Orion*****

The writing is quite good, and the emotional descriptions are also very delicate. However, Lin Qing is described too much like a man, especially except for the beginning, and he is used to describe everything later. However, if this is the perspective of the heroine, it would be understandable. After all, men dress up as women, but some plots are really awkward, especially that sentence. My woman, I really have a sense of seeing the boss's literature. Even during the process of reading, I quit several times and clicked on the homepage to be convinced that this was a double heroine.

The writing is delicate but lacks details. 1. Why doesn't the heroine directly kill Wang's father (maybe out of consideration for family ties) 2. When did two people start sleeping in the same bed? 3. Why is the hunting dog there sometimes and not there sometimes? 4. When Lin was injured, did Wang only see his arm or his whole body? 5. Wang is a bit too partial to his younger brother, which is a bit annoying and stupid (because there is a girl who is one or two years older than him to compare with him) 6. Why won't Lin's sunflower water come? In fact, both boys and girls have Adam's apple, but it's not obvious in girls. Lin is a hunter, and he will have calluses whether he is drawing a bow or holding a knife. Why is Lin still a male after his identity is revealed? But there is a sense of solidity as if the clothes are tucked into pants

Everything written so far is very good, a simple and simple life diary of a small person, real and warm. Some farming stories always come up with an incredible life experience, or promotion to a noble position. Although the stories are interesting, they are really unrealistic and far away from the original intention. I hope this article will continue to maintain its current level and maintain its original intention.

Although the writing is quite good, it seems a bit like Edinburgh [thoughts]

It's pretty good. It would be nice if he were replaced by her.

The emotional line is quite delicate, and the two protagonists are well portrayed. The only flaw is that Lin Qing keeps using male pronouns.

It's quite good. Is this book not marked as having two female protagonists, so no one knows? It's a very good book. It's simple and simple, about living hard, and it has a happy ending. Although they live a good life, the author, shouldn't you give a sweet plot? 😂😂😂There is only one kiss ah ah ah

The writing is very delicate and true, it is a warm yet plain, long-flowing farming novel. The relationship between the protagonists is also gradual. Overall, after reading, there is nothing that is not connected. It is considered to be a very good farming novel with two female protagonists. It's a pity that the emotional line between the protagonists is a bit short, but the young couple is still very sweet and innocent [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's very interesting to watch and very close to reality. It feels the same as watching a TV series. The two female protagonists make their lives better and better little by little. One is the inside and the other is the outside. They slowly get along with each other uneasily and end up liking each other.

The language is fluent, the two heroines love life, and the smooth daily life is fascinating. It is very interesting and worth watching!

The characters are vividly described, the writing is delicate, and the logic is smooth. It is well worth watching!

Plain and warm, the green mountains are the evidence, and the years are peaceful, what we are pursuing

The protagonist's character is not broken, the plot is smooth, and it is worth reading. It is a rare farming novel. The protagonist has no hidden noble identity and no grand ambitions. The young lovers are just so ordinary and sweet.

It's pretty good. I like it [like][like][like][like][like][like][like]

It's really nice and beautiful, and the writing is not awkward either.

It's very beautiful. The water flows slowly. It makes people's hearts warm after watching it. Why is the rating so low?

The psychological description is detailed. The description of the scenery is vivid! The scenery of the countryside and the life of a hunter are written in detail!

Good-looking (○｀ε´○) I like watching it.

Finished reading, good, good, good

It's really, really, really nice!

The writing is smooth and delicate, very good

The steady stream of water

I really like this type of novel

It's okay, the water flows slowly.

It's bland. I didn't write about when the two of them would do that.

The description is very detailed, but I feel like the author sometimes forgets the plot. The writing is also very good, making people want to read on.

The author's writing style is really good and the writing is beautiful.

Wonderful and unparalleled

I really like this kind of farming story. It's simple and plain, about hunting and being diligent and thrifty about housekeeping. There is no space for it to be plain and plain. It feels more interesting.

I like it. The story is very good. I like it. I hope the author will produce more good-looking works.