How I Was Reborn as a Chubby Esports Manga Girl

The author's perspective is relatively peaceful, and it seems that he has more experience. The relatively refreshing article is more like a coming-of-age light novel. I just clicked in and read it, but in the middle of the night, I was moved by some sentences. The female protagonist's perspective is pretty good among male authors, and the supporting female characters also have a growth-oriented communication with the female protagonist. Although some of the wording between the lines is still not appropriate enough. If the author wants to write a female channel, he can avoid using words that insult women. The perspective is delicate and the pace is a bit slow. The elements of e-sports + weight loss + live streaming + group love are a bit complicated. However, the writing and the author's positive and sunny attitude towards life are like gurgling water, which makes people's eyes brighten on a platform like Tomato, which is a place where you can just leave your head and have fun. Personally, I think this article should have a higher score, so I gave it full marks. Suggestion 1: Streamline the content. Many people abandon the article because it is not enjoyable enough. The protagonist must grow rapidly to mobilize the dopamine of readers in the fast food era. Suggestion 2: The content and the main characters' relatively simple life dilemmas (such as overly thrifty old people, their own obesity, young people's lack of money), etc. Are more down-to-earth. The author's writing skills are obviously weak when it comes to the elite class. The next book can amplify the author's strengths and describe more about the process of simple people's struggle and reconciliation (the author is very suitable for writing group portraits, you can try the form of a unit drama) Suggestion 3: The author's gender perspective lacks the excitement of Mary Sue and Pink Bubble compared to traditional female channels. The plight of the female protagonist and some male protagonists is too real, bringing with it the dust and stickiness of the real world. For a stock-buying novel with a love focus and a female audience, it lacks a sense of fantasy. , And the description of the love of the elite class is a bit like the old-fashioned works like Yi Shu. For the current heroines, it lacks the sense of decisive killing. I suggest that the author can write a male-channel light novel similar to "Relife", so that the protagonist can influence others with his personality charm and experience. Suggestion 4: The heroine had a far-sighted vision and a self-improving personality from the beginning, but she was suddenly trapped in such a body and was covered up. Although the writing is touching, the character of the protagonist is not embarrassing in the online article, lacking a sense of growth and It feels refreshing. Readers of Tomato either want to see the beautiful, powerful and miserable past of an outsider, or they want to take on the role of an ordinary protagonist who has extraordinary magic skills behind his back. The author's next book can create a principal/village chief-type leader, and write about how a group of people break through confusion from the perspective of a group portrait. Suggestion 5: Authors are divided into worldly and worldly types, and you are obviously a worldly type author. Although you are weak in romance, you have experienced life and dared to discuss some problems in young people's lives sharply at the beginning of the book. This penetrating power is not something that some young authors can possess. I hope the author can use his strengths and avoid weaknesses to find a theme that suits him.

The author is as powerful as the mystery. In the beginning, he used the story of mystery to filter out the readers who were not suitable for this book, and made the people who stayed really fall in love with this character, and also fell in love with the heroine who is closer to ordinary people. It is a book that describes love, family affection, and friendship in a very real and delicate way. There are even thoughts revealed in some places that many people cannot understand in their lifetime. Although the name is Rotten Tomatoes, it is a romance novel that does not conform to the mainstream of tomato aesthetics at all. It is like a plate of boiled cabbage served in a fly shop, so it is very well written but does not score high. But the good thing is that if you really read it later, even people who can't understand it can find some relaxing and happy parts, and the reading experience is excellent. If you have doubts about love and are troubled by Chinese-style families, you may have a different feeling after reading this book.

The author's writing style and the vitality of the heroine impressed me. The life scenes are really very realistic. The heroine is trying hard to live the way she wants before and after time travel. There are hangups but not big ones. In the game competition, she is not particularly happy and has a smooth progress, but there is a feeling that regret is the norm in life. It is very solid. Maybe it is because I have no expectations for "love" that easily deteriorates in reality. After all, the gold content of "it will always be the same in the end" is still increasing, so I like not to leave after writing. Compared with the career line and the realistic love line, the changed emotions are really not that affordable. To be more precise, they feel like a set blind date. The author presets their "love", and then the plot allows them to meet and interact. The episode made them coincidentally, but I can't actually see how they fell in love with each other (PS: Lin Long deserves to be liked by anyone). Every time I see the love line, I feel like I have a lump in my throat. I really like Lin Long but don't want to abandon the article. It's quite confusing. It's better not to force it. I can't bear this embarrassing relationship line, and it's almost pushing aside Lin Long's career line.

It's not a cool novel, it's more life-like. All the characters have their own strengths and weaknesses and will grow up slowly. I have a personal understanding of the term "high intelligence". My understanding is that someone who can rely on his or her personal abilities to solve various problems can be called a person with high IQ and high emotional intelligence. I also hold the same view among rivals, because most people in the world do not have the ability to solve problems. Of course, the protagonist has a solution that she thinks is appropriate based on the situation she is in. Things may not necessarily get better, but they will definitely not get worse. After all, life is unpredictable, hahahaha. In short, thank you for reading my little book. I am also very grateful to my friends who like this book. I wish everyone all the best and good luck!

