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I hope the author will find that the relationship between the two male protagonists is a little subtle and complicated. When I saw it later, I only saw that S needs to solve the problem, and G has been asking for help. There will be no problems in this short period of time, but problems will occur after a long time. The subject matter is novel, and the writing is okay, but the emotional line is not natural. Overall, it is okay. The relationship between the two male protagonists made me see the ending of be. I don't know why [exploration]

Xinran is highly recommended by my family. What attracts me most about this book is the charm of the characters. The early stage of the male protagonist really reminded me of the book "The Autobiography of Tesla" that I had read before. It shows the desire for knowledge and the rigorous study of the world. Only a true scholar can do it well (damn, the journey of physicists is so synchronized, no wonder I failed the physics college entrance examination [smile] [smile]), which laid a solid foundation for the male protagonist to become a wizard in the future. I stayed up late watching it, and I saw a comment saying that I was being criticized for attacking the field? Hey "netizens" who haven't read the double-male novel, don't destroy the precious author I found. How can I live without the book that attracts me so much? Back to the topic, my expectations for this book are really high. From the early reading, I felt that the author's writing style is very good, and the rhythm of the story is also very good. It clearly describes the growth process of the male protagonist, and also covers the tedious daily life through concise and rigorous words. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it, Xiaochang, my family (repeatedly emphasized repeatedly)

The protagonist's growth is delicate and moving, and the climax of the plot is also fascinating. Although the emotional line is a little rough, it is acceptable because it is a one-sided perspective. In fact, I feel that it is quite interesting to approach the protagonist from an investment perspective at first. After that, it doesn't matter whether there is interest mixed in with my heart. Because the protagonist is an adult and can handle feelings on his own. It's much more interesting than simple campus love. By the way, I would like to remind you not to open it if you are easily affected by paragraph comments, like me. After the attack, there have been comments expressing dislike and hope that there will be no cp. I am really convinced and it is understandable to vent. I keep staring at the comments to disturb the public reading atmosphere. This should be an article with two male protagonists, it is for all readers, it is not a private customization. Above

Yes, the emotional line is a little unnatural. It appropriately weakens Leo's strength as a monarch, and more reflects the delicate feelings between the two of them caring for each other. This is the real dual strength! Both of them are very powerful in their respective aspects, and as a person of the current era, Leo can be a good monarch, has great wishes, and unconditionally believes in Arden's decision-making, which is one of the more advanced ideas of this era. As a time traveler, Linden's thoughts and wisdom are much more advanced, and it is inevitable that he will give more help, but the attention between the young lovers will not be less. If you are particularly concerned about who paid more, think of this book as Aldern's autobiography, focusing on Aldern.

In the Western fantasy worldview created by the author, the protagonist Al borrows modern physics knowledge and wizard knowledge to lead the trend. His eyes are the continuous exploration of the wizard world and the innovation and inheritance of wizard knowledge. Through the natural interaction between the two protagonists, they gradually learn about this charming world. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

First of all, this book is well written Secondly, I think this book should not be on a women's channel, but should be on a men's channel If you delete the second male lead, you will find that this is a standard male lead. The second male lead has almost no role in this book. It is more like adding emotional scenes to the male lead and forcing the second lead into it, like making dumplings out of jealousy. And female videos have always been dominated by sensibility. I'm not talking nonsense. Why do girls like to watch other people fall in love? Isn't it because they yearn for the beauty in love? Moreover, there is very little psychological description of the protagonist, giving people a "cold" feeling. In a market where emotions pay the bills, this book is destined to be difficult to sell. Therefore, this book is definitely not suitable for female channels. If it is used in male channels, it may become a small hit.

At the campus stage, I still felt that Gong was a bit grumpy, hahaha, but during the later stage when the two of them went on a study tour together, I felt that Gong opened up a little more to each other, and the viewing experience was much better. Of course, the best experience is still in the hegemony stage, hahahaha. I was worried that making modern weapons would disrupt the balance, but now it becomes more logical to establish an enemy [laughing] I wonder if there are time travelers on the Black Iron side. I am looking forward to the follow-up development. Although they are Shuangnan, I actually prefer to watch them conquer the world together, hahaha. Maybe it's because the two of them don't have any emotional conflicts now, and a little bit of love drama is enough.

The two male protagonists are both very intelligent and intelligent. Very good love. The brave and fearless Alden is really my favorite male protagonist. I feel like the author has quite a lot of imagination. I originally thought it was a story about the protagonist's struggle and publishing papers to make money, but I didn't expect another male protagonist to appear. I originally thought it was a story about sweet love and traveling around the world, but unexpectedly it turned into an infrastructure story. I originally thought that Ji Jianwen didn't expect that there would be a power plan to seize the power of Qing Jun. He just accepted the power plan, but he didn't expect that there would be another world war. I originally thought that the world war would be the end, but unexpectedly I started developing aircraft, artillery and tanks. The author can also connect it all together. It's also very beautiful and not watery during the whole process. Fine. I hope the author doesn't suck

It's how novels are written. The plot flows as naturally and rhythmically as water. Each scene is not superfluous but serves the overall storyline. The characters of the two protagonists are also very distinct, but it is a pity that the characters of several supporting characters are not enough. We can learn from Harry Potter. In addition to the three protagonists, a large number of supporting characters with distinctive personalities also add a lot of color to the story. Going back to this book, the plot and scenery blend together like water and milk, which is rare for writing stories nowadays. The world view setting is also fully integrated into the storyline, and there is no paragraph that can be skipped or not read. Therefore, this is the writing method of a novel, but it is definitely not an ordinary Internet article. Come on, author!

