Bingshan School Beauty Is Cold on the Outside but Cute and Sweet in Private

It's still very good, light-hearted and sweet. I highly recommend it as a double heroine, read the introduction [laughing]. The protagonist has a hidden scholar, his best friends are extremely powerful, and there are two domineering female protagonists in elementary school (two bad guys). In terms of subject matter, it can be regarded as new wine in old bottles, but it still has a unique flavor [Thinking][Like]

This review was written on Chapter 256 and is for reference only. The overall evaluation is very good. It is a work that does not hide its shortcomings. I don't know why it scored 7.1. Maybe it's because people drive too much and are trying to reduce the score. Let's talk about the advantages first: My personal impression is excellent, the roles of the two heroines are reasonably arranged, and the heroine Wan Wan's character is well created. She is a typical tsundere childhood sweetheart, vivid and vivid. She has the liveliness of a childhood sweetheart, but also shows the gentleness of a girl at key points. Then, Xixi's portrayal is also very delicate. From feeling inferior at the beginning to becoming strong and learning to express love, the process is handled very well. The daily articles are not flowing, there is a clear main line to promote, and the rhythm is very well grasped. It can be understood as: there is a cycle of new plot + candy + new plot. Then, the writing style is smooth and attractive, and the description is very good. The feeling of youth is reflected between the lines. In addition, the pen and ink used to describe the heroine are also very detailed, making it fascinating to read. There are shortcomings, but I don't think they affect the reading experience. They only represent my personal opinion: 1. As a foreshadowing, the issue of soul travel (pseudo soul travel?) Has no actual progress in Chapter 256. It is only mentioned once around Chapter 200 (before the recycling introduction). Although I personally don't care about this matter very much, other viewers do, so I'd better solve it as much as possible, or don't mention it at all. Wait until later to concentrate on writing (of course I really don't want to see something like Ye Shuang of Bayin, who finally tells readers that the male protagonist is actually a consciousness, to explain that the essence of soul travel is to upload consciousness to the virtual world, and for some reason in the virtual world, he can recreate real life with the female protagonist or wake up the male protagonist (similar to a vegetative state)) 2. The world view you want to depict is too big but not advanced enough. As mentioned earlier, Li Xiaotian also helped a junior high school girl, but it was not mentioned in the college chapter. Instead, a new female supporting character appeared who had a crush on him, and then added a description of real life, including Wan Wan's family. I wanted to write about each supporting character's own life, but the writing was intermittently undeveloped. In addition, there were also hidden threads about some things in the old city society that were not stated, and a lot of foreshadowing was buried but I didn't know how to fill it in properly. 3. I mentioned before that Wanwan has a bit of a yandere attribute, but throughout the entire text, this attribute has never appeared once in their daily lives. I don't think it is necessary to add this attribute to enrich the character's attributes. Now the character is very full, and coupled with the hidden clues about Chen Shuo, it seems that there are still many stories behind Wanwan that have not been told. Anyway, having said this, the author keeps working hard and looks forward to the future plots.

This novel left a deep impression on me. Judging from the reading experience, the plot is compact, the characters are vivid, and the language is fluent and contagious. The advantage of the novel lies in its unique narrative technique and profound theme. It not only provides a rich space for imagination, but also triggered my thinking about human nature, society and other aspects. Overall , this novel is a work worth recommending. Both literature lovers and ordinary readers can get different levels of reading pleasure from it. I recommend that friends who are looking for an in-depth reading experience not to miss this book. At the same time, this novel is also a good choice for readers who are new to this type of novel.

