Reincarnated as a Slime, Walking the Path of the Demon Lord Again
转生史莱姆，重走萌王路
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 165k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
76Chapters
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Don't be too fussy about details, it's pretty good, and you can tell that the author is a novice, and the writing style and logic can be improved. But now it reads a bit bland, like drinking sweet water, a little sweet, but not sweet enough. It may also be a matter of personal preference, but it feels like the development is too fast. The dialogue and background stories between the characters can be richer, and the world view can be interspersed, and more details can be added to the characters. Otherwise, the characters feel not three-dimensional enough.
Come on, author! By the way, can you put the slimes in holy clothes?