Shock! It Started as a Big Black Tomb and Was Killed on the Spot.

"Emperor III" detected, automatic praise mode activated "Emperor III" is unparalleled in the world! "Tower Titan" is extremely smart! "Shady lady", sinking fish and falling wild goose!

The subject matter is very novel, and there are no major poisonous points for the time being. However, the details of some events are not very good. For example, regarding Teng Xiao, in theory, it should have exploded with Suihu first, then drank the moon and turned into a dragon to drag the big can Suihu into dragon madness, and then Bai Yan used the black sun to end Suihu. Not buddy, 5 open? Three books were updated today, with a total of 9 chapters. One was a day ago, and the other was five days ago. It's a bit scary, brother [salute]

Okay, okay, this topic is very good. I think the protagonist can pretend to have two personalities: the Iron Curtain and the Black Tower. This would be very interesting (I'm just saying what I think, just take a look)

The book is very good, but the perspective changes too quickly, and each part is too short. It felt like the perspective was cut off when I first read it, and many of the perspective cuts were very abrupt. Also, the main character has too few roles.

The subject matter is good and the writing is good, not cliche. Update frequency is very fast. It shouldn't happen with normal updates, huh? Author, please continue to write more! ! ! Not as good as before

It looks good, please be sure to write it down. The format you created is one of the few among fans of the Collapsed Star Railroad, and your writing style is very good. As long as you can maintain stable updates and the current quality of creation, I can ensure that the rating of your work is definitely above 8.0. Since you are writing an if line, it is actually easier to develop. You don't have to worry about running out of inspiration. The Collapse Star Railway has a very complete background setting, which can be found in the game text. You can use these things and combine them with your own ideas to write. If you really have no ideas, you can actually discuss it with everyone in the comment area. Many people actually have very rich inspirations, but they are unable to realize them due to various reasons. The above is my little evaluation. I wish you a happy life and serious creation [Love]

It's very interesting to watch, and I like the plot, but there's content in the middle of it that I can't understand because I've never played it [crying] [laughing] ? The skewers are a bit different, right?

I like the setting of the main character's appearance, although the rough anthropomorphic appearance is well known. But for the other settings, the joy of participating in it no matter what, and the almost-to-be-written Yunwu past, I really have no desire to read it (for my own reasons). As for why Bai Heng, a soldier who participated in Star Wars, would play master-servant play with the protagonist, I just jumped on it, so I won't comment. The character setting of the protagonist is quite satisfactory, and it doesn't bother me at all. My idea is how the huge data of the Iron Tomb + the memory and thinking of the Black Tower will come into contact with it as a time traveler. Will he be overwhelmed by the huge amount of information and feel like he is the Black Tower or the Iron Tomb or Rupert III and need time to slow down, or will he be strong-willed and able to anchor himself without being affected? Then because he was cut down and had to regain his strength and was restricted by his happiness, he played the role of a bad guy who is neither good nor bad. . . It feels even less interesting than shaving off the traveler element and letting the black tower operate and steam it again. . .

The writing was pretty good, but the author was really happy with the writing later on. He wrote the fate branch, from more than 230 chapters to more than 320 chapters, and it's not finished yet. As for saving Huo Hao? No such person found [laughing evilly] Kids, I'm back. The latest news is that the author has written Chapter 367 and hasn't finished writing fate yet👍 Here I Come Again. It looks like it's about to be finished with more than 390 chapters of Fate, but I don't know if Huo Hao has been found yet (suppressing laughter) Children, the latest chapter is still writing fate [laughing evilly]

When will we be able to return to the plot of Iron Breaker? To be honest, I am not interested in plots such as the Holy Grail. The reason I read this book is for the dark plot. Can you give an accurate time when the Holy Grail chapter will end?

It's so beautiful and abstract enough. I kept laughing when I saw the last part. I don't know why. It's just very funny. I feel that that part of the plot is very funny. I want to laugh for no reason. Then it's very interesting. It's interesting. It's very interesting. Come on, the author keeps writing.