The author is great, from the curiosity when I clicked on the first chapter to the concern until now, your words have been with me for many days and nights without even realizing it. The anticipation every time I refresh the page, the excitement when I see the wonderful plot, and the emotion when I read the delicate emotions, all make me want to say to you: Thank you for using your pen and ink to build such a vivid world for us. Your plot designs always bring unexpected surprises. Those seemingly casual foreshadowings were echoed one by one in the subsequent plots, and I couldn't help but marvel when I read the key turning point; those ups and downs of the plot were both unexpected and reasonable, sometimes making people heart-wrenching, and sometimes making people suddenly enlightened. Whether it is a tense and exciting conflict scene or a warm and healing daily interaction, you can get it just right, making readers laugh and worry together with the fate of the characters. This immersive reading experience is the best proof of the magic of your writing. Even more fascinating are your characters. They are not flimsy paper people, but living individuals with flesh and blood, joys and sorrows. The tenacity and growth of the protagonist are moving, and the vividness and three-dimensionality of the supporting characters are equally impressive. Even the inconspicuous little characters have their own stories and perseverance. I can see the complexity of human nature from their choices, and feel the strength from their persistence. These characters are like real friends who exist around us, making us resonate strongly while reading. Know how much hard work you put in behind the scenes. In order to conceive a reasonable plot, you may have to consult countless information; in order to make the characters more fleshed out, you may have to polish the details repeatedly; in order to update on time, you may have to sacrifice your rest time and type on the keyboard under the late night light. Writing has never been an easy task. It requires a steady stream of inspiration and more importantly, persistence day after day. Sometimes you may encounter bottlenecks and be unable to write on a blank document; sometimes you may receive negative feedback and doubt your ability; sometimes you may feel tired and think about giving up, but in the end you choose to persevere and present the best story to readers. Please don't doubt your talent. Your words have a unique charm that can touch people's hearts and convey power. Maybe the current number of readers has not reached what you expected, and maybe there are still people who have different opinions on your work, but please believe that every persistence will not be let down, and every author who creates seriously deserves to be seen. The words you wrote with your heart are quietly affecting every reader, bringing us happiness, courage and touching. The road to writing may be long and lonely, but you are never alone. We, readers, will always be by your side, cheering you on, and looking forward to the continued expansion of the world you write about. I hope you can always maintain your love for writing, not be disturbed by external voices, follow your heart, and write the stories you want to write. If you feel tired, slow down appropriately and give yourself some time to adjust; if you encounter a bottleneck, trust your own accumulation, and inspiration will always come inadvertently. May the stories you write will always be wonderful, may you gain a full sense of accomplishment and happiness on the road of writing, may your love last forever, may your words be seen and loved by more people. We will always be here, quietly waiting for every chapter you update, and accompany you through the next writing journey. Thank you for bringing us so many wonderful reading times with your love and persistence!

As of the latest chapter, I have finished reading it. The plot and characterization are good, and the protagonist group is well created. It is not a perfect character, but not perfect is the most perfect. I personally think that after the confession, it is good to write about the daily life after the confession, and the daily life after having children. Now I will talk about the following things. Founding a company or something like this is a bit boring in this subject. I personally don't think it's interesting. I can briefly describe the career line and explain it briefly. The author of Su Tang's book I read before has a good grasp of this aspect. Of course, this is not to say that this book is not good. It is very good. I recommend it to those who like this kind of writing.

To be honest, the plot design is good. The whole main line is clear. The key point is that it is really sweet. The direct emotional transformation between the male and female protagonists is very natural, and the female protagonist is so cute. The early preparation is very good. The male protagonist has a particularly high emotional intelligence. The two female protagonists are also cute and plump.

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I think the character of He Xiaotian is very well created. It is a blessing to have a brother like this [Thinking][Thinking]

The plot is okay, a bit like other books, but it's innocuous and quite sweet. I think He Xiaotian can also add some story lines [laughing evilly] By the way, I'll point out the number of chapters. As long as it's well written, I feel the audience will buy it.

I have been staying up late these days to keep up with the progress. To be honest, this book is very well written. For the first time, I feel that it is different from other books with the same theme. The two female protagonists have their own characteristics and the male protagonist is also very lively. I hope these three people can get together soon, so that the male protagonist can eat more sugar and write more about campus life (I hope a girl will stimulate them and let them give it to them).

I just love writing, so I can read it without thinking, but there seems to be a lot of places to drive, so there is no pressure to score (written with 8.8 Points). Then I need to make two suggestions. 1. The author's group is filling up too quickly and I can't get in. 2. Regarding the actual situation, you can explain it in the extra chapter. After all, it is quite punishing (definitely not that I really want to know the real situation), and it is also reflected in the behavior of book friends, right (the author has a big responsibility for the sudden increase in VIPs on the rooftop) All in all, all in all, the author's writing style is pretty good, (especially driving) I hope the author can write better and better and the data will get better and better, come on!

The writing is really good, very immersive, the plot is smooth and comfortable, quite sweet, the characterization is not faulty, the plot logic is online, it is the best love novel I have read in a while, it is not as bloody as other novels, only the ordinary sweetness of love, overall it is worth reading, and it is good-looking. If you like sweet stories, you can read it. It is much better than some recent sweet stories.

After reading this book, I really feel like I haven't finished it yet. It's very interesting to read. The plot of the story is laid out steadily, and the transitions are natural and complete, with no abrupt or sloppy sections at all. What moved me the most was the vivid characters in it. The author portrayed them extremely delicately. Every word and deed, small thoughts and inner character were all clear, as if these people were standing right in front of me. The content of the whole book is full and substantial. Whether you read it in your spare time or read it quietly, you can get a different taste. It can be regarded as a real good book.

