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The talent expressiveness of the passerby A is so awesome. Without Su Feixi, a strong person from the Five Realms would not even notice the protagonist! As a result, a stranger's talent is as good as that of a sleeping husband, completely dysfunctional. These people below are all strangers! ! For example, colleagues of the staff when applying for certificates, Shu Yu'an subconsciously raised his head and noticed, The members of the Gale Team even directly chatted with the protagonist in the crowd. The merchant at the city gate also directly noticed the protagonist, No one can write passive talents like this... The evaluation of the protagonist's first talent by a strong person from the Five Realms: Divine consciousness cannot be locked... Visual vision is completely disabled... Aura is completely hidden... A ghost born for the dark night, this is simply the perfect embryo of a stalker and assassin.

This is the real cool article, md. Other cool articles still want to promote before suppressing, and they are always ridiculing. This book is very good. Especially for passerby talent, this setting is very good. Who says a passerby is not a genius? However, although this one has multiple female protagonists, I still hope it's better not to include too many. Three or four will do. Otherwise, it would be easy to write a stallion novel.

It's not bad, it's a bit old-school Internet writing routine, but it still reads relatively smoothly, and there's nothing poisonous about it. NB, I was wrong. The author used a little bit of Internet writing routine background, but other than that, there is nothing else cliché.

Very nice I think. Some people commented that the name of the third characteristic is the Crimson King at first glance. The protagonist is a passerby with talents, and his talents and characteristics will continue to evolve. The stronger the talent, the stronger the ability; the stronger the ability, the stronger the talent. Also has conceptual properties. The protagonist will also come up when encountering relevant things, which is relatively direct. I think it's good-looking because it's the talent of a stranger, not the shyness of a stranger.

It's well written, but it's a bit confusing. It's hard to imagine how the author will smooth things over for him in the future, and in the subsequent plot, I feel that this kind of deus ex machina is quite effective. I also hope that the author will not fail in writing and work hard

It's great, I read fifty chapters. The writing is okay, the emotional part is relatively delicate, and the high-level martial arts plot is also there. The overall atmosphere is bland and a bit cheerful. Taken together, it's very interesting (I've only read the first fifty chapters, so please forgive me if the author's writing style changes later)

Okay, okay, 7-9 points is no problem. Although the various plots are very cliched, the writing style is very good and makes people feel comfortable to read. Moreover, the talent and the title of the book are not to sell things on others.

I saw Chapter 90. Invincible flow, more of a daily style of writing. The main direction is the harem. The growth speed is extremely fast. You can increase some values ​​every minute, and add some mechanisms to yourself. You can quickly improve by stepping on the left foot and the right foot. Can explode when necessary. (It feels more like the dead Ronaldo is playing in the resurrection game, with all kinds of unreasonable improvements. He can even change his talent from a passerby to an observer at a critical moment. What is the difference between this and the author taking a pen to play in the game) The main thing is that the integration of this thing is quite good, this is good, the point is the integration. For example, one's own roll leads others to roll, leading everyone into the whirlpool of staying up all night. Or the strengthening technique can be used to strengthen the enemy alone, and the intestinal peristalsis is strengthened, which is lower than the forceful discharge of one's own. It can also be condensed into a lightsaber. Because the enhancement spell is a gain spell, general protection abilities are undefended by default. Really, one sword can cut the shit out. )

Needless to say a good book, this book made me see a theme that is very different from the mainstream of martial arts battles. He does not have so much violence, and there is no real brainless villain. Even if there is one, it is not a villain, but a silly and cute young master (not many scenes), he is more of a human being, and the relationship between the protagonist and his family always makes people feel warm and comfortable. It can barely be regarded as a cool article, but unlike mainstream cool articles, it does not use the technique of expressing desire first and suppressing it (that is, being ridiculed by the sidekick, and then the protagonist takes action). Most of the current cool articles still use this method even if the protagonist is more decisive in taking action. I can feel the author. We try our best not to feel aggrieved (being ridiculed by a supporting cast), but at the same time, we can feel that the protagonist is powerful and feel more relaxed. Moreover, the character of the protagonist has nothing to say. When it is time to explode, he will explode a little, so that his family will not be harmed at all. The plot is not ups and downs, and the protagonist is not in a physical condition to cause accidents wherever he goes. In the tomato circle, people always feel a sense of spiritual purification. I like this very much. What I have seen so far is more than 50 chapters. I hope the author will continue to maintain quality updates. Five stars.

It's still very interesting to read. Although it has the style of an ancient online novel, it's not a bad thing. It's not too poisonous or funny. It has a bland feel, but you won't feel bored after reading it. It's still very good. [Like] [Add 1 to bookshelf] [Already planted]

Looking at the writing style, there is a sense of classicism, which should be the word. Then, those emotional descriptions are very gentle, and it feels very warm. I like those daily plots very much. The point is that he should be handsome when he should be handsome. The talent of the protagonist is so funny, but he is also awesome. It gives people a feeling of being very awesome, but not competing for it.

So far, the overall impression is very good. The writing of the two female protagonists is also very good, there is not so much pretense and slap in the face, and the daily descriptions are also very warm and even passionate [laughter] As for other settings and the like, I took them through at a glance and personally don't care too much. At least for now, my mind wants me to continue playing and chasing. Come on, author! Samsung, with encouragement, went crazy to the harem and set it to be patched at any time. I can't stand it anymore. You only need to read the contents of the previous chapters and then just look at the chapter names.

