By an unexpected stroke of luck, Yun Shu traveled to the novel world. Good news: he is the young master of the family. Bad news: he is a short-lived villain.
When he thought about the original plot where he kept trying to commit suicide and ended up with his family ruined, Yun Shu decided to keep to himself and be a transparent person.
However, when Yun Shu tried to change the plot for the first time, he found that it was not as simple as he thought. Despite his many interventions, the plot still did not change at all...
"What protagonist? What villain? I don't quite understand."
"What is this? Forced revision? Character's fate? What a joke."
"I'm just a peace-loving ordinary person. You have to force me to become a villain? Very good, you must resist."
Reader comments
Let's look at the author's comments and let's talk briefly. First, let me tell you the reason why I gave it four stars. I simply like to see the setting of a single female villain. Then a few observations: 1. Lack of conflict, no sense of urgency, basically all about narrative. 2. Many characters appear but there are no memorable points, like the various subordinates of the male and female protagonists. (This can be compared with the book Orange's Monster Girlfriend) 3. I feel that the male protagonist has a feeling that he has to shoulder everything. Of course, such a character is not uncommon. The key is that he wants to use part of his image to lower his image to make others have a better image of the overall power behind him. This is a bit contradictory and idealistic. If people's opinions in this world are important, the male protagonist should find a way to change his image. 4. The portrayal of the female protagonist is too straightforward and repetitive. Overall, she is very powerful and loves the male protagonist very much. With such repeated descriptions, it's time to gradually reveal the reasons, or open a separate chapter of memories ("City, I Became the Ultimate Villain" is like this, which can be regarded as its more outstanding part.), Or a little new plot will do. Simply talk about your opinion, you win.
Thank you everyone for clicking this book
To be honest, this is my first time writing a novel, and if nothing else, there should be all the problems [laughing and crying]
If you think there is something poorly written, I hope you can point it out directly. If I can, I will correct it. If I can't, I will treat it as a learning experience [laughter]
If you think something is written that is poisonous, feel free to spray it as you please [laughs awkwardly]
I hope you can comment more, I will read it all [blowing kiss]
It's okay, 4 stars to encourage you. There are currently relatively few conflicts with the original protagonist, and I don't see what the protagonist's attitude is towards the original protagonist. Is the plot a bit more everyday? It's not particularly poisonous.
I like this setting, the protagonist has his own ideas.
Let's look at the author's comments and let's talk briefly. First, let me tell you the reason why I gave it four stars. I simply like to see the setting of a single female villain. Then a few observations: 1. Lack of conflict, no sense of urgency, basically all about narrative. 2. Many characters appear but there are no memorable points, like the various subordinates of the male and female protagonists. (This can be compared with the book Orange's Monster Girlfriend) 3. I feel that the male protagonist has a feeling that he has to shoulder everything. Of course, such a character is not uncommon. The key is that he wants to use part of his image to lower his image to make others have a better image of the overall power behind him. This is a bit contradictory and idealistic. If people's opinions in this world are important, the male protagonist should find a way to change his image. 4. The portrayal of the female protagonist is too straightforward and repetitive. Overall, she is very powerful and loves the male protagonist very much. With such repeated descriptions, it's time to gradually reveal the reasons, or open a separate chapter of memories ("City, I Became the Ultimate Villain" is like this, which can be regarded as its more outstanding part.), Or a little new plot will do. Simply talk about your opinion, you win.
Thank you everyone for clicking this book To be honest, this is my first time writing a novel, and if nothing else, there should be all the problems [laughing and crying] If you think there is something poorly written, I hope you can point it out directly. If I can, I will correct it. If I can't, I will treat it as a learning experience [laughter] If you think something is written that is poisonous, feel free to spray it as you please [laughs awkwardly] I hope you can comment more, I will read it all [blowing kiss]
It's okay, 4 stars to encourage you. There are currently relatively few conflicts with the original protagonist, and I don't see what the protagonist's attitude is towards the original protagonist. Is the plot a bit more everyday? It's not particularly poisonous.
I like this setting, the protagonist has his own ideas.
Happy New Year to the author