About My Rebirth as a Fat E-Sports Comic Girl

The author's perspective is relatively peaceful, and it seems that he has more experience. The relatively refreshing article is more like a coming-of-age light novel. I just clicked in and read it, but in the middle of the night, I was moved by some sentences. The female protagonist's perspective is pretty good among male authors, and the supporting female characters also have a growth-oriented communication with the female protagonist. Although some of the wording between the lines is still not appropriate enough. If the author wants to write a female channel, he can avoid using words that insult women. The perspective is delicate and the pace is a bit slow. The elements of e-sports + weight loss + live streaming + group love are a bit complicated. However, the writing and the author's positive and sunny attitude towards life are like gurgling water, which makes people's eyes brighten on a platform like Tomato, which is a place where you can just leave your head and have fun. Personally, I think this article should have a higher score, so I gave it full marks. Suggestion 1: Streamline the content. Many people abandon the article because it is not enjoyable enough. The protagonist must grow rapidly to mobilize the dopamine of readers in the fast food era. Suggestion 2: The content and the main characters' relatively simple life dilemmas (such as overly thrifty old people, their own obesity, young people's lack of money), etc. Are more down-to-earth. The author's writing skills are obviously weak when it comes to the elite class. The next book can amplify the author's strengths and describe more about the process of simple people's struggle and reconciliation (the author is very suitable for writing group portraits, you can try the form of a unit drama) Suggestion 3: The author's gender perspective lacks the excitement of Mary Sue and Pink Bubble compared to traditional female channels. The plight of the female protagonist and some male protagonists is too real, bringing with it the dust and stickiness of the real world. For a stock-buying novel with a love focus and a female audience, it lacks a sense of fantasy. , And the description of the love of the elite class is a bit like the old-fashioned works like Yi Shu. For the current heroines, it lacks the sense of decisive killing. I suggest that the author can write a male-channel light novel similar to "Relife", so that the protagonist can influence others with his personality charm and experience. Suggestion 4: The heroine had a far-sighted vision and a self-improving personality from the beginning, but she was suddenly trapped in such a body and was covered up. Although the writing is touching, the character of the protagonist is not embarrassing in the online article, lacking a sense of growth and It feels refreshing. Readers of Tomato either want to see the beautiful, powerful and miserable past of an outsider, or they want to take on the role of an ordinary protagonist who has extraordinary magic skills behind his back. The author's next book can create a principal/village chief-type leader, and write about how a group of people break through confusion from the perspective of a group portrait. Suggestion 5: Authors are divided into worldly and worldly types, and you are obviously a worldly type author. Although you are weak in romance, you have experienced life and dared to discuss some problems in young people's lives sharply at the beginning of the book. This penetrating power is not something that some young authors can possess. I hope the author can use his strengths and avoid weaknesses to find a theme that suits him.

The author is as powerful as the mystery. In the beginning, he used the story of mystery to filter out the readers who were not suitable for this book, and made the people who stayed really fall in love with this character, and also fell in love with the heroine who is closer to ordinary people. It is a book that describes love, family affection, and friendship in a very real and delicate way. There are even thoughts revealed in some places that many people cannot understand in their lifetime. Although the name is Rotten Tomatoes, it is a romance novel that does not conform to the mainstream of tomato aesthetics at all. It is like a plate of boiled cabbage served in a fly shop, so it is very well written but does not score high. But the good thing is that if you really read it later, even people who can't understand it can find some relaxing and happy parts, and the reading experience is excellent. If you have doubts about love and are troubled by Chinese-style families, you may have a different feeling after reading this book.

The author's writing style and the vitality of the heroine impressed me. The life scenes are really very realistic. The heroine is trying hard to live the way she wants before and after time travel. There are hangups but not big ones. In the game competition, she is not particularly happy and has a smooth progress, but there is a feeling that regret is the norm in life. It is very solid. Maybe it is because I have no expectations for "love" that easily deteriorates in reality. After all, the gold content of "it will always be the same in the end" is still increasing, so I like not to leave after writing. Compared with the career line and the realistic love line, the changed emotions are really not that affordable. To be more precise, they feel like a set blind date. The author presets their "love", and then the plot allows them to meet and interact. The episode made them coincidentally, but I can't actually see how they fell in love with each other (PS: Lin Long deserves to be liked by anyone). Every time I see the love line, I feel like I have a lump in my throat. I really like Lin Long but don't want to abandon the article. It's quite confusing. It's better not to force it. I can't bear this embarrassing relationship line, and it's almost pushing aside Lin Long's career line.

