Underground River*********

It's very interesting. Come on, it describes Su Changhe's heart. He was killed by his good brother in his previous life. After being reborn, he felt absurd. His rights, family, and ideals were all lost. If Su Muyu hadn't been reborn, he would have wanted to stay away from all this. But he was reborn, and he wanted to ask why, why you abandoned me. A fire was extinguished and the remaining ashes were burned away. Looking at that person in the previous life, that face, that hand that didn't hold his, how could I not complain?

It's great to watch. Shuang Su brought the real family in the dark river to the other side in advance, and the two powers joined forces. Finally, it was no longer a bloody plot about licking Langya King, Xiao Se, etc. [Like] [Like] [Like] Martial arts do not kneel to the imperial power!

It's very good-looking, and the psychological description of the characters is also very delicate. Mu Yu's martial arts is also better, which gives people a strong sense of satisfaction. It fits the character so well, it feels like Mu Chang is really reborn [crying]

I love you, teacher, the writing is very close to the original work. In particular, Su Changhe's feelings for Su Muyu were well understood.

Although Su Changhe made a big mistake in hiding Su Muyu's medicine, people close to him always thought that he was partial to himself. Su Muyu gave up Su Changhe for the sake of justice and the hidden river behind him, so Su Changhe hoped that Su Muyu would always treat him well. Su Changhe was killed because there were too many people to defeat him, and secondly there was no one behind him. Deep down in his heart, he also gave up on himself. I prefer Su Muyu, so sometimes At that time, he felt that Su Changhe was too pretentious, and he was not satisfied with Su Muyu's rebirth being so good, but he felt that he really didn't know how to face it. He didn't think so in his heart, but if he had to say harsh things, Su Muyu was not very good at expressing himself. If he said sweet words every day, Su Changhe would have forgiven Su Muyu a long time ago, and Su Muyu would say I will look at you [face covering] This sentence does not sound good. Su Changhe has a younger brother, Su Changli. I read a Young Song fan novel and the heroine rescued Su Changli, and Su Changhe didn't die either. But now I've read a few Anhe fan novels and there's nothing about Su Changli [face covering]

This ending is great, I like it very much, but there is one small flaw. Changhe, the evil Big King, is too settled. He is not an honest person, and can cause big explosions no matter what. There are so many opportunities in the article that he actually stays calm, which is incredible.

"The back appears and breaks in front of me, the words come from the ear, it turns out to be an illusion, it turns out to be a dream or a mistake... You have never appeared in the old place, and I have caught you thousands of times. The cry suddenly disappears and reminds the guests on the shore... Helpless love falls like flowers, cutting off the promise of the young man back then, and the tears fall with the rain and the affection merges into a river." Teacher, just wait. I will reward you when I get paid next month. It's so well written.

This book is indeed well written. Unlike other fanfics, which are directly connected to Shaobai's protagonist group from the beginning, they live their own lives from beginning to end. The plots such as revenge are also very decisive, and there are no intentional abuse plots. After the awkwardness in the beginning, it has been very sweet in the back. This is a sweet article by Mu Chang, and it should be the top Tomato level Mu Chang fan.

It's so beautiful, so sweet [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] The author will update more soon! ! ! I love you, the author [love] [love] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] Come on! ! Support you [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss], Mu Chang 99

Hate the Sea Love is so enjoyable. It is a very delicate book. Chang He's emotional changes and Mu Yu's self-examination are both well written. There may be some minor flaws occasionally, but overall it is very enjoyable and worth reading. Especially due to the changes in mood, Chang He and Mu Yu's behavior styles have also changed. These changes are really well written and delicate. The books written by the twins I have read before are a bit of a joke, but this one is different and I highly recommend it.

I saw many people recommending this book in the comment area, so I came to read it. The writing is indeed quite delicate. There is no mention here of a big problem that I have seen in many fan fictions before, which is that Su Changhe will immediately forgive him after hearing Su Muyu's explanation. This is very extreme and never forgives him. In my opinion, the two of them are Good brothers, but if they are killed by the other party, there will definitely be grudges next time. It is impossible to say, because I have a good relationship with you, and then I will forgive you without hesitation. This article has the feature of writing about their continuous process from the beginning of various conflicts to the later unraveling of the knot. This section is very delicate and psychologically well written. I have finished reading it now. The previous comment was made when I couldn't read a third of it. Now that I have finished reading it, I can only say that it is a good read. In fact, after reading it, this article does not have too many words, but it is this kind of article that made me feel very happy after reading it and reaching the ending. Unfortunately, I should have understood at this time that this is a good thing, because in this situation, I will not let go of their story and end it here. If you want to see more, and if you still have a love for them like me, I think this big one cannot be missed.

This book is really good to read. Everyone's ending is what I expected. They are all happy, and it is a rare Mu Chang fairy tale. It just feels that the ending is a bit sudden. The author should write more extras.

The author's description is very good, and the psychology of Su Changhe and Su Muyu is really very similar to the original work. It feels like they are real living people. It really feels like Su Changhe and