[Unhinged, Beautiful God, Top × Supreme Grandmaster, Bottom]
Power Couple, Lovers Torn Between Love and Hate, Devoted Love
I am the youngest master of the Heartless Path in the cultivation world. Countless souls have fallen beneath my sword, yet no one has ever seen me draw it.
They all thought my Dao heart was unshakable, until the day my heavenly tribulation came. I crushed my own life-bound sword with my bare hands.
Amid the lightning filling the sky, I smiled at the void. “You’ve watched for three hundred years. Are you still not going to show yourself?”
The entire cultivation world thought I had gone mad. Only I knew that the presence that had followed me like a shadow ever since I began cultivating had finally seized my wrist the instant the heavenly lightning struck.
The first part is particularly good, the forced love is so exciting, the middle is also okay, although it is no longer forced love, the protagonist has been looking for a heart light, but the protagonist is very strong, and the unyielding will runs through the whole story. The second part is confrontation, which is not very good, because everyone knows that it will succeed in the end, it is not very intense, and the excitement is not very good, because everyone knows the plot after reading it, and the writing at the end is weird, and the writing is not as good as before
Looks good 😘
It's beautiful. The emotional and main lines are both good. I don't even know how to describe it. It's just one word. Good luck to the author! 😘😘
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