Very nice, rare fine chaff. There is no code within the code at the beginning, there is no taunting, pretense and slap in the face, there is no brainer in entering the game despite knowing the danger to force the plot... Etc. This is a good review. Driving is the kind of elegant description that doesn't seem to have much desire to rush, but rather appreciation. The protagonist's character is the kind of person who values ​​his family, protects his family, and depends on each other for life. Therefore, this harem is a bit of a pure love harem. Both parties truly love each other, are responsible for each other, and regard each other as family members. There are just a lot of people who love each other. Not a stallion, not an Aquaman. Seeing Bai Laizhang, Su's current setting is probably the load-bearing pillar of the harem. Everyone else is moving, but she can't move... However, the protagonist's cheat is a bit big, he grows up quickly, and his strength is high. It's not bad so far. However, starting from the college entrance examination, the power of the cheat is revealed, and his combat power feels a bit expanded. I hope that the subsequent plots will be as interesting as now. Although we are still invincible now, most of them are daily, giving out sweets and laying out the world view. Invincibility is just a means and does not take up too much space.

Except that some plots are a bit classic, the overall plot is quite good, and the emotional description is also relatively delicate. It is a rare chaff in tomatoes. It would be better if lightning protection can be mentioned. Currently, there is no big thunder, and Xiao Lei is still depressed. I hope the author can mention the awareness of lightning protection, and I wish it a smooth completion [Like]

Zhuo Zi dreamed of a purple arithmetic problem at 3:30 yesterday afternoon, but Mushroom refused to sign because the clap in the refrigerator was too wet. Therefore, "possibility" rides a question without brakes and turns into a deep-fried ethical dilemma from behind the seventh comma. Note: The shoe on the left has voted to change Tuesday to Trapezoid, yet the sound of rain insists on pickling the clouds with an inverted sentence. Sorry, the cause and effect you called is temporarily unavailable. Please recite a paragraph of pi to the doorbell later. Ah, the ending is that an eraser eats up this sentence, leaving only an ellipsis sneezing in the corner...

After seeing this for the time being, it's pretty good (personal feeling). There's nothing deliberately trying to suppress combat power/IQ. It's okay. From the special training plot, it became more combat-oriented. It was very different from the plot before the special training. It's a pity. The previous writing was quite interesting. The emotional line is inexplicable...

I'll just say a few sentences, not much, just two sentences, just two sentences, specifically those two sentences, just those two sentences [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] It's almost watery. Two words, good-looking. Three words, really good-looking. Four words, really good-looking. Five words, really good-looking.

I have been following it, I feel it is really good, brothers, you can take a look, although there are some flaws, they can be ignored, I really think it is good. Five stars must be given. I hope the author can work hard and don't stop updating!

After reading a little bit, I found that the creativity is quite good and the plug-in settings are quite interesting. And the heroine setting is okay. The shortcoming is that the writing style is average, and the perspective is never placed on the protagonist, so the sense of substitution is not good. The perspective cuts are a bit frequent, and the emotions can affect the readers even if the protagonist's talent is there. When I read it, it didn't look like Gao Wushuang's novel, but rather a fresh urban emotional novel. If you are a fast reader who reads ten lines at a time, it will be very difficult to read, because you don't know who the camera will be cutting to in the next second.

In fact, fortunately, this book is in the good category on Tomato. The only shortcoming is that the update frequency is extremely strange. Sometimes it is less than 2,000 words a day and sometimes it is 6,000 words a day. I want to keep the book but I am afraid that I will die of it.

The writing is very good, but you should learn a little more about assassination methods. You must learn to use your strengths and avoid weaknesses instead of urgently fixing your shortcomings. Otherwise, you will be incompetent as a warrior. Although the hexagonal warrior is very attractive, the ultramarine is not impossible.

Queshi is so awesome. Don't be too annoying in the comment area. Besides having a training camp, is there anything that is similar to Zhanshen? And I don't know how to describe it. In short, this novel is comfortable to read and does not make people want to skip chapters. However, the quantity is really small, so as not to catch up with the large army and not watch it, it is better to wait for more and then watch it.

I think it's good-looking, and the writing is very good whether it's about daily life or training or missions. But the main theme has always been a very gentle feeling, and there is nothing very passionate or eye-catching. The hook is very big. If a knife cuts you in the face, can you bear it?

It's been a long time since I've seen someone write a cool article that's both funny and good-looking. I must praise it.

The plot is great and there are no poisonous points. Come on, the author [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

Okay, it's pretty good, the writing is quite heart-warming, the main character is from the underworld, okay, a passerby, a certificate of eternity, what kind of thing is this from the underworld, it scared the children to tears

I found a treasure. Originally, I didn't like to read martial arts stories with multiple female protagonists, but the introduction of this book attracted me, and the current word count is not many (more than 200,000). I thought about giving it a try, and I became hooked. The talent of the protagonist Lu Ren can be said to be beyond the standard, and he is extremely sinister. Any profession can be a passerby, and a passerby can have any identity.

Encourage me, the writing is good, but there will still be situations where some people like it and some don't. This is normal and quite interesting... My sister stole the house and ate it, which made her taste a little better. Our Laosu "Fair Competition" (suppressing laughter) Come on, be casual and don't be too like Long Aotian.

I am really strong with the protagonist, and I can keep stacking talents. I feel that it is because of the talent of passerby A, Tiandao thinks that the protagonist has no talents, and they are always stacking up. Moreover, the people around me can use Wushuang when they are in danger. Depending on their identities, they can turn into gods and giants.

The beginning of the story is quite satisfactory. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is a little strange at first, but later on the background of being dependent on each other is added, which makes it better. The golden finger is not very obvious, and the foreshadowing is still a bit too long, but in Chapter 32, for the heroine to finally take the initiative to show off her abilities, there are still some twists and turns.