Water Margin: in the Opening Scene of Wild Boar Forest, Dong Chao Angrily Kills Xue Ba

It's very good. The fighting aspect is well written. Only the aspect of money and food is lacking. For example, in the book, the Lijiazhuang was defeated and nearly one million guan of money was obtained. The birthday plan given to Cai Jing by Grand Master Liang was only 100,000 guan. Don't lose your fighting power and write about cultivating immortals in the future. A Water Margin fic "Water Margin: The Prince of Liangshan" that I liked very much before was very good at the beginning, but unfortunately it became about cultivating immortals later on. If the author continues to keep it up, it can be considered a good book.

I just finished reading more than twenty chapters and I am amazed! The author's writing style is sophisticated and delicate, and he captures the unique Jianghu charm and era background of Water Margin. On the basis of respecting the settings of the original work, it incorporates just the right amount of original imagination. The plot advances naturally and smoothly, with rigorous logic and reasonableness. The characters are flesh-and-blood, the atmosphere is full, there is no rigid adaptation, it combines feelings and new ideas, it is very comfortable to watch, and I am already looking forward to the subsequent plot development [Like] [Like] [Like] The author, please continue to work hard [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart]

To be honest, in addition to this system setting, since characters with a hero value of 70 or above can get rewards for sworn sworn, the protagonists have separate sworn sworn friends, but if there are certain people like Shi Qian or something like that, I think it would be good to also sworn sworn friends, or finally have a group sworn vows. Overall, (just for me), I think it's well written

After reading it for a long time, I realized that I still owe a comment. After reading this book, I can see that the author wrote it carefully and conceived it carefully. Some background details have also been done, and they are not dealt with haphazardly. Overall, this novel may only be of average quality in an era when there were many excellent works in the past. But in today's world where fast food articles and AI articles are everywhere, Tomato can be regarded as a masterpiece that can be followed up.

A very good book, The Water Margin is Strong [Flying Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

One thumbs up [like] It's okay, it's okay, it's worth a look

It's really good-looking. There's no dummy like Song Jiang, but the updates are a bit slow.

It's okay, the key is not to be wordy

It's interesting, you can continue watching

Not bad, good looking

The reading experience is quite good, but the acquisition of sworn friendships is a bit complicated. Qiao Feng said yes now that he is alive. I hope that the system can be upgraded to obtain favorability points in the future. Don't keep doing this whole sworn friendship thing.

The writing is very good, but Song Jiang is too difficult to die, and he can't die no matter what.

It's still watchable for now. Nothing poisonous.

The writing is okay so far. I read it in one sitting. Although there are some minor flaws, it is a rare masterpiece if I continue writing it this way.

The writing is fluent and mature, and the logic is smooth and reasonable. If you keep away from mistakes and mistakes, it will be a rare good book!

The writing is very good, just don't write about cultivating immortals. There should be more female protagonists. I'd love to read it.

It's very interesting. It's the best book among all the Water Margins I've read.

It's pretty good. It's better than that book with dozens of chapters about Big Bear.

Indispensable in life

Not bad, very nice. Come on, come on.

It's quite interesting, brother, brother

So far, good books to read

It's not bad to just look at it like this

It's not bad, thank you to the author for your hard work.

Very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard

It's okay, but how can Song Jiang survive so well? Someone is always saving me

Very nice, why is the rating so low?

I have already read one of the author's books. The writing is very good. This one has many chapters. The previous one has few chapters. The author's writing style is still very good.

It's well written. The author has studied Water Margin deeply.

It's rare to read a systematic version of Water Margin. The author's writing style is very good. Hope to keep up the good work[Like]