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The pace of the writing is well controlled, slow but not procrastinating at all. The male protagonist's personality is better than that of 90% of male protagonists in urban novels. There is no pretentiousness and he has something to say. Therefore, there is no cliché link of creating conflicts through "misunderstandings" to promote the development of the story. It is worth watching. The only point worthy of discussion is when the male and female protagonists talk about what kind of boyfriend the heroine wants to find in the future. The heroine here is in her first year of junior high school and she says that her future boyfriend must not be worse than her brother. There is nothing wrong with this, it is in line with daily conversations in life, and it is probably a joking conversation; but from my personal opinion, the heroine here does not clearly realize the special emotions of the male protagonist towards her, or respond; her own paranoid feelings towards the male protagonist are not affirmed by her absolute reason. If possible, it would be best to arrange some inner descriptions of the heroine's heart so that the conversation is more than just a conversation and expresses a little bit of the heroine's bad intentions towards the hero. Of course, if you really want to talk about it, how could you think so much in the first year of junior high school? In short, the flaws outweigh the flaws. This book is very good to read. It is a T0 level Tomato daily text. It is highly recommended. (By the way, are you really not going to change some of the titles? Keywords like junior high school and high school can easily lead to a dark room~)

Good-looking, so good-looking [crying] It's a two-way redemption of words! Although the writing technique is a bit novel, and I just change a paragraph after writing one sentence, the plot is very good and the emotions are delicate. The brother is the sister's salvation, and the sister is also a part of the protagonist's life. It's so beautiful. [Crying] [crying]

The author writes so well. I like this kind of ordinary daily life. I have an idea. If the male protagonist disagrees with the female protagonist's confession in the future, the female protagonist drugs the male protagonist and imprisons him. The male protagonist has a very stubborn character. These years, she has only treated the female protagonist as her sister. The female protagonist will not force the male protagonist to commit suicide. It is just a personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Years later, Xu Yuanzhi looked at Lin Qingzhi with a big belly and asked her, are you very proud?

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I can only say that compared to some books, this book is okay, but too small. Can't the author update more than 40 chapters a day? We readers should read it too!

I'll give it five stars. It's written very carefully [Chigua]

It's very beautiful, the writing is really good, and the emotional aspect is really good, but the pace is a bit slow for me. It took a long time since I was 12 years old and just entered junior high school [crying] [crying] [crying]. I hope the author will not give up and persevere to finish it! ! !

The author's writing style is really good. The delicate words make people watch the little gardenia grow from being autistic at the beginning to being cheerful later. When I first saw the introduction, I thought it was a very common yandere article with little nutrition. I didn't expect the author's writing to be so beautiful. The characters are clearly created, rich in emotion, and real. Each person in the book has his own characteristics and can notice many small things. The waiting room of the high-speed rail station is described from near to far, and the different actions of different characters are described. The profile shows that the little Gardenia is curious about everything when going out for the first time, and has been observing the surroundings, which is in sharp contrast to the personality when they first met.

It's a very good nurturing article. Although my sister's "yandere" is only slightly budding at the moment, and the daily life is written warmly, I sometimes feel that it is just a nurturing article [facepalm]. But the author's writing style is online, so I am looking forward to how my sister's yandere will develop in the future. Secondly, the pacing is well controlled, and I quite like the character of the male protagonist. The other characters are also well-measured and not mindlessly entangled (in fact, I quite like Su Yu, and her crush is very rational). Come on author.

Dear author, please don't leave it there for a long time with the male protagonist's insistence on ethics and morals. I hope the female protagonist's yandere will not go too far. It's good as it is now. I like it very much. Come on author [blowing kiss]

It's good to watch, and it's really good to watch the slow pace occasionally. The heroine is arrogant and cute, and she doesn't feel too obviously yandere yet.

This is the feeling that I want😋, it's so cool~ As long as there are no bloody plots (misunderstandings or anything) later, just keep reading🉑

Now when I read a book, I feel like there will always be a Bai Yueguang behind me, and then I will start to abuse the article and chase my husband...[Face covering] Damn, it's hopeless. No matter if I use Douyin or Kuaishou, I can't stop once I read it. Now all I can think about is that

Although I haven't read many books, I still want to say that there are no good ones.

It's so pretty, give me a sister like this [crying]

Okay, okay, it looks good

Hey hey hey let me support you

In the slow pace of daily life, is it necessary to raise the heroine for 6 years? [Eat melon]

It's okay, but the cover is not that good.

The author hastily updated it, it's not enough [crying][crying][crying]

I can give this score mainly because it is quite warm in the early stages. It's really nice to listen to at night.

There is no doubt that they are good-looking, but there are currently a few of them, and they are open to cultivation [laughing][laughing]

Come on, author! Try to write 1 million words. Can you make the heroine more yandere and possessive?

It's not the plot I imagined, it's a two-way journey

Come on, it's great. Keep it for now and enjoy watching it later.

The writing is okay. It's a daily article. The pace of writing is very slow but it's pretty good. Can you please hurry up and write another hundred or so chapters? Let's give it three stars for the time being. I've just read the latest chapter. As mentioned before, the pace is very slow and the daily flow is very slow. The latest heroine is only in the third year of junior high school. The male and female protagonists have no obvious relationship between men and women. The writing is okay. So why are there two stars missing? Because the author has added a new male transfer student classmate of the female protagonist. He is a reborn student who seemed to know the female protagonist very well in his previous life. Isn't it a bit abstract to suddenly add a rebirth to a love story and it's not a male and female protagonist? The audience is not the same, and he also seems to have a relationship with the female protagonist. All I can say is The advantage of this book is that it updates quickly but the pace is slow. The author of the latest chapter is filling in new stuff, but I don't like it.

Looks good, I like this kind of cultivation, but I discovered it a little early

It looks good, it looks good, the writing is very good, I like it very much, please update more

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Why is the rating so low? [What][What][What] When can the dark room be closed?