Shangguan’s Journey Across Terra

The previous chapters and paragraphs are too long, and the writing style is still relatively young, so it is too easy to be discouraged, but it improves later, and it is still worth reading. It is for this reason that there are fewer people now 🤦 👍

Overall, it looks pretty [OK] ❤️ Except for a lot of typos

It's okay, but listening to books is a kind of torture Also mark the punctuation marks. It's a bit uncomfortable to listen to long difficult sentences.

Give me five stars for encouragement. There are indeed many typos. You can also try listening to your own novel while you read it. Listen and watch. It's still easy to hear

Although the writing style is young and the paragraphs are large, it may easily dissuade some people, but I feel good if I persist until the end.

Come on, author, try your best to correct typos