It's so good. This is my favorite double-female novel I've ever read. The two heroines are very unique and very lovable. The author's writing style is good, the description is delicate yet innocent, and it has a youthful atmosphere. It is a very rare masterpiece.

The interaction is good and sweet, but you have to accept that the image of the male protagonist is very fragmented. Just think of him as a gangster who has a system and can do the questions. Don't think that the male protagonist is a top scholar and respects studying. His behavior can be completely interpreted as a gangster.

The writing was quite good, the male protagonist did everything I wanted, and there was nothing particularly stomach-ache-inducing. After reading it for so long, there is nothing bad about it. The only drawback is that the short plot in the middle may be a bit boring, and people have no desire to read it. It is only a few chapters, and the front and back are very interesting. Besides, I am a Wanwan party😜😋I am Shennong, Xiaojin, edible🤓🤓🤓

The writing is very good, the plot is compact, and the emotional scenes are also well written. It can be regarded as a better double heroine. Really recommend! (Bookworms, check out my homepage for proof) [Cool][Cool][Cool]

It's more everyday, the descriptions are very detailed and easy to read, but the pace doesn't have to be very fast.

It's really super invincible. The thunder cow Fu Gaga is very good-looking. The logic is okay. It's quite sweet. The identities of the male and female protagonists are not simple. It's just that the update is a little slow. But the author still has his studies. I understand it. It's good-looking! ! ! Only personal opinion

It's pretty, but I really can't get the charm of foot control.

It's very interesting and suitable for those who want to watch two female protagonists. As the saying goes: "The line of immortals is like hemp." Therefore, the storyline is very exciting and has many foreshadowings, just like facing the wandering Obito in a duel field. Especially the description of Guan Yu riding a motorcycle and drifting around the Dragon Palace in the East China Sea for 300 times with Nezha. However, Wu Zetian was too powerful. If Yasuo hadn't blocked Galio's ultimate move with a wind wall, this wave would have been destroyed. What I like the most is what Li Bai said to the monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Don't be so arrogant, little brother, let me push you back with a sword." It perfectly shows Li Bai's anger at the monkeys who were shot in the head with a stick. All in all, this book is imaginative, the setting is explosive, the battle scenes are comparable to Hollywood, and the characters are even more brilliant.

It's really good to read. There are many detailed descriptions, and it's not as exaggerated as other articles. The author must continue to update it. It's okay to go slower, but it must not be unfinished [Adoration]

I think this book is the he version of "I Really Didn't Want to Be Reborn", which allowed me to see the figures of Xiao Yu'er and Treasure Girl. To be honest, when I first read this book, I thought it was still a B story, but when I looked at it, I actually saw another version of Chen Hansheng's "Have Both Worlds", which I didn't expect. Reading this book made me feel like I was reading another version of "I Really Didn't Want to Be Reborn", which slowly made up for the regrets and affection of the year. It was very healing.

It looks good, it looks good, and there will be more updates from the author! The author, please create another group [crying][crying]

This novel has an exciting plot with ups and downs, and the characters are vivid and vivid. The writing is captivating and quickly draws readers into the story. The theme is profound and thought-provoking, and it is a masterpiece worth savoring.

It is a book with a very youthful flavor. I think of the popular literature on youth pain when I was studying in the past. It has the same sense of youth, but this one is sweet. The author's writing is good, maybe not mature enough but it has a unique flavor. I hope he can continue writing.

It's very nice and suits my taste, but there's a little bit of poison in it and there's a little misunderstanding (it's not a misunderstanding, it's just a concealment. Anyway, I felt quite uncomfortable when I looked at it. The author also said it later in the chapter, but there is an indescribable feeling that it's not that good), so I can only give 4 stars for this review. It depends on the person. If you can adapt to this kind of thing, this book will definitely be full of stars. I will keep chasing this book (I like Mu Yunxi [smirk] [shy])

This review comes from Chapter 366. The character description is very clear, and the daily trivial matters do not make people feel repetitive. The two female protagonists each have their own character characteristics, but up to now, I feel that a lot of parts have been deleted. The male protagonist had a dream-like stage of time travel, but so far it has not filled in the pit. After Xixi was drugged, the male protagonist's mood was playful and smiling. Seeing this, I suddenly felt down, but generally speaking, it is not easy to find gold in 💩 [Sending Hearts]

As an urban love story on Tomato, the quality of this book is undoubtedly excellent, but approaching 300 chapters to get down to business is still too slow on a cool writing platform like Tomato. This is why I gave four stars. It is a very interesting book [Blow Kiss]

The writing is really good, very immersive, the plot is smooth and comfortable, quite sweet, the characters are well drawn, and the plot logic is online. It is the best love novel I have read in a while.