The shady lady is unparalleled in the world, the intellectual iron curtain is extremely smart, the Emperor III is talented, the shady lady is superior in intelligence, the shady lady is extremely smart, the shady lady is unparalleled in elegance, the shady lady has a beautiful heart and mouth, the shady lady is wise and clever, the shady lady is both talented and beautiful, the shady lady is like a fish and the goose, the shady lady is born with beauty, the shady lady is fragrant, the shady lady is beautiful! Let us sing for Ms. Shady, the beauty of Shady is the best in the universe, the knowledge of Ms. Shady is famous among thousands of stars, the name of Ms. Shady is resounding throughout the world, and the power of Ms. Shady is all over the world! The sleeping soul is awakened by her, the doubts in the heart are answered by her, and illuminated by her thousands of mirrors. I admire you. She is in admiration! She is our great god, and she is our shining light! Let us praise the shady lady. The extremely beautiful shady lady awakens the "nothingness"! The natural beauty of the shady lady makes "harmony" sing! The invincible shady lady makes "intellect" fear. Stop reading, everyone, listen to me [vomit]

Personal opinion. It feels very comfortable to watch, very natural, the kind that I haven't seen for a long time, and the feeling of fan fiction. Moreover, the rhythm of the plot is relatively slow and not rushed, but some impatient readers may not be able to stand this. The characters are not too interesting, and the plot connection is also very good. Yes For me, it is a very comfortable fanfic, and I highly recommend reading it. The pace of development may be slow, and the plot span is a bit long, which some people cannot stand. For elderly readers like me, it feels very comfortable. The content and story plot are also quite rich, and I feel that I can write a lot. Come on, author! Just follow your own pace, just don't interrupt updates (´°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ω°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥｀) I checked other people's comments and found that they are basically fans of Beng Tie, so stories other than Beng Tie are not that attractive, which is why there are so many people (who can't speak normally). The author can change the title a little, similar to "Becoming a shady person, tampering with the script with joy" or something like "Becoming a shady person, tampering with the script for joy" (not very good at naming), which can slightly deflect the audience. I really don't want the author to be cool, and I also hope that those people can find the book they really want to read, not just a fresh picture.

There is one thing to say, at least I have finished reading it. The most abstract part of the whole text is the 5th Holy Grail War. The author has read both the 4th and 5th Holy Grail War. The logic and character introduction of the 4th time are better. For the fifth time, the author obviously felt that he was writing. The problem here is that there are too many faces. Can you believe that more than 800 chapters of the Xianzhou line have not been completed yet, but other lines have been completed ahead of schedule. But now I don't write faces anymore. The author obviously felt that there was a problem, so he stopped writing temporarily, started other branches, and started to promote the main line. I think it's pretty good. My recommendation is the 5th Holy Grail War. You can skip it directly. It will have very little impact on the script. The ending of the 4th War is more important. You can skip it in the middle, but you must read the ending. This is an important part of the whole article. Generally speaking, it is on the right track now and I still support it.

The front is pretty good, but when will fate end?

The plot has no poisonous points, it is relatively tight, and the rhythm is very comfortable. It has both relaxed daily life from different perspectives and a tense main line of the protagonist regaining his strength. The world view is not too big or too small, just right, and the author is very powerful. He updates it six times a day. I highly recommend it. Don't stop, don't stop.

Give it 5 stars for support, the previous writing is still very interesting. The updates in the last few months are almost all about the Holy Grail War, with a little bit of the Iron Collapse World plot interspersed in between. And it's almost 100 chapters now, and I'm still looking for the first Holy Grail War, and 10 years later there will be a second Holy Grail War. According to the way it was written the first time, the second time will probably be about 100 chapters. In this case, the Holy Grail War will occupy more than 50% or even 60% of the content of this book. This is a bit off topic. I hope the author can maintain the quality and grasp the direction, or change the title and introduction of the book to attract more book lovers who like the Holy Grail War.

To be fair, the death of the Black Tower cannot really be blamed on Bo Shi Zun, because Bo Shi Zun's mechanism is very simple. He only asks questions and does not answer. Black Tower asked him what divinity is, and Bo Shi Zun said it is in Omphalos? Nonsense, Bo Shizun would just ask back, which genius in the Genius Club asked Bo Shizun to answer the question? Bo Shizun just gave them a question. It was Yiting who tricked the Black Tower. Because they couldn't get into Onfalos, they found someone who had the ability to get in. Bo Shizun probably figured out her fate when the Black Tower asked, but he didn't say, how normal is this? The Star God would care about the life and death of a destiny walker? Bo Shizun didn't care about his own life and death, let alone the life and death of a genius like Heita. Not to mention Bo Shizun, Xun Xun said he cared about the immortal boat. In fact, the immortal boat was exploded by the evil things of abundance, and Xun Xing didn't care about it.