It's not a cool novel, it's more life-like. All the characters have their own strengths and weaknesses and will grow up slowly. I have a personal understanding of the term "high intelligence". My understanding is that someone who can rely on his or her personal abilities to solve various problems can be called a person with high IQ and high emotional intelligence. I also hold the same view among rivals, because most people in the world do not have the ability to solve problems. Of course, the protagonist has a solution that she thinks is appropriate based on the situation she is in. Things may not necessarily get better, but they will definitely not get worse. After all, life is unpredictable, hahahaha. In short, thank you for reading my little book. I am also very grateful to my friends who like this book. I wish everyone all the best and good luck!

It's good-looking. It's rare for a female host to have a career. I like the character very much. It makes me want to recommend more books. The author should stop being lazy! I searched for many books in Tomato, and they were either bisexual or deviated from romance. This is not good. I like this book. If nothing else, I will read it to the end.

It's very beautiful. The heroine is tenacious, optimistic, hard-working and loves life. Have the ability to solve problems and the right to say no bravely. The mind is sensitive and delicate. But she won't force herself for system tasks. There is a little bit of appearance anxiety, but in my opinion, this is a very three-dimensional point. It is very close to life. In my opinion, it is impossible for everyone to have no appearance anxiety at all, but the heroine does a good job of turning this little appearance anxiety into motivation to promote herself. This actually motivates me quite a bit. In fact, I still particularly appreciate the heroine's courage to say no. In fact, I have read a lot of novels. I have been reading novels for seven or eight years. It is rare that I encounter female protagonists who are brave enough to say no. Basically, you do it when the system issues a task. Then you save someone who is unconscious on the roadside. Then if someone breaks into the house, you help him. Otherwise, someone asks for help. After saving, that person becomes a subordinate or something else. Those are foreshadowings, but I don't really like this. Why do I do it when I think it's troublesome? Yeah, but the heroine handled it very well. He has his own rhythm, his own way. I don't remember much about the man who opened the barbecue restaurant, but the heroine's move of returning the money to him was really decisive. I can't say that I was shocked, but rather surprised. At that moment, he could still use a method that did not violate himself. That trouble solved. As I continue to follow up, what impresses me the most is the heroine's personality. When I look at him, I don't really care what she looks like. How much does she weigh? It's really hard not to be impressed by her inner qualities. Inspired. She is truly a wonderful person, someone who many people can't help but get close to. So I completely understand why those two men kept approaching him. To be honest, I think both of them are kind of terrible. His life was in a mess, and he came to disturb the heroine. Like leeches... But we can't go either. Don't give people the right to pursue good things. But in fact, if these two boys are used as a mirror, it will reflect the shining points of the heroine very well and make the heroine fuller. I still like this very much. All in all, highly recommended

The protagonist is very powerful, whether it is his ability to see people's hearts or his ability to solve problems, and his thoughts are also impressive, but when he is with the male partner Chen Wen, he degrades (to put it a bit harshly). Of course, it is good in moderation, but the subsequent date monologue really made me feel tired. What does it mean to be moved by Chen Wen's behavior? Please, it is the date that he arranged, so it is only right. If the date was arranged by the protagonist, the protagonist would also arrange it in an orderly manner. I have never played Hearthstone before, and there is an uncomfortable emotional scene. I feel that Chen Wen has too many scenes, which is equivalent to a career line and a relationship line in half. But in addition to these two, there are also friend lines and system lines. I can understand that the protagonist and Chen Wen will grow up together, but they become two people. I really missed it. Alas, but the author's description of the protagonist is really unique to me. This comment was written after I decided not to abandon the article but still wanted to read it, so I read another chapter. Whether it's the handling of mysterious events, the dialogue between the original character and the protagonist, or the clever way the beautiful girls work together to resolve the embarrassment, it all left me with endless aftertaste. Can the author create a version where Chen Wen is a friend? It's not like friends can't grow together.

