Steal My Fortune? I'll Master the Martial Way and Become a Saint

The inner drama is too rich, it's hard to complain, why not give me a dreaming system, I won't bear the hardships, I'm still good at martial arts, I'm hiding myself, my family will sacrifice to heaven, I'll kill everyone in my family, I'll have no worries, I'll be successful and famous

I have read all the chapters now. How can I say it, it is very good. It has been a long time since I saw an online article that made my eyes light up. Especially the character creation, especially Chu Yang, Zhao Ming, Zhang Kuang, and Zhou Wenyan. I think it is very well written. Although the screen time is not much, the characters stand out immediately, which is very good. There is a bit of fun, of course. There is not much in the front before the martial arts gym. It's just for setting the stage, which is understandable. But in the back, especially in the martial arts gym, the fun begins, which is very good. Maybe it's because there are only about seventy chapters so far and the story isn't enough, but I think it can be done and it has potential, so keep going. 👍👍👍👍 It's been a while since I watched it. How should I put it, the early stage was dull, but it had a goal, and the characters were pretty good. For example, Chu Yang and Cousin Zhou were all very good. Both the protagonist and the readers knew what the goal was, and then they counterattacked and slapped each other in the face. It was fun at first, and it was pretty good until I returned to my hometown. But after bringing my parents to the city, things started to get complicated, with various settings, repeated explanations of the worldview, various transitions, dumbfounding, and half-sentences, sometimes Chen Shanhu, sometimes a reformer, sometimes a wanted criminal, and sometimes a person from the government, as if he was afraid that readers would understand. In fact, these can be expanded gradually later, and there is no need to cram so much into just a few chapters. The first part of the writing is actually quite blurry, but I can read it because the protagonist has a goal, but the second part is completely confusing and I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. I really can't finish reading it.

Yes, it's good-looking. The male protagonist cultivates steadily and steadily, instead of being directly invincible through the system. The process of his hard work is well written. He is a dog at the beginning, then half-dog, and his ambition is gradually revealed. Currently, there is no female protagonist. The 4 stars are because the author has bad writing habits. He has to use the sentence pattern of first negating and then affirming every 5 sentences, "No, no, yes", which is too frequent and very annoying. It is a bit like borrowing AI. Many AI articles on Tomato have this sentence structure. It is not, it is, but → it has become a highlight for me.

I'm really watching it seriously, but I can't stand it anymore. What should I say? So true!! As the bottom of the society, as the bottom of the family, the family paid blood and tears, but was sacrificed as a matter of course! It's not that I don't work hard enough, it's that hard work will never be rewarded. I saw a little person using up all the resources, trying his best to climb up, and trying his best, but still stumbling and unable to take on the role of the protagonist. It was too sad, too wronged, too depressing, and too realistic! But as someone from the bottom of society, I can empathize with him so much! I have been tortured thousands of times in real life, but I have to be tortured again by him while reading a novel? Forget it, bye! 😢😢

First of all, the story is really good! It would be better if the author didn't use too many adjectives and too many explanations of his own, because the beginning of a scene is a long paragraph of descriptive nonsense. After watching it for a long time, I haven't entered the plot of the story. After watching it for a long time, I will get tired!

It's a great novel. The author's writing style is also very good. Maybe because of some plots in the beginning, people gave it a low star rating. Once you join the martial arts gym, the whole plot becomes sublimated. Please be patient and read a few more chapters. This is a book with great potential. The setting is also very good. The plot behind it is very exciting.

Seriously, why do so many book friends give it such low ratings? I also read the reviews, 6 points is very low, 8.5 Points is about the same Let's talk about the advantages first. The writing is good and fluent. The story background and starting setting are very attractive to me. I will update it directly in one go. Disadvantages: 1. Author, your ability to come up with book titles is really not that bad. 2. There are errors in some names (for example, logically it should be name A, but it is written as name B). The author should go back and review it carefully. Try to avoid such careless mistakes. 3. The support section is too wordy, especially the scene where the cousin recognizes the protagonist. There are too many words. I used at least 1 chapter before and after. It is superfluous. 4. There is one big logical error: Two members of Qiyuan Cult found broken wood in Mipu. According to their style of doing things, I must ask directly. So many people have seen this and spread it everywhere. Even if you sit down in a restaurant, you can hear it. The author went in a big circle. I can only say that sometimes when the plot needs to be promoted, especially important plots, it is troublesome to think logically before writing.

This novel, although the main plot is slow, the details in it, that is, the life plot, can make up for the boring feeling of the slow plot. If it can advance the process of the weird side at the same time in the initial stage, it will be a very good novel. The advantage is that the writing is solid and not boring. The disadvantage is that the pace is still a bit slow. However, it is eight stories higher than that kind of brainless system novel. It can be seen that the author has written the article carefully.

I saw Chapter 135. If you want to read mindless and cool articles, you can leave it. This is a logical, step-by-step novel. The protagonist has a golden finger and a halo, but it is more of a steady step-by-step approach. There are many geniuses and many opponents. He is not a Long Aotian-type character, but a quite calm character. This is the type I like to read. While moving forward, I am in awe of everything, my opponents, and the world.

I have read more than a hundred chapters. How can I put it? In fact, the author's writing is quite good. It is basically the best among the same type of subjects. But maybe because the author has to work and is not full-time, he always forgets the previous plots. Sometimes the previous ones are inconsistent with the later ones, and the settings conflict. This is the first point, and then the second point. It is a bit too boring. Warriors should not be like this. They feel timid in many things. This kind of article author Maybe the writing is too detailed, causing the plot to go by very slowly. Of course, I don't think it is a shortcoming, but I saw that there are only more than 200 chapters in total. It turns out that the protagonist has not solved the family affairs in more than 100 chapters. It is too slow. If more than a thousand chapters have been written, I definitely don't feel that it is procrastinating and I can read it slowly. However, it is a bit too watery to finish the book and there are still many things that have not been resolved. Of course, the author is definitely very good at writing. Only after I have written it do I know that writing novels is difficult. Come on, author.