Pirates, Make up the New Yonko at the Beginning

Nohara Shinnosuke, childlike justice Author, I really like Nohara Shinnosuke you joined. As long as it doesn't collapse, childlike justice will change the entire navy.

Very interesting. I feel good about adding Crayon Shin-chan elements, and it can be used as a proper entertainment and relaxing plot. Many people may not like it, but in the end these marquees are all made up, so it might as well be made up to be outrageous.

I personally think the plot of the current novel is very good. The pirates have been strengthened but the navy has not been left behind. The most important thing is that the world government has been overthrown. After reading the "school trip" of the Celestial Dragons in the comics, I have no good impression of the world government. , The added setting is not outrageous. The only thing worthy of curiosity is that Luffy and the Holy Lord are connected in the introduction. There are many stories about the Holy Lord in One Piece fans, but this novel about Luffy and the Holy Lord is the first one. I am very curious about how to set Luffy, and I also look forward to the next story written by the author [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Yes, the One Piece I read before was too watery and I couldn't stand the rest of it. The pace of this one is not sluggish and it's worth reading.

It's really good-looking. Crayon Shin-chan and King can be included. It's so NB. I hope to add Admiral Naruto. Let's go ahead and add Kakarot. But the name is not good. I suggest changing the written name.

"Urgent Fu" I admire your splendor, and my heart beats with longing. I recall how amazing it was when I first read it, as if I was enjoying the spring breeze. The exquisiteness of the words is like the splendor of a brocade. Every time I unroll my scroll, I am meditating on it. I often waste my time eating and forget about it. He suddenly stopped writing and stopped working, which made everyone feel hesitant. I am tired of reading the old chapters, but I am eagerly looking forward to the new chapters. The day is late and difficult, the night is long but not yet young. Looking at the king's door, he hesitates, and he is anxious and hurts. You are so talented and virtuous, how can you allow your inspiration to be hidden? In the past, my writing seemed to be full of energy, so why am I so hesitant now? Don't be disturbed by worldly affairs and put aside trivial matters for a while. Quickly hold on and continue to work, soothing our hot intestines. I look forward to the new chapter coming out soon, just like the drought-stricken seedlings looking forward to the rain. If the beautiful chapter continues again, hit the knot and sing loudly. May you not hesitate again and show your talent to the fullest. I will look forward to it with eager anticipation, waiting for the arrival of the masterpiece

Get aboard! ! The eleventh partner! Belated apologies, Sakaski.

It's a very good behind-the-scenes flow, the pace is fast and the plot is rich, but I'm worried that if it continues at this pace, the book will only have more than a hundred chapters, and I don't know what the author will write next. Come on!

First, come on, author! ! ! !

Kurapika is a full-time hunter. The classification of superhuman fruit abilities in the pirate world is similar to the various types of telekinesis. Kurapika's ability can fully develop the devil fruit. The setting of his life experience and the change of genocide can all be done by the Draco. He longs for the superhuman devil fruit, kills the superhuman ability and performs a fruit funeral. In the end, the fruit of the chain fruit ability in the movie version responded to Kurapika after the death of the ability user, and the development of Kurapika's devil fruit ability is based on the full-time hunter. Isn't this quite exciting? Demonic response mechanisms revealed. It can also be used as a high-combat character in the Pirate Navy and Revolutionary Army.

I personally prefer the same type of fanfic, and the combat power of all parties is well balanced. The sources of combat power of local characters and added characters are also very interesting. It is a good casual and entertaining pirate fanfic.

666. When will Xiaoxin come to Conan [face covering] It feels almost boring. There are so many random characters added, but it doesn't feel like there is much of a butterfly effect. Please write more original content! ! And I have no idea what the main line of the article is and what goal I want to achieve! Spending such a huge price to strengthen Bucky might as well just replace it with a puppet soul!

The writing is quite interesting, but it is written interspersed with the sky and reality. In many chapters, I couldn't tell whether it was the sky or the reality.

It's so good, I finished reading it in one sitting. In fact, I stopped chasing pirates after Wano Country, but the author wrote it very well, and I knew what was going on even if I didn't read it later. There are two things, strengthen Luffy, two I want to see Magima [shy][shy][shy]

Nohara Shinnosuke writes so well

The author is so awesome, he is simply a genius. This kind of multifaceted structure is really unimaginable. It doesn't get any better than this.

Pirates·Wear·Canopy·Practice fake into reality system·Behind the scenes· Major changes to the plot and widening of imagination Chapter 53 Utilize the system's capabilities to make fakes come true. As long as someone believes in the sky, they can collect energy. Nearly omnipotent energy, improve yourself, improve others, create things, and create abilities.

Come on, author, this book is great.

You can add some naval admirals, the sword-wielding admiral Tsui Kuni Ichi, and you can also add Uchiha Madara, Senju Hashirama and other characters.

I don't sympathize with Pony and Big Bear at all. On the contrary, I feel that they both deserve it and should be more unlucky. I don't understand why Bonny needs to be strengthened so much. I didn't bother Bonny originally, but since Oda arranged such a miserable life for Bonny and Big Bear, I started to bother them.

The writing is quite good. You can add more characters from other anime. Can the author add Pleasant Goat?

Are you seriously considering giving Luffy a sex fruit? Really, Oda personally designed Luffy's second fruit. Maybe with the Tiger Talisman, he can eat another one.

Okay, I got stabbed in the back, but it's okay.

666, The author is reincarnated

Yes, as long as you can control the plot of your own changes.

I like it so far. I just hope that Luffy will become more powerful. So far, it's a bit different.

It's very interesting, I hope the author can keep writing.

Actually, I want to ask, how does Rocks use the fruit ability in the sea🤔

Pretty good looking

This book is not bad