The author gave me the feeling that he has read a lot of books, he is very expressive, very delicate in some places, and has a magical sense of humor in other places. The words really touched me. This article involves some games (I only know how to spray pesticides) and I basically don't read articles about games, but! This is very attractive to me. There are a lot of games that I like to watch (actually not too few, but I personally feel that there are few). The heroine is really good and very good (lack of expressive skills). She knows what she wants and is very strong. I really like it. I basically listen to the book on Tomato and then do my own thing. If I miss a part, I will miss it. But with this one, if I miss it, I will go back and read it again! ! ! ! The rating was too low and I almost missed it! ! ! ! Highly recommended

What the living person writes is different, we don't eat pre-made dishes! The plot is very smooth and just the right amount of fun. The Golden Finger system talks less and gives fewer bonuses, so the combat power is now very balanced in the e-sports world. Several supporting characters are also very distinctive. The exchanges between Xuanji and the heroine sometimes seem preachy, but they are also very enjoyable. I don't really watch games like Hearthstone, but it doesn't affect the plot development. It's very good and I like it very much! I love reading novels like this. Dead Tomatoes will give me a negative review every time I re-tweet the AI ​​article.

It's very comfortable to watch! ! Don't give five stars for fear of pride First of all, I want to say that the writing is smooth, which is a plus, and then I want to talk about the points that many readers may not understand. One is that the writing style of this book is more realistic. Although the heroine has a system, it mostly has some functions to improve efficiency and randomness. Unlike other systems that make beautiful writing, her step-by-step progress is really slow. Secondly, the author will pay more attention to the description of the character's psychology. It may be relatively long but it can well shape the arc of a character. Maybe it is because the heroine is still growing up and has contradictory points, but it also creates a protagonist for us very well. For example, she is sober, fragile, smart, and over-the-top. These points may be continuously improved as the plot continues. The rest of the characters that appear are very three-dimensional. Those who have the patience to read non-shuang articles to grow up may consider reading this book. Ps: Moreover, the author's professional description of the characters is very good, and it can be seen that he did not write it out of obscenity.

It is indeed a good book, and the emotions are very delicate. I like the way the male and female protagonists get along with each other, and I also like the thinking logic of the female protagonist. But since it is a career-oriented novel, shouldn't you work hard on your own e-sports career instead of relying on the system to cheat? What is this? Your opponent has the skills that you have trained hard to compete with you, but you cheat and win for him? After reading it, I wanted to give up the novel but I couldn't let go of the relationship because I really like the male and female protagonists written by the author and the bond between Xiaoxia Xuanji. I couldn't bear to give up this relationship, which is rarely to my liking in Tomato. . . . With these two thoughts, I felt so uncomfortable watching it that I could only glance at it and not pay attention to the career line. (I just said my thoughts after watching it. Of course, some people like to watch this type of thing, but it just doesn't suit my taste. I didn't say it was bad for people who like to watch this line. I also wanted to protect readers who don't know.)

Love it! Show them all to me! A true group portrait with the heroine as the core! Everyone in it is very real. I like the heroine Ye Long the most, she really has a delicate heart. Secondly, I like the male protagonist Chen Wen. His family doesn't like him yet, and I hope he can be solved in the future. Well said in the author's introduction! Two-way growth and salvation! I don't hate people with shortcomings, but I don't like people who are unwilling to face their own shortcomings. Ye Long, I like it so much! It gives me a look that is worldly but not worldly, a person with a very positive inner nature and a hard-working life. It makes people's hearts warm. The heroine's growth line is very clear! The gold finger is not very big, sometimes it is close to nothing, but it is useful at critical times! Like!

