Clan Cultivation: I Raised My Descendants into Immortals

I have read to the hundredth chapter. Overall, this is an excellent family cultivation novel. The author's writing is fluent, and the protagonist changes from a diligent and hands-on mortal landlord to a cautious newcomer who walks on thin ice when he first enters the world of immortality. The transformation is delicately and realistically portrayed, with a strong sense of immersion, and is worthy of five stars. However, in the subsequent plot, I feel that there are several areas that can be discussed, which slightly affect the reading experience: First, the logic of character behavior is occasionally abrupt. For example, around the 80th chapter, an alchemist who is at the fourth level of qi training takes the initiative to request "demon-killing experience." This move seems to forcefully advance the plot and is a little less convincing in the context of his shallow cultivation and limited combat power. Second, the sense of awe in realm setting can be further enhanced. In the article, the "Black Soul Old Man" uses the foundation-building skills to fight to the death of the Golden Pill, and the Golden Pill Sect is frightened to the point of closing the mountain and waiting for help, which may easily give readers the impression that the "Golden Pill is fragile". In the system of cultivating immortals, golden elixir and foundation building are often the watershed of strength. If the pressure and gap between high realms can be highlighted, it may enhance the reality of the world. Thirdly, as a family portrait article, I look forward to seeing the growth and interaction of more family members, especially the children. At present, the plot focuses more on the protagonist's personal development path. If more words can be allocated to the intergenerational inheritance, family ties and common struggles within the family, it should be more in line with the theme charm of "family portrait" and make the story richer. Overall, the foundation of the novel is very good. If these details can be slightly adjusted, it will definitely be even better. Come on, author!

More than 100,000 words. The logic is clear and the grades are clear. I look forward to the follow-up family content. I hope the follow-up will be a single female protagonist. The harem is really unbearable. Come on, author.

I finished reading it in one afternoon and overall it was pretty good. It would be better if the update speed is the same as the other one. There are some similarities between the two books, but this one is not about sword cultivation. There are too many tomato sword repairs, please do your best at the end!

I only watched it when I saw a single female protagonist. It should be that there is only one female protagonist, but it does not affect the harem. Having a harem does not mean that there is a female protagonist, so it is okay to have a single female protagonist, but I haven't seen many plots with these women. I think the plot of the story is quite good, so I can still watch it.

It feels pretty good I feel that the main character is basically the main character in the subsequent plot, which is all about the assembly line. The story development is blunt. All the characters are completed without online IQ, which is 1+1=2. It is very intelligent and has many poison points.

There are too few disciples in the Soul Yan Sect. There are only 6 Yuan Yings. How many disciples are there? The development of the Li family is too slow. In more than 400 years, there are only a few thousand immortals, while other families have hundreds of thousands of immortals.

Yes, the family novel is the best, rich in content, lively and interesting. Cheers to the author for raising the book

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After listening to more than ten chapters for the first time, the writing is up to standard and worthy of five stars!

Very good, a fine novel. I haven't seen any mistakes so far, but... Don't you have to hand over the spiritual stones you earned? You have to practice yourself, so where will the money come from? Chapter 110, 4 versus 5, two of the two sides died, 3 versus 2, the opponent still ran away? He must have more spiritual power than the protagonist and his father, because those three besieged two Chapter 111 How did his father say that he could keep one in private? Do you know the protagonist can steal? The other party won't fight for his family? The fruit given, and the plant? And refining qi for 5 levels more than a year? What are your qualifications? , Chapter 124, don't you rent it for 3 months and buy two bottles of elixirs each,... Ha tui