Villain's Script: I Kidnap the Dynasty's Princess Bride from the Start

So far, it's okay. It depends on me personally. I've had a lot of experience with it. Let me briefly summarize the previous little poisonous points for you. It depends on your personal acceptance. The first is that the system that everyone dislikes at present often erases or cancels the completion of tasks forced by cultivation. At the same time, this also involves the second little poisonous point, which is that the protagonist is very similar. A puppet on a string. Without system tasks, I don't know what to do. These are the two ordinary little poisonous points in the front. It would be better to modify it, because many people don't like it now. I can still accept it. After all, I have eaten too much. For now, if there is anything particularly acceptable, I will come back and say [OK] The world view is quite big, but it may look like a riddle because of the newbies. If you like cool stories, don't read it. Also, the details can really be improved, otherwise it will be too boring. It is not a cool story in the first place. If it is not cool, and if you don't engage in Liu Bei's plot to attract readers, it can easily lead to I feel bored after watching it. The most important point is that although I am not talking about people, I feel that this protagonist is too good. Although for now, he may indeed become stronger in the future. His future wife is a disguised explanation, but there is no obvious foreshadowing. It is too strange. First of all, the parents They are all very strong, but have not inherited any talent. Also, the more traditional villains should be very talented. It is difficult to think of how to make the protagonist talented at present. Otherwise, he is too weak. If he relies on the system to directly give it, he will not be suspected of taking over. It is also possible that the protagonist is a show-off, as the author said, and it is not traditional. A villain in the sense of the word, so his talent is so poor, then he is back to his old ways, like some kind of foreshadowing laid by the way of heaven, and then you write a demon, such a typical example, it depends on how you deal with it later, these are not easy to deal with, they are too typical. If it doesn't work, just treat this book as a practice, come on 👍

Overall, it's quite cheerful and quite satisfactory. The combat power increases quite quickly but it's not as good as the nesting doll. It's acceptable. The rating should be 8. It's just a pity that there is no extra story (please tell me about it later), but the ending is really too hasty, and the engagement was not taken back at the end. According to what the author wrote before, I feel that there should be at least four female protagonists, but only three of the most important ones have deep contact with the male protagonist. , Mo Qinghuan (forgot the word), has not appeared since that time when she came to meet the male protagonist. This female protagonist really has too few scenes, and his master feels that the male protagonist can be a master and rebel, and can be the fifth female protagonist, but it is a pity that there is no such thing.

It's very good. At present, the world view has not been fully opened, and the plot is a bit complicated, but the shortcomings are not hidden, it is still very interesting, and there are no problems in the emotional line. I hope to see the plot of Jiang Muyin and the Demon Empress as soon as possible, and I also hope that there can be further development with Xing Yao and Ning Xue 🙂. This book seems to be very promising so far. I hope I can keep writing it and the author will update it soon 🤭

There are currently three heroines, the little princess, the yandere step sister, and a future wife (suspected to be the main palace). There are quite a lot of plots. Sprinkle more sugar + Shura field 🤭

The rhythm is smooth and the plot is interesting. There are now three female protagonists, which is a stable structure. The rest of the story should be mostly about daily life.

It feels pretty good so far, and I look forward to future plot updates (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)

It looks good o(≧v≦)o~~so great

Although I am a novice, the writing is still good and beautiful.

I think this book is okay. There are a lot of female protagonists. There are no other big problems. Why is the score so low?

The content is well written, and the protagonist's image is well portrayed.