The Ice-Cold Campus Belle's Persona Crumbled After She Became My Underling

This review was written on Chapter 256 and is for reference only. The overall review is very good. It is a work that does not hide its shortcomings. I don't know why it scored 7.1. Maybe it's because people drive too much and are trying to score points. Let's talk about the advantages first: My personal impression is excellent, the roles of the two heroines are reasonably arranged, and the character of the heroine Wan Wan is well created. She is a typical tsundere childhood sweetheart, vivid and vivid. She has the liveliness of a childhood sweetheart, but also shows the gentleness of a girl at key points. Then, Xixi's portrayal is also very delicate. From feeling inferior at the beginning to becoming strong and learning to express love, the process is handled very well. The daily articles are not flowing, there is a clear main line to promote, and the rhythm is very well grasped. It can be understood as: there is a cycle of new plot + candy + new plot. Then, the writing style is smooth and attractive, and the description is very good. The feeling of youth is reflected between the lines. In addition, the pen and ink used to describe the heroine are also very detailed, making it fascinating to read. There are shortcomings, but I don't think they affect the reading experience. They only represent my personal opinion: 1. As a foreshadowing, the issue of soul travel (pseudo soul travel?) Has no actual progress in Chapter 256. It is only mentioned once around Chapter 200 (before the introduction to recycling). Although I personally don't care about this matter very much, other audience friends do, so I'd better solve it as much as possible, or don't mention it at all. Wait until later to focus on writing (of course I really don't want to see something like Ye Shuang of Bayin, who finally tells readers that the male protagonist is actually a consciousness, to explain that the essence of soul travel is to upload consciousness to the virtual world, and for some reason in the virtual world, he can recreate real life with the female protagonist or wake up the male protagonist (similar to a vegetative state)) 2. The world view you want to depict is too big but not advanced enough. As mentioned earlier, Li Xiaotian also helped a junior high school girl, but it was not mentioned in the college chapter. Instead, a new female supporting character appeared who had a crush on him, and then added descriptions of real life, including Wan Wan's family. I wanted to write about each supporting character's own life, but the writing was intermittently undeveloped. In addition, there were also hidden threads about some things about the old city society that were not stated, and a lot of foreshadowing was buried but I didn't know how to fill it in properly. 3. I mentioned before that Wanwan has a bit of a yandere attribute, but throughout the entire text, this attribute has never appeared once in their daily lives. I don't think it is necessary to add this attribute to enrich the character attributes. Now the characters are very full, and coupled with the hidden clues about Chen Shuo, it seems that there are many stories behind Wanwan that have not been told. In short, the author works hard to create and looks forward to future plots.

It's still very good, light-hearted and sweet. I highly recommend it as a double heroine, read the introduction 🤭. The protagonist has a hidden scholar, his best friends are extremely powerful, and there are two domineering female protagonists in elementary school (two bad guys). In terms of subject matter, it can be regarded as new wine in old bottles, but it still has a unique flavor 🤔👍

This novel left a deep impression on me. Judging from the reading experience, the plot is compact, the characters are vivid, and the language is fluent and contagious. The advantage of the novel lies in its unique narrative technique and profound theme. It not only provides a rich space for imagination, but also triggered my thinking about human nature, society and other aspects. Overall , this novel is a work worth recommending. Both literature lovers and ordinary readers can get different levels of reading pleasure from it. I recommend that friends who are looking for an in-depth reading experience not to miss this book. At the same time, this novel is also a good choice for readers who are new to this type of novel.

