Shock! They Are Actually Real!

In simulation novels, especially harem simulation novels, the highlight and explosive point are the reunion and Shura field in the real timeline. Especially now that various templates have long been written badly, unless one has very outstanding writing skills and imagination and can write each simulation story in a fascinating way, many people will jump directly to the chapter to watch the reunion. Fortunately, the author seems to have discovered this problem. After the lengthy first simulation story, the second scene was simplified, which is good. You can consider breaking up the simulation story into pieces, blending it into the real-life timeline of the protagonist, and "triggering" it through certain key points. For example, when you see the peach blossoms blooming, you recall accompanying the empress to enjoy the flowers, and then recall an event story, you can use one or two or three chapters. The focus is still on what happened after the reunion. New authors are encouraged.

The writing is very good. I'm tired of reading ordinary simulation system articles. Either the simulation chapter is too long or the plot is boring. However, this book uses a rare narrative writing method to cleverly integrate the normal timeline and the simulation timeline. Every insertion of the simulation is just right. The length of the chapter is just right. It is not offensive and summarizes the emotional line of the male and female protagonists. There are also few system factors and it is basically OK. Ignore it, except for the assigned tasks, the emotional interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is the protagonist's independent consciousness. Unlike some system novels where the female protagonist is completely in love with the system, there is almost no poison. If I have to say one thing, it may be that the male protagonist is a bit passive and weak, but is not as strong as the female protagonists and feels guilty. It is acceptable. I don't understand why the score is so low. Overall, it should be 8 points.

I don't understand. The writing style of such a beautiful book is better than some books with a score of 8 points or more. But only 6.9 Points! Logically speaking, this kind of book should have at least a 7.5 Rating! ! !

It's okay. The simulation novel is a novel that focuses on emotions. The simulation mainly explains the emotional origins of the heroine and the protagonist. The emotional rhythm of this kind of novel is much stronger than those novels that have hundreds of chapters and are still playing the edge of the love war between you and me without feeling anymore, and the pure yang enchanting demon stallion novel.

Very well, the simulation scenes use a narrative approach and constantly switch between reality and simulation to describe events. This makes the simulation have a deeper sense of immersion. After all, the main focus of the simulation is the emotional line. Looking forward to the follow-up plot development, author, cheers.

This is a very nice book among simulation novels. The plot is fast-paced and very suitable for those who like to read short stories.

This time-travel fantasy harem cultivation novel is very interesting. The storyline is interlocking, the plot is ups and downs, and the details are well handled. The male protagonist is unsmiling, calm, calculating, and resourceful. The female protagonists also have their own characteristics. I strongly recommend it to those who like harems and time-travel cultivation genres! ! ! [Thinking]...[Like]...[Like]

So far, the perception is okay. Although the plot is a bit old, it also has new ideas. There are not many interspersed stories about memories. There are several female protagonists who can be said to be semi-invincible to the male protagonists. There are currently no too many negative points. I will see how the author handles the relationship between these people later. It can be read as a daily novel. Come on.

Generally speaking, it should be about four stars, but in the Tomato genre, this one is already very good. Although the past life is very interesting and important for this kind of book, the important thing is the combination of the present life and the past life. Some books tell a story with more than a hundred pictures or even hundreds of chapters, and then After it came out, there was no delay of two chapters to continue the next story. This led to a problem, that is, the heroine in the front will basically not appear in the later, and there will be no role. At most, the protagonist will mention a few words. Maybe the heroine in the back is also interesting, but she has already left the category of multiple heroines, right? If you pick out every story, it will be a book with a single female protagonist. So what was the highlight of your book at the beginning? So this is very good, the progress is quite fast, and when telling a story, it will also be interspersed with real-life scenes, although not much, but after the narration, I will write several chapters of real-life stories, and the main plot will also be opened in reality [Like] On Tomato🍅Liangcao [Like]

Dear fellow Taoists, I have been practicing for nine hundred years, and I have always been curious about the final outcome of Shura Field, Yandere, or multiple female protagonists. I can't stand it anymore. Is there anyone who has seen similar stories or Taoist friends who have been with me for thousands of years to explain what this general ending is.

It's okay. Before the Immortal World chapter, it was well written, with good writing style and interspersed narratives. It was quite novel. Everyone's relationship was well handled. The Immortal World chapter got worse and worse, but it was okay. The ending was good. You can still watch it.