It's good-looking. It's rare for a female host to have a career. I like the character very much. It makes me want to recommend more books. The author should stop being lazy! I searched for many books in Tomato, and they were either bisexual or deviated from romance. This is not good. I like this book. If nothing else, I will read it to the end.

The protagonist is very powerful, whether it is his ability to see people's hearts or his ability to solve problems, and his thoughts are also impressive, but when he is with the male partner Chen Wen, he degrades (to put it a bit harshly). Of course, it is good in moderation, but the subsequent date monologue really made me feel tired. What does it mean to be moved by Chen Wen's behavior? Please, it is the date that he arranged, so it is only right. If the date was arranged by the protagonist, the protagonist would also arrange it in an orderly manner. I have never played Hearthstone before, and there is an uncomfortable emotional scene. I feel that Chen Wen has too many scenes, which is equivalent to a career line and a relationship line in half. But in addition to these two, there are also friend lines and system lines. I can understand that the protagonist and Chen Wen will grow up together, but they become two people. I really missed it. Alas, but the author's description of the protagonist is really unique to me. This comment was written after I decided not to abandon the article but still wanted to read it, so I read another chapter. Whether it's the handling of mysterious events, the dialogue between the original character and the protagonist, or the clever way the beautiful girls work together to resolve the embarrassment, it all left me with endless aftertaste. Can the author create a version where Chen Wen is a friend? It's not like friends can't grow together.

It's very beautiful. The heroine is tenacious, optimistic, hard-working and loves life. Have the ability to solve problems and the right to say no bravely. The mind is sensitive and delicate. But she won't force herself for system tasks. There is a little bit of appearance anxiety, but in my opinion, this is a very three-dimensional point. It is very close to life. In my opinion, it is impossible for everyone to have no appearance anxiety at all, but the heroine does a good job of turning this little appearance anxiety into motivation to promote herself. This actually motivates me quite a bit. In fact, I still particularly appreciate the heroine's courage to say no. In fact, I have read a lot of novels. I have been reading novels for seven or eight years. It is rare that I encounter female protagonists who are brave enough to say no. Basically, you do it when the system issues a task. Then you save someone who is unconscious on the roadside. Then if someone breaks into the house, you help him. Otherwise, someone asks for help. After saving, that person becomes a subordinate or something else. Those are foreshadowings, but I don't really like this. Why do I do it when I think it's troublesome? Yeah, but the heroine handled it very well. He has his own rhythm, his own way. I don't remember much about the man who opened the barbecue restaurant, but the heroine's move of returning the money to him was really decisive. I can't say that I was shocked, but rather surprised. At that moment, he could still use a method that did not violate himself. That trouble solved. As I continue to follow up, what impresses me the most is the heroine's personality. When I look at him, I don't really care what she looks like. How much does she weigh? It's really hard not to be impressed by her inner qualities. Inspired. She is truly a wonderful person, someone who many people can't help but get close to. So I completely understand why those two men kept approaching him. To be honest, I think both of them are kind of terrible. His life was in a mess, and he came to disturb the heroine. Like leeches... But we can't go either. Don't give people the right to pursue good things. But in fact, if these two boys are used as a mirror, it will reflect the shining points of the heroine very well and make the heroine fuller. I still like this very much. All in all, highly recommended

The author gave me the feeling that he has read a lot of books, he is very expressive, very delicate in some places, and has a magical sense of humor in other places. The words really touched me. This article involves some games (I only know how to spray pesticides) and I basically don't read articles about games, but! This is very attractive to me. There are a lot of games that I like to watch (actually not too few, but I personally feel that there are few). The heroine is really good and very good (lack of expressive skills). She knows what she wants and is very strong. I really like it. I basically listen to the book on Tomato and then do my own thing. If I miss a part, I will miss it. But with this one, if I miss it, I will go back and read it again!!!! The rating was too low and I almost missed it!!!! Highly recommended

What the living person writes is different, we don't eat pre-made dishes! The plot is very smooth and just the right amount of fun. The Golden Finger system talks less and gives fewer bonuses, so the combat power is now very balanced in the e-sports world. Several supporting characters are also very distinctive. The exchanges between Xuanji and the heroine sometimes seem preachy, but they are also very enjoyable. I don't really watch games like Hearthstone, but it doesn't affect the plot development. It's very good and I like it very much! I love reading novels like this. Dead Tomatoes will give me a negative review every time I re-tweet the AI ​​article.

It's very comfortable to watch!! Don't give five stars for fear of pride First of all, I want to say that the writing is smooth, which is a plus, and then I want to talk about the points that many readers may not understand. One is that the writing style of this book is more realistic. Although the heroine has a system, it mostly has some functions to improve efficiency and randomness. Unlike other systems that make beautiful writing, her step-by-step progress is really slow. Secondly, the author will pay more attention to the description of the character's psychology. It may be relatively long but it can well shape the arc of a character. Maybe it is because the heroine is still growing up and has contradictory points, but it also creates a protagonist for us very well. For example, she is sober, fragile, smart, and over-the-top. These points may be continuously improved as the plot continues. The rest of the characters that appear are very three-dimensional. Those who have the patience to read non-shuang articles to grow up may consider reading this book. Ps: Moreover, the author's professional description of the characters is very good, and it can be seen that he did not write it out of obscenity.