The author is great, from the curiosity when I clicked on the first chapter to the concern until now, your words have been with me for many days and nights without even realizing it. The anticipation every time I refresh the page, the excitement when I see the wonderful plot, and the emotion when I read the delicate emotions, all make me want to say to you: Thank you for using your pen and ink to build such a vivid world for us. Your plot designs always bring unexpected surprises. Those seemingly casual foreshadowings were echoed one by one in the subsequent plots, and I couldn't help but marvel when I read the key turning point; those ups and downs of the plot were both unexpected and reasonable, sometimes making people heart-wrenching, and sometimes making people suddenly enlightened. Whether it is a tense and exciting conflict scene or a warm and healing daily interaction, you can get it just right, making readers laugh and worry together with the fate of the characters. This immersive reading experience is the best proof of the magic of your writing. Even more fascinating are your characters. They are not flimsy paper people, but living individuals with flesh and blood, joys and sorrows. The tenacity and growth of the protagonist are moving, and the vividness and three-dimensionality of the supporting characters are equally impressive. Even the inconspicuous little characters have their own stories and perseverance. I can see the complexity of human nature from their choices, and feel the strength from their persistence. These characters are like real friends who exist around us, making us resonate strongly while reading. Know how much hard work you put in behind the scenes. In order to conceive a reasonable plot, you may have to consult countless information; in order to make the characters more fleshed out, you may have to polish the details repeatedly; in order to update on time, you may have to sacrifice your rest time and type on the keyboard under the late night light. Writing has never been an easy task. It requires a steady stream of inspiration and more importantly, persistence day after day. Sometimes you may encounter bottlenecks and be unable to write on a blank document; sometimes you may receive negative feedback and doubt your ability; sometimes you may feel tired and think about giving up, but in the end you choose to persevere and present the best story to readers. Please don't doubt your talent. Your words have a unique charm that can touch people's hearts and convey power. Maybe the current number of readers has not reached what you expected, and maybe there are still people who have different opinions on your work, but please believe that every persistence will not be let down, and every author who creates seriously deserves to be seen. The words you wrote with your heart are quietly affecting every reader, bringing us happiness, courage and touching. The road to writing may be long and lonely, but you are never alone. We, readers, will always be by your side, cheering you on, and looking forward to the continued expansion of the world you write about. I hope you can always maintain your love for writing, not be disturbed by external voices, follow your heart, and write the stories you want to write. If you feel tired, slow down appropriately and give yourself some time to adjust; if you encounter a bottleneck, trust your own accumulation, and inspiration will always come inadvertently. May the stories you write will always be wonderful, may you gain a full sense of accomplishment and happiness on the road of writing, may your love last forever, may your words be seen and loved by more people. We will always be here, quietly waiting for every chapter you update, and accompany you through the next writing journey. Thank you for bringing us so many wonderful reading times with your love and persistence!

As of the latest chapter, I have finished reading it. The plot and characterization are good, and the protagonist group is well created. It is not a perfect character, but not perfect is the most perfect. I personally think that after the confession, it is good to write about the daily life after the confession, and the daily life after having children. Now I will talk about the following things. Founding a company or something like this is a bit boring in this subject. I personally don't think it's interesting. I can briefly describe the career line and explain it briefly. The author of Su Tang's book I read before has a good grasp of this aspect. Of course, this is not to say that this book is not good. It is very good. I recommend it to those who like this kind of writing.

To be honest, the plot design is good. The whole main line is clear. The key point is that it is really sweet. The direct emotional transformation between the male and female protagonists is very natural, and the female protagonist is so cute. The early preparation is very good. The male protagonist has a particularly high emotional intelligence. The two female protagonists are also cute and plump.

I just love literature and can enter without thinking. However, there seems to be a lot of places to drive, so there is no pressure to score (written with 8.8 Points). Then I need to make two suggestions: 1. The author's group fills up too quickly, and I can't get in. 2. Regarding the actual situation, you can explain it in the extra chapter. After all, it is quite punishing (definitely not that I really want to know the real situation), and it is also reflected in the behavior of book friends, right (the author has a big responsibility for the sudden increase in VIPs on the rooftop). All in all, the author's writing is good, (especially driving). I hope the author can write better and better, and the data will get better and better, come on!

The writing is really good, very immersive, the plot is smooth and comfortable, quite sweet, the characterization is not faulty, the plot logic is online, it is the best love novel I have read in a while, it is not as bloody as other novels, only the ordinary sweetness of love, overall it is worth reading, and it is good-looking. If you like sweet stories, you can read it. It is much better than some recent sweet stories.

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I think the character of He Xiaotian is very well created. It is a blessing to have a brother like this 🤔🤔