The writing is good and worth recommending. The plot is reasonable. It is a different kind of simulation article. I have finished reading it and am currently following up on updates [laughing] I've finished reading them all, it's so beautiful [crying]

Now that you have seen the latest chapter, please give it a five-star rating. Let me know what you think, the content is very good. At present, it seems to be a simulated daily novel. I will say one thing. It is almost 400,000 words and it is awesome. It is still awesome after 300,000 words. There is no driving plot. For readers who like to read Liu Huangshu, I advise you to be cautious. Generally speaking, this book is still worth recommending. The low ratings are mostly due to readers who like to read Huangshu [smile]

It's okay, it's nice to watch, but I feel like Qin Li's death in the first story is a bit too fast. It's like a brief description and it's gone. There's just no other plot. As soon as the apprentice has this memory, he draws his sword immediately and the protagonist dies immediately. Then everything else is pretty good. I haven't read the second simulation yet, so I'll put it on the bookshelf first.

A book with obvious advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the early stage writing is really good, the interweaving of simulated memories and reality, the characterizations and interactions between the female protagonists are quite attractive, and the gags and Shura scenes between the male and female protagonists are well written. The shortcomings are also obvious. The later Fairyland Chapter is a bit too classic and formulaic, and there are too many mechanical deities in the system. You can almost guess the subsequent development after reading the plot, and the ending is also very rushed (the final BOSS is killed in less than half a chapter). The overall look and feel is close to that of Crested Head, Leopard Body, and Snake Tail. I hope the author will continue to work hard in the future.

I watched 2 simulations and started commenting around chapter 73. First of all, the emotional description is good and the plot is smooth. The first simulation is a pure simulation and does not intersect with reality. The second one begins to intersect with reality. A simulation lasts about fifteen to twenty chapters, with not much content but a complete story.

Well, it's well written. It's just a little bit off, the plot could have been rounder. The one without a starting point made me want to put it down, and the one with a starting point made me reluctant to skip chapters. Great support for the author. Anyway, I think it's okay to watch.

[Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] This disciple is really good to the Master and loves him. Who doesn't want a yandere with strength, good looks, and a figure who also loves herself.

It's good to see it now. There is a book in the starting point that is very similar, but the main line of reality is basically zero. I have been copying Infinite Dolls and lacks stamina. The plot up to this point makes up for the shortcomings of that book very well. I hope the follow-up won't be too overwhelming

I want to watch it but don't want to. It's reality and memories for a while. It's tiring to watch. It would be better if the memories could be made simpler.

Much better than the newcomers. There are many small highlights. Reading rating: 7.4

My evaluation is very good. I rarely give a book a five-star rating, but the delicate plot of this book is worthy of me giving it a complete and smooth plot. Friends who are book-hungry may consider reading it.

The writing style is much better than most Tomato novels. It looked so normal that it made me forget that this is Tomato. It reminded me of the feeling of watching those great writers write books in the past. It was very comfortable to read and not too dramatic. The subject matter was also good.

It's okay, but I feel that the male protagonist is a bit too weak when facing the second simulated object, but it's still acceptable. The interweaving of memories and reality is good, and both sides of the plot can be taken care of. I ran away from the fifth simulated object. The fifth character was the master's wife, but I must have never touched that master. It's just that I personally don't like the identity attribute of the master's wife. After all, in name, I'm still a couple with someone else.

It's not that simple, but it's pretty good. Simulation is not bad, it can portray the heroine's character. The rhythm is a little lacking, and the details still need to be polished. Give me a 5 to encourage you After Ascension, things started to get messy. There was no Shura Field that I loved to see and see, and there were also fewer strategies. It turned into a refreshing article about cultivating immortals. 3.5 Points is more appropriate

It's still quite good to watch. It won't insert dozens of chapters of plot, and you can basically watch it except for the fight, especially the part where the protagonist fights the Qin family. Then it's okay. The palace fight is a bit What can I say? This book doesn't mention any plot points that I didn't grow up with before. It's pretty good-looking and doesn't contain a lot of redundant words. On the contrary, it is quite interesting. You can also choose some chapters that look like fighting and skip them. After all, this book has a lot of fighting and is not very interesting. Then the plot won't be too fake or empty, it's quite popular and it's 70 points.

Needless to say, brothers who like to watch fast-paced movies can drink it. Basically, there are no poisonous points, so you can eat it with confidence (provided you like this kind of article) [Blow kiss]

Not bad, but the shortcoming is that it cannot be judged from a realistic perspective, because after all, the author is also an ordinary person. I really didn't feel how clever the strategy and how poisonous the methods were in the poison master part.

It's a cool article, it's okay, but I can't stand it anymore [face covering]

Brother, where is my elf queen? Although I like the plot of the fairy world very much, it is not too sudden, but it feels like it jumps too fast. Can you update it more and make a 200w300 word for me?