Azure Files: I Asked You to Help Me, but I Didn't Ask You to Take Care of Me!

In the urban corridor built by BA fans, this work opens up an artistic channel unique to the Ring. The emotional depiction is as delicate as pointillist brushwork, the three views anchor the right path, and there is no sin of the collapse of cyber teachers' ethics. It can be called a model ruler for ring instructors. The original plot is as regular and orderly as a corridor path, with a closed loop of logic. The student characters accurately reproduce the charm of the prototype without excessive deviation, and the student characters fit the texture of the prototype. The Ring Masters Jury awarded its artistic rating: A+ Such masterpieces should be included in the list of treasures of the cloister

This book is the one with the most realistic character descriptions among the two creations of the Blue Files that I have read. It is the only one that perfectly displays the personality of the students. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into the characters. This alone is worth reading.

This is a very good book. The protagonist is lively and humorous. He occasionally teases students, but he is very measured and will never do anything outrageous. The detailed description of the characters is very vivid, the plot is not bad, and the OOC is not too serious. In short, it is a good ba fanfic

I personally feel that I have done the best within my ability. I personally feel that I have done the best that I can within my ability. The plot progresses relatively quickly in the first ten chapters, but the rest of the story will take into account the psychological reactions and roles of other characters, so it will be slower. In short, I personally feel that the future is promising, and I also hope to get more book reviews.

Next, I will give you the most direct, truthful, penetrating, naked, harshest, sharpest, most profound, most realistic, most unvarnished, least roundabout, least roundabout, most heart-wrenching, most hard-core, most straightforward, most neat, most refreshing, most decisive, and least ink. The least procrastinating, the least sloppy, the most poignant, the least merciless, the least humane, the least showy, the most disrespectful, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straightforward, the most direct to the point, the most direct to the core, the most tearing away the appearance, the most tearing away the disguise, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least polite Greetings, the least flattering, the least hypocritical, the least sensational, the least pretentious, the least artificial, the least internal friction, the least nonsense, the least elaboration, the least redundant, the least empty, the least detour, the least detour, the least nagging, the least nagging, the least procrastination, the least hesitation, the least hesitation, the least tactful, the least subtle , the least vague, the least secretive, the least hidden, the least concealed, the most straightforward, the most candid, the most candid, the most magnanimous, the least filtered, the most realistic, the most realistic, the most direct to the essence, the most see-through, the most unreserved, the most sincere, the purest, the most unconcealed answer: 5 stars! ! Must give 5 stars praise! !

The early writing was okay, but I felt that the grudges and conflicts between the heroines were not well written. After reading this book, I felt a little uncomfortable, and I was still confused, why is Ayane, the heroine of Abydos? If it were someone else, the viewing experience would be much better. At the same time, the character description of the heroine is not very good. But it's very good in terms of action scenes and ideological education, and overall it's relatively compact! Come on, author!

The author is very lively and friendly, and the plot is novel and very good. It meets my expectations as a teacher for the ending of my students [laughs]. I hope the updates will not be interrupted or unfinished. I wish the author's books will get better and better [laughs] Come on, author.

This book is really good to read, and the author is very active. Basically, the daily updates are not delayed (although the time is a bit hellish), but the plot is definitely the best among the best, the relationship between the characters is well handled, and some new characters are introduced (serious spoilers: other characters in the first week, but not Heizi, Lao Lei and Prona). I hope the author will continue to work hard. If the update is interrupted, then the author will wash up on the bed and wait for my dad [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [sneaky laugh]

This book can be regarded as one of the few excellent works among Blue Files fans. The writing style is a little green but the details are exquisite. It has excellent control over the students' personalities. So far, I have not seen the OOC phenomenon. Lingjie's protection of students is heart-warming! All in all, I personally think it's good to read. I hope the author can bring me greater happiness in future stories. With stable updates, I should be able to complete the book. Finally, Bang Bang Ka Bang

The most enjoyable part of the BA series. The only pain point is that the pace is a little slow. Also, the plot seems to only focus on a small number of students, and the other students' scenes are no different. However, I won't be too obsessed with it. After all, the plot is very comfortable and it is considered top-notch among the BA series.

Intelligent battles, battles, comedy, emotional lines... The male video has all the advantages except Sese, so what else can I say, I give it 5 stars. I read the first ba article on Tomato. I started my second brush, and I enjoyed watching the part about the millennium.

The writing is very good, especially the protagonist is a robot. This element is unprecedented among all the ba fanfics I have read. I hope the author will continue to write well, come on!