It's really good-looking. The world depicted in the big pen is so exciting. I hope I will write more about it. Al and Leo are a perfect match, and they are both very straightforward. They are not coy or entangled at all, and they are very calm about their feelings. The sapiosexuality of the two male protagonists is so cool to me. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It was an unexpected surprise to read this book. The protagonist relied on his own efforts and investment to shine throughout the book. In my opinion, the emotional description was not much but just right. It really made me feel the charm of the whole book.

The content is very contagious. It has witnessed the protagonist's growth from a child to a great scientist and physicist. His IQ is very online, and his emotional development is relatively slow. He prefers long-term companionship. It is not a fast and intense love development, but the warmth of mutual respect and helping each other is also very inspiring. It must be full of stars [laughs]

It's pretty good. The protagonist has a strong purpose, the characters are vivid, the logic is clear, and the words are fluent. It just feels like the writing is a bit mechanical and it reads strangely. Except for the writing style, everything is okay, there's nothing wrong with it [eating melon]

At first, I was just a little interested and added it to my bookshelf. After reading it for a while, I realized that it is a wonderful book. Watching Arden's experience really affected my mood. Just when I was very excited, I saw Leo appear, and then I remembered that there were two male protagonists. I was even more excited. It was different from the current one. Industrial saccharine that is highly homogenized in the market, the writing is exquisite, I am really happy and nervous for Alden, which is why my mobile phone was collected, otherwise I would see it directly the next day [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

All I can say is that I finally found the chaff in the rotten persimmon! It's very Lujiang style. The two male protagonists finally have real two male protagonists, not two male protagonists who fall in love for the sake of love, nor two male protagonists who are disguised as romance novels, let alone two male protagonists who are always waiting for another male protagonist to save them!

To be honest, I was rolling in the quilt when I just read the first two chapters. They are so palatable, the language is not straightforward, it is really good to read, not to mention the magic theme, and the protagonist's learning attitude makes me have the urge to get up in the middle of the night and write science questions [Thinking]

The author's writing style is really good, and the descriptions are super contagious. The protagonist's first submission made me excited when I read it. Oh, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, boss, you must keep writing

I really like the protagonist who works hard. The characters are vivid, the emotional and career lines are very clearly outlined, and the writing is also good. It looks relaxed and full of high-spirited feelings. It's great, come on, author!

A Western fantasy wizard with two male protagonists. The author's writing style is very solid, simple and touching. The author is relatively soft-hearted, so there is no too cruel reality. It is very warm.

The world view is set very well. The combination of physics and magic is written in detail, and it feels very professional, a bit like a popular science article in the Western fantasy world. The protagonist is a bit like a robot, moving towards the future step by step according to the program, which means that the sense of delicacy is missing. Nothing else is good, just like a glass of warm water, feelings expressed in a straightforward manner do not require too many waves. Just sauce~

The first part is very slow, the middle speed transition is very smooth, the overall writing style is very comfortable, not too much wit, not too much intrigue, very traditional plot, very warm story, if you like to read plain writing, you can read it

The author's writing is really good. The writing is really powerful. [Like][Like][Like] It's super, super, super good. You can try it first, but it's a pity that it's a little short. [Blow a kiss] I'm looking forward to this being a long novel.

I really admire the author, because this book gave me an unprecedented sense of grandeur, whether it is the plot, the knowledge mastered by the protagonist, or the character of the protagonist created by the author [top post] [top post]. (By the way, I am guessing that the author is probably a national defense student majoring in physics?? [Apologies for the offense [almost crying]])

It's very interesting. My thoughts after seeing it are that the protagonist comes to a different world, from his own growth to national reforms and wars between countries, to the crisis of the entire continent. The emergence of nuclear weapons gives people hope to solve the crisis, but they are afraid that it will be the foreshadowing of a bigger crisis. But the article says it very well, there is no time to argue, the soldiers are guarding the people with their bodies.

It's a serious Western fantasy, with academies, infrastructure, arms races, and battles for the throne. It feels like the modern history of the earth is condensed. Electricity, tanks, and atomic bombs were all developed within a few years.

The plot has a tight rhythm, the emotional lines are not rigid, and the strong characters support each other. The overall story is very complete, highly recommended! ! !

Halfway through, I saw that the score was only 6.7, And I thought there was something wrong. The 6.7 Is most likely due to the two long reviews. Shen Nong tells you that it is enough to watch in Tomato, which is better than most. And there is nothing good about Western Fantasy recently, so just watch it with peace of mind.

Very well written. Cheers, author.

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful!

It's a little different from the wizard I imagined. There is no such magic that can destroy the world. It's very nice, but it's still being updated.