Transformation and a Journey to Immortality

Overall, it's okay. The plot is a bit like that of a mortal, but it has its own characteristics. If you keep it up, it will be a great book.

There is no ambiguity in the transformation. There are many descriptions of the beauty of the protagonist in the article. The protagonist is relatively weak in the early stage and has a lot of room for growth. There are many stereotypes about women in the early stage, but there is growth, which is okay. Only in this way can you clearly see that what you are reading is a transformation novel. So far, there is no bloody plot, but the routines are relatively classic, and it is easy to be spoiled by reading the comments. It's very good for a new book, and I believe that the author will not engage in a situation where it is clearly written that the book will be changed to single, but suddenly it will be changed to hundreds. It's just that the word count is a bit short. I won't review it until it's finished or there are any big changes.

It's very interesting and well written. When I saw the rating was so low, I went to read the book reviews. Emm, the first point is about the writing style. Fortunately, it's not too girly, right? The second point is that there is suspicion of remarriage. In fact, the protagonist has a very good relationship with his senior brother, but there is no ambiguity. The only ambiguous thing is a woman. Although the protagonist has a pure vaginal body, there are also men with pure yang body, but there is no ambiguous plot. The third point is to prove that I am not a monster... Um... Where does this come from? I recalled a little bit, and there should be no such plot in the original article... Point 4: You may lose your virginity and be drugged, spoiler alert 1 1 1 In fact, it's because the protagonist is a soul traveler, and the master who raised him since he was a child is plotting against him, but the protagonist successfully counterattacks, and there is no plot about losing his virginity. If you are not used to this kind of plot, my evaluation is that mental mysophobia is a bit too much. Then there is this book. The writing is very good. In terms of plot, although the protagonist is frustrated, it is not particularly unacceptable or overwhelming. The world view is great, but the portrayal of the protagonist is a bit thin. The medium cup is probably a bit larger. No matter what, 5.4 Points are still too low. In my opinion, it should be around 7.5-8.5 Points no matter what. I'll give it a 5-point rating. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, welcome to discuss

It has both the cruel reality of cultivating immortals and the playful and light life. It is very easy to transform and make my Penang spin. 🥰Quick update [Please update]

The novel is written a bit like a mortal, but it also has its own ideas. I hope I won't stop updating it. After all, I've basically stopped reading it [Chigua]

A hundred is not bad [eating melon], but a single one would be a bit too boring.

I'll take a look at the little master who wrote it.

Very cool, keep up the good work.

Okay, it's well written and I'll give you 5 stars.

It's well written. There are very few books that I can read these days. Come on, write a longer paragraph and update it [Like]

It looks good. I hope the author can provide more education and training.

Okay, pretty good

I have the same feeling as when I read Mortal, I hope

The writing style is okay, even if you kill someone for grinding, your enemies won't dare to kill him. If you want a hundred, then a hundred, or just a single

It's okay, it's well written, but the early stages are a bit cumbersome.

It's a story about a mortal girl cultivating immortality, but the protagonist is not as sinister as Lao Han, and is still very kind.

It's very good. It's considered top-notch among the transformation literature. There are already very few books about the genre of transformation, so there are even fewer books to read.

Not bad, the story is quite satisfactory, but the protagonist's image is vividly described, which makes people want to read more.

Not bad, I like the weapons better

Come on, it feels like a mortal, it feels pretty good to watch.

It can write about the perspective of female monks who practiced immortality in ancient times, and the writing style is also good. It is worth reading [Blowing Kiss]

This is the only article on transformation and immortality that I can read so far. It is very well written. I will keep up with it and give it 5 stars!

It's very interesting, and the writing and plot make people want to watch it. Damn it, luckily I didn't keep looking.