The time should be almost up (if it doesn't last more than thirty minutes, I'll review it later). Overall, this work is a BA fanfic with a strong personal style and very lovable character design. In terms of writing style, the author uses a lightweight oral text, mixed with gags and jokes, and keeps the plot as simple as possible, so that this sense of relaxation can be maintained throughout. In terms of plot design, this article has made a lot of original designs in line with the overall tone of ba. It quickly attracts readers through novel settings in the early stage, and the plot in the middle and later stages is also remarkable. In terms of character creation, both the protagonist Mio and the ba characters in the original work are very bright, and there are no common OOC or weird faces, which I like deeply. Of course, story is an art of balance. While this work has the above-mentioned advantages, it also inevitably has flaws. For example, the complaints and nonsense make the story slightly abrupt to a certain extent, but the freshness and comedy of this work also neutralize the perception to a certain extent. To sum up, this is one of the rare Tomato novels that is worth reading.

I have finished reading the first volume, Chapter 217. Brief summary: It is a super masterpiece. The main character's outlook on life is very upright. I think this is a highlight. The writing is interesting and I have the desire to read on. It is an upper-class delicacy in terms of both quality and quantity in Tomatoba [Like] Compared with other books, this book is very creatively integrated into the story of Zhoumu. The surviving characters of Zhoumu come to the current world, which makes the story of this book go in the opposite direction from the plot of the game. Delicious, needless to say The daily friendship is perfect and interesting, and the youthful vitality is similar to the relationship between men and women. It is a little bit worse, but I think the flaws are not outweighed by the flaws. The most important thing is that this author is very motivated. As an author of a 400,000-word work, I like Pigeon very much now, but this author has written more than 400 chapters and is still insisting on updating. Even if the data is not very high, he can be so persistent. You have really won my respect and admiration!

It's very interesting and has more updates. It has a single female protagonist, but the author didn't say you can't have a girlfriend [laughing]

It looks good, the portrayal is good, the early story preparation is also good, the later content has good jokes, it is very enjoyable, and the character portrayal is very good. The protagonist is very attentive and gentle, and it goes without saying that he is powerful. But I feel like the protagonist will be a little tired. Overall, it's a great experience for everyone! ! !

Let's give it a rating first. I see that there is nothing uncomfortable so far. The protagonist is Superman Smyr, and his body is gradually developing into a human. There seem to be four female protagonists. It seems that Abydos is Ayane, and Gehenna's is Airu. I haven't seen the others. The fighting scenes are good, and the daily life is also very warm. I give it five stars.

A rare piece of good fan fiction. The protagonist is not invincible at the beginning, but stands in front of the students step by step. Change the students' destiny step by step. At the same time, the author's own creations are also very powerful. The plot is also very eye-catching. I hope the author can continue his efforts and that this novel can last longer. Because these are great stories.

It looks good, I love reading it, write more, write better, shasha, hehehe... [Laughs evilly]

The characterization is very good, and the protagonist is a mechanical ascension, so handsome! He is a reliable adult, quite chivalrous, not a fake, and the protagonist is quite good.

Ahhhh! ! Author, you are fragrant, soft, sweet and glutinous, sweet and greasy with honey butter, crispy, smooth, tender and dense, bouncy and silky, fluffy, sweet and pine, oily and moist, fine It's a small cake that is soft, dense, moist, sweet and crispy, soft and tender, fluffy and sweet, thin and fragrant, bouncy and tender, fragrant, sweet, crispy and crispy! Overall not a hit

I'm at a loss for words, but in short it's very interesting. The main plots cross over on a daily basis. After reading each chapter, I can't stop reading it and want to come back to another chapter. Key updates are also very fast. I was so high after finishing the new chapter

Generally speaking, this novel is good and can be regarded as one of the better among Ba novels. Although I am not a teacher, I don't feel any disobedience. The feeling of reading it is quite good. In summary, it is a very good novel.

It looks good, the author writes well, this is what I want to read!

The quality of this book is very good, the emotional line is not rushed, the characters are well developed, and it is not OOC. Good luck to the author. I watched it offline and have been watching it for three hours

It looks good. I feel that this book is also very good among the second BA books.

After reading it for so long, I can feel how serious the author is about this book. Except for the emotional scenes that are a bit jerky, the adaptation and control of the plot are very thoughtful. We can see the birth of miracles in it, and we can also see the protagonist laying the foundation bit by bit. It can definitely be ranked T0 in BA fan fiction.

It's very beautiful, the plot is very novel, and the protagonist's character is also very good

This is my favorite book, five stars directly

Very nice novel from Azure Files [Like]