The plot has no poisonous points, it is relatively tight, and the rhythm is very comfortable. The author's writing skills are very good. It has both relaxed daily life from different perspectives and a tense main line of the protagonist regaining his strength. While ensuring the quality, it can also update five times a day, sometimes six times. It is highly recommended. Don't stop, don't stop. It can be seen that the author wanted to create a very grand world view, and adopted the Bentie worldview and the Holy Grail worldview. This is a good thing, but the branch plots account for a small half of the main plot. However, the people who read this book are basically Bentie players who know very little about the world of the Holy Grail, so readers have less and less desire to read more. The character creation is relatively strong, and the details are well drawn. I will read it again when I get to Wengxing.

Well, it can be said that this can be regarded as a Holy Grail War fanfic

A- I feel that the time and length of the cup battle are too long, and it feels like more than a linked set. The perspective changes very quickly, but it is acceptable in terms of viewing experience, except that the golden descendant is a bit careless. The rhythm is a bit off, but barely acceptable.

It's very interesting, but the multiple visuals make it a bit confusing to read, and the sudden addition of Xingyue makes it even more confusing for people who don't like the Xingyue type. I can only say that the author's imagination is very good, and he writes wherever he thinks. It is indeed very free.

Suppression Park Chang Desperate situation Breakthrough Self Prove Peak Shackles Answer Dependence End Interpretation Calmness Adversity Confidence Infinite Break Dilemma Question Reversal Temper Limit Stop Illusion Result Will eventually win Calmness Break away Restriction Field Peak Past Farewell Memories Bondage Broken mirror Fragmentary Inferior Gap Details Talent Breakthrough Interpretation Talent Concentration Calmness Details Technique Escape Mentality Upper Limit Breaking Stop Suppression Breaking Free Calm Escape Seeing through Reversal What is Destined Breaking Hope Commitment Despair Doubt Fall Strength Dusk Final State Aspiration Addicted Training Cold Heart Confidence Breaking Illusion Promise End Peak Answer Parting Responsibility Maintain Expectation Interpretation Afterglow About Technique Dependence Regain Insomnia Stop Broken Emotion Change Frankness Limit Destiny Memories Pain I Can Details Kiss Goodbye Chase Relief Entanglement Rainfall Loss Absolute Shackles Miracle Bad Hands Give Up Limitation Result Emotions Final Look Back Sincerity Fantasy Fallen Defeat Cold Mood Talent Trajectory Fate Apology Random Breakthrough Technique Desperate Self Proof Peak Shackles Answer Dependence End Interpretation Calm Adversity Confidence Infinite Control parents

The protagonist has a role in the early stage, but disappears in the middle and late stages

A lot of fun, very, very much, Duo Lezi is suspected to be a clone of the god of fun. The narrative is relatively peaceful and there are not too many difficult scenes to accept. Moreover, the feature of this book is that it has multiple timelines running at the same time, so it will naturally change the perspective frequently. This may have advantages and disadvantages.

No tricks. If you like Fate, you can watch it, but if you like Bengtie, don't have too much hope.

Overall, it is a good work, but it is not suitable for readers who like fast pace. For readers who don't understand Xingyue's world view, it will be difficult to read later. The scenes behind the protagonist are rarely considered minor offenses, and the main plot is pushed very slowly. Where is Huo Huo? I think pushing the monthly line at the same time and the golden line at the same time will give a good impression.

If line shady story, very interesting, looking forward to the follow-up

I'm curious, can the author reply to me? I have something to ask you. I feel that your work is very well written. The details of the writing and the plot are very good. Let me reply to you. Why do I only give four stars? Because there is one thing that makes me feel a little uncomfortable. That is, the protagonist is being controlled, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable. In fact, the protagonist keeps listening to the words of the system and feels that he does not have his own meaning. I am used to less plots of this system. The above are my own opinions.

The subject matter is quite novel. Anyway, as long as we keep updating it, judging from the current plot, more and more people will watch it.