It's super good-looking. Even though I have no interest in e-sports, I can still read it like a fascination. I like this kind of inspirational and realistic articles. Although it is different from the mainstream aesthetics of beauty, strength and misery, it has a feeling of Japanese dramas and some Japanese literature that I like. There are not so many twists and turns and magnificent ups and downs. It is light and very healing. A person lives a good life, even if it is some small difficulties and troubles in other novels, such as renting a house and finding a job, in the process of dealing with these things, you can also feel the heroine's many delicate emotions and kindness and tenacity. Isn't this the source of the small happiness in life? Take care of your own life safely, even if it is just tidying up a room, and when you are healthy and fat, you also want to keep your beautiful self at this stage. Accept your good and bad qualities calmly. The author writes very realistically, this is our ordinary life, and the heroine will also meet some "Celestial Dragons", e-sports stars, female roommates who are bosses, etc., Which also meets some small and refreshing points. It's been a long time since I've seen an article I like so much. I hope the author will keep updating and support me~

The plot is interesting, the personal analysis is deep, and the characters are well developed. However, there are many words that insult women, and in some plots and details, it can be seen that the author is a boy (but this is okay, it is not meant to be an accusation). Friends who have this requirement for books should think twice.

I caught up on it from the previous book. . This one is still very good. The pace is slower, but the water flows steadily. The content is more realistic and different from the current mainstream. It feels a bit more nurturing, and slowly watching the plot develop, the heroine loses weight step by step, and her game level becomes stronger. The plot is logical and very logical. Whether it is the previous book or this one, my biggest feeling is that the author has strong control over the characters. The character creation of the protagonist is very exciting and unique. "She is the main body of decision-making." It is different from the previous system flow. If you like philosophy, you can read it. Pursuing this book will enrich your outlook on life while eating. It can be seen that both the author and the heroine have high IQs. Every time I see the heroine trying to do something well in the plot, I actually feel a little satisfied inside. The heroine's growth + counterattack are my "fun points". The strategic heroine really deserves her reputation. All in all, it's very beautiful.

The writing is really good, the writing style is really good, the character of the heroine can be said to be my favorite in Tomato so far, she is very real, she may also have negative emotions such as sensitivity, vulnerability and low self-esteem, but she can digest herself very well, use her own rationality to analyze sensibility, and achieve self-sublimation. I also like the character of Rong Wen very much. It is really like a beautiful jade covered with dust. I hope that the author will allow us to see Rong Wen lose the wind and frost of the world and reveal the high-spirited spirit he once had. The other characters also have their own characteristics, and they are not group portraits with facial makeup. Since I don't play taverns very much, I can't comment on whether the plot design is reasonable or not. However, the rhythm of the plot is also very good. The interweaving of the career line and the emotional line will not make people feel abrupt and confusing. However, it is indeed very slow. I personally think that it does not officially start until around the 30th chapter. In short, it is a high-quality novel [Chigua]

Although I was very tired after reading this book, with a lot of inner drama, the growth and breakthroughs of the heroine and the hero are still very attractive. This is a very enjoyable book, but it is different from some other novels where the heroine counterattacks. Now that I read about the heroine getting better, I still occasionally think of the heroine's initial unbearable experience. When I read other counterattack novels, I rarely think of the heroine's initial misery. I lamented that the heroine's journey was not easy. Although the heroine has a system, it also requires the heroine to really have the ability to solve problems in order to make good use of the useless assistance. The heroine is really trying to live a good life. All in all, the plot is very attractive and I stayed up late wanting to watch it👀👀👀😁👍

It's a very, very beautiful article, how come the score is so low? ? ? ? The hostess is sober, the logic is clear, and the system cheats are not too high. It is a growth-oriented article. . . The author's writing style is also very good, and you can feel his literary skills. . . Neither the male protagonist nor the female protagonist has perfect characters, they have some sharp flaws, but they are still attractive. . . I just haven't played the game and I can't understand it, and it feels like it requires very complicated calculations. This part affects the viewing experience a bit. . . I'm happy because it's being serialized and there's more to read later, but I'm unhappy because I'm stuck in a new trap and have to wait every day. . .

The plot is good, it's not the traditional kind where you get a system and you become beautiful all of a sudden, and you charm others with your beauty. The system provides very little help. The heroine is clear-headed and has a strong personality, and there is relatively little description of her appearance. The male protagonist also knows how to respect women, has a very restrained character, and redeems each other. The two of them become better from being imperfect little by little. The only thing I felt uncomfortable about was the e-sports competition. The heroine used system skills to peek at the screen and use system skills to force the contestants to tell them their unique skills. It feels like cheating. The system can increase hand speed, but you can't cheat directly [laughing awkwardly]

A purely subjective comment. I personally feel that this novel is completely in line with my taste. Some of the unspeakable little details of life will be analyzed for you one by one in this article, and those emotions will be expressed gently, delicately and slowly. The whole article has the feeling of noticing a street you casually walk through in daily life, and the autumn leaves falling on it. That kind of thing that you feel is just a microscopic thing in life actually runs through the entire life. There are many passionate scenes and no lack of details of life. Throughout the article, every detail is strictly controlled, the logic is rigorous, and the plot is compact and smooth. I feel that if a physical book is released, I will definitely buy it and collect it! Friends who have high requirements for the heroine's character, IQ, and strict logic must give it a try! Very nice! (Maybe some parts are a little unrealistic and beautiful, but it is a novel after all) Author, please change the name! ! ! Cry)

It's very interesting, and the characters that appear are all very vivid. I like the author's portrayal of them, and their images are full-bodied. For example, Xia Yang, I thought he was a classic lively and cheerful boy, but he turned out to be a "child" who lacks love. It surprised me. It's very real. Let's talk about the protagonist Lin Long, I really want to fall in love with her! Decisive, smart, positive, and will admit her mistakes readily and generously. She is the most "complete" character in the series. Her experience in the past life has made her stronger. She is mostly an "influencer" when getting along with other people. Falling in love with her is only human. Chen Wen's "Brother Can" is a rare type of male protagonist in romance novels. I resonate with him. He has a high moral sense and high cognition. He is trapped by his original family. He is getting rid of it in the latest chapter, which is good. There is also a mystery that surprised me. A strong woman leaves her father behind and leaves her son behind. She is highly intelligent. She is persistent in the perfect plan and has grown in raising children in the later period. No one is a saint. All in all, I like it very much. The content is different from what I imagined in the introduction. I thought it was just a cool article about game upgrades. I didn't expect the characters to be so detailed. Of course, the career line is also very good. Although I can't understand the game, it doesn't stop me from finding it exciting. Super super pretty!

This book is really worth reading. I haven't seen such a good e-sports article in a long time. Moreover, the golden finger given to the protagonist by the author is not particularly big. It seems that I have also begun to lose weight [laughing], I want to reduce my weight from 110 to 100 pounds! Believe me really, the more you read this article, the more you read it. Even a fat girl wants warm happiness, you bastard.

I think this is a novel suitable for everyone to read. It contains some phenomena and psychological issues, as well as logical thinking... Large-scale thinking and dialogue. Feel like this thought and conversation is a little too long, which makes it feel more like a textbook? But it is less rigorous and fundamentally solves problems than textbooks. But in short, it contains a lot of content that the author thinks about himself. Maybe it's because I am more utilitarian and pragmatic. I think it is a good thing for an online writer to be able to provide some help or open up ideas for readers, so I highly recommend this book.

This book is particularly beautiful and engaging, and the author has a lot of knowledge and can learn a lot of good principles. Moreover, the emotional line between the heroine and the hero is particularly good, and the heroine is also very charming. But why not give it five stars? Mainly because it was so heartbreaking to watch. The female protagonist almost won the first place in the city competition. What Sister Qian said later, and the male protagonist's mother, was very unfriendly to my breasts. But this book is very worth reading, it's super beautiful (you can tell from the fact that I was heartbroken when I read it, but kept reading it). The heroine is a very charming and sober heroine, but she is different from the heroine in the traditional sense. She is a new era woman. And the author's writing style is also very good, especially the emotional lines! (I don't mean to say that the career line is bad, the main reason is that I have never played a game similar to Battle Flag, so I can't understand it.) It's very delicate.

I like the heroine very much, she is very sober and rational, and her character is also very three-dimensional, but the emotional line is a bit lacking. It was acceptable before they got together. After all, the heroine's career was still the main focus, and the relationship was the adjustment; but after they got together, the relationship line was too long, and in order to let the heroine learn to rely on the hero, suddenly a lot of troubles were added. The time-travel system told the hero that he still hoped for life. In fact, I just want to watch the heroine's path to becoming a world champion. I'll watch it again when I have the chance. Forget it at this stage.

It's not a cool novel, it's a slow-burning one. The heroine is very useless at the beginning, but after reading about 20 chapters, it becomes more and more exciting, especially the heroine's delicate inner monologue and emotional analysis. It can be seen that the author is very intelligent and super rational, with clear logic. The reason for giving 4 stars is the emotional line. I can't accept the dragging characters of the male and female protagonists. You are dark and I am dark, and you sing and then we appear. Although the author stated in the article that it is because of their personalities, but it may be because I am too old to watch this kind of extreme pulling and pulling, and I just want to watch some sweet love🥹

The writing style is very realistic, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very eye-catching. There is a novel written in a few years that has a very solid writing style and is very suitable for publication. However, if it is published, it will be overhauled. Many conflicts will be simplified, and the career and emotional lines of the heroine will be highlighted? But the author's description of the human heart is actually very brilliant. It's just that it's so real that I feel angry just watching it. It's really beautiful. I still think the main character's relationship is very beautiful. It feels like the author has been in love at first glance. The setting of the heroine as the absolute emotional leader is really cool.

Not bad, a very subjective protagonist. The part that tells the author's point of view is surprisingly non-preachy, round and clear-cut, and flows into the plot. The disadvantage is that the emotional line squeezes the main line too seriously, so there must be a male protagonist. It is completely different from the career novels mentioned in the comment section. It is essentially a love novel.

The early stage looks great! ! ! ! There is no lack of interest, no lack of fresh characters, no lack of positive energy output of self-awareness, and it does not follow the same old tricks. It combines ruthlessness with reality and expresses one's own opinions. I really like it very much. There are really famous quotes! ! ! ! But! After seeing Chapter 291, I'm going to give up on the article. The plot has been dragging on for many chapters. The introduction says there is no cheat code, but through the system, you can gain years of accumulated experience from a person with a favorability rating of over 100. Isn't that enough cheat code? Moreover, it doesn't really match the heroine's character. Some book friends said that if you didn't rely on the system, how could you defeat Kejie so quickly? It's not that you can't rely on the system, but the premise of the system's clichés is to follow your own wishes. As a diligent player who strives to improve points, how can the heroine know it so easily? Later it felt like it was written by someone else. There are too many pages in the later part of "The Family's Short Story", and it almost feels like a farming novel. Is it better to use the space of accumulating game experience instead of the length of "The Family's Story"? I understand that the author wants to delve into the deep psychological problems of the protagonist, but... Ah... Can love heal...? 😮‍💨The more I talk, the more I feel old. It seems that there is no problem, I am getting closer to reality. I would give it a semi-recommendation. I would give it a 9.5 For the early part of the story (because the great boyfriend and the heroine are not together yet) and a 5.7 For the later part (maybe it's only 1/3 of the story now?) (It's just average, but the overall style is a little bit crooked). But I'll often read the ending, when I'm short of books [laughs]. Ah🤔When the author wrote the intimate part, he was such a primary school student [shy][shy][shy][shy] Hahahahahahaha

This book is really a thoughtful book, and the emotions are described appropriately and delicately. But as a reader with a weak and sensitive heart, and my own family is a bit similar to Rong Wenwen and Xia Yang, although not that extreme, it made me very painful to read. Not only that, every character that the heroine comes into contact with, including herself, has psychological pressure that cannot be relieved. I feel like I will become an emotional trash can like the heroine. I don't have as strong an adjustment ability as the heroine. The plot is really interesting, but the author's point of view required me to endure great pain to digest, so I had to find some relaxing videos to relax before and after reading this novel. I originally wanted to chase one down, but now I'd better let it go for a while.