh]. The wedding was just held when the transformed heroine passed through. The male protagonist at the wedding was weak, incompetent and timid, and could not protect the heroine, and still needed the heroine's protection. I still like the real male protagonist now. He is crazy about being domineering, has good things to offer, and takes good care of the heroine [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] Again, I want to watch the education and training [lick screen] [lick screen] [lick screen]

A bit curious but acceptable, the taste is unique [laughter]

This author is really amazing. He used various tricks to evade scrutiny and learned a lot of knowledge [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The writing is very good, the plot is interesting, the author must be an experienced author, the pace is relaxed and relaxed, the characters are vivid [like], some plots are secretive but written in a way that people can understand [laugh], I give it full marks.

It's very exciting. It's a boy changing into a girl. So boys should be a little different from girls who travel through time. If there is no difference, it's better to write about girls' time travel, but the character settings are super interesting. I love watching it. I will add more [Blow kiss][Blow kiss] It's too bad, I can't stand it anymore, so I'm giving up on the article.

The incompetent husband, the incompetent son, the incompetent father, the incompetent brother... All kinds of collections, the tauren are ecstatic! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

A refreshing novel from Chu Nan's perspective, the heroine's history of humiliation The heroine is too weak and has no choice but to surrender. I hope the heroine can be improved, otherwise, how can we talk about love with unequal status?

This book is really good. I started reading it from the time I updated it to Chapter 6, but I beg you, the author should update it quickly! [Sinister smile]

In fact, most of them are good, but one thing that makes people feel uncomfortable is that there are too many scenes for Lu Chengfeng, and because of his status, some people who have not read this kind of novels cannot quickly introduce Chu Nan to Lu Chengfeng, so they may not get the pleasure (except m cuckold fetish) [shy][shy][shy] Give it a full star and express your own opinions, and I hope the author can see it. First of all, there are advantages, the subject matter is novel, and the descriptions of some aspects are good, but the reasons why many people can't stand it can be attributed to the following three points: 1. Chen Yu's way of thinking and personality. In the setting, Chen Yu is a time travel + gender change setting, but I often forget this setting while reading. The reason is that as a gender-transformed woman, her way of thinking as a man is not reflected. Once she comes out, she thinks from a female perspective, and there is basically no change in the way of thinking. This will give people the illusion that there is no time travel and gender transformation. I understand that the author set this up to make it more natural for her to fall in love with Chu Nan, because the soul is no longer the same, and it is normal to fall in love with another man in the process of gradually transforming into a woman. But if the gender change is not reflected, the nature is different. People who forget this setting will naturally see it as a script about a wife betraying her husband, rather than a gender change time traveler falling in love with another man. 2. Lu Chengfeng's camera problem. From the standpoint of the article, we can clearly see who is the bad guy and who is the good guy in the legal context. Since the bad guy is going to be the protagonist, we need to avoid the good guy being too exposed. Because when we read novels, we will selectively substitute characters. The first thing is to substitute characters that are consistent with our own three views. Therefore, in order to prevent readers from filling in the wrong characters, we should try to minimize the scenes of good guys. For example, the male protagonists in apocalyptic novels are basically not good guys, but readers can easily identify with them. The reason is that the good guys in the whole book are either the protagonist's women, or there are not many scenes, and there are basically no roles that can be replaced except the male protagonist. Therefore, giving Lu Chengfeng too many scenes gives readers more space to substitute for him. In addition, the three perspectives are stable, and it is very easy to substitute for him. 3. Chu Nan's behavior and personality issues. Chu Nan's behavior in the article does not have much purpose. The author has written more than once that Chu Nan's appearance is gloomy and handsome, which shows that the author wants to write about the image of a gentle scum or a thug in a suit. But I didn't feel this way in the article. Instead, I felt more like a gangster. Because his purpose is so bad, he only likes Chen Yu because of sex, which is far from the image of a gentle scum. Because the latter hides the "scum" under the "gentle", but the former directly shows the "scum" to others, without recognizing any city or boundary, only the domineering and directness on his face, which is greatly separated from the gloomy appearance of his appearance. The clear point is the straw core of the embroidered pillow. Readers are also more willing to assume the role of a "gentle scum" with a wealthy man than a "rogue" without a wealthy man. The above are the three main problems that I think make people feel uncomfortable with this novel. It is a purely subjective judgment and I hope you can treat it rationally! [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

It's really good. If Chu Nan is the protagonist from the beginning, there is a high probability that many plots will not pass the review. Using this side perspective to describe not only avoids this point, but also makes it more exciting and strange.