The Average Girl Everyone Loves: She's a Mary Sue

In terms of rhythm, I like the atmosphere of two people being together, but the article doesn't write anything about it. It just directly raises the issue. To me, the heroine is too sensitive. One of them lies and the other is suspicious. There is not much love story between the two. They are too forced to be together. It doesn't have the feeling of aunt laughing when watching people fall in love. It's like walking on a tightrope. There is a feeling that no matter how much you love, the male partner 1 also has a personality defect. But if he said that he bullied him first, is it understandable for his identity? But he is indeed a playboy. He has nothing serious to do and still wants to hang out with the person he likes every day and wait until death? Okay, I admit that I also want to be a rice bug 😢 Also, the heroine is too entangled in his character issues. Isn't it more serious that Shen obviously wants to kill her, but he doesn't charge her with attempted murder, but thinks that the male partner is too much for Shen? Afraid of falling into the same trap? Do you also want to instigate people to kill his successor? [Hold face] She should know that if a man is paired with her, she should obey her. Maybe Xingxing and I have quite different personalities. Many people don't understand [Hold face] and don't feel Xingxing's growth in this relationship. Maybe he is more confident? After all, men are given a lot of money. Isn't money something that makes people confident? 🥰

The feeling of being alive is very strong. In fact, when I read novels, I rarely put my own thoughts into them. But in this book, I also have various little thoughts and inner world of the star heroine, or something similar. And it's just ordinary, a feeling of being alive. Just like an ordinary girl on the roadside. Moreover, my current job is also the receptionist. If there is a handsome guy who is like the flying boy who appears on the stage, my inner activities will probably be similar to those of a star. Regardless of whether it's true or not, let's first get some money that I have to work for several months. Others voluntarily give it, so why shouldn't I want it.

A very special writing style, very personal. There is a sense of intimacy that comes from telling a story. It's less like writing a novel and more like telling a story. But there is no restriction that novels cannot be like this. The initial impression given by this novel is that you can read it or not. But once I read it in my spare time, I unknowingly saw it all. Like water flowing through the head, nothing is left behind afterwards. Finally, I would like to say that the author's writing has some innate spirituality. It is not very well written, but your writing will attract people's attention and read it unconsciously, unconsciously. However, it may not be suitable for writing online novels. It is not suitable for the kind of online novels that are popular nowadays, which are fast-paced, have strong conflicts and accurately grasp the reader's sense of satisfaction. It's just right to speak out for love

It has an ancient taste and a strong sense of life, but it is not as smooth as catching a horse. Reposting positive reviews around the heroine (some articles have heroines who are very camera-y)

It's a very amazing article. After reading it, it's really amazing.

A bit flat And if you mean the same thing, say it repeatedly at short intervals, in long paragraphs. Also, I love using it! Okay, I'm so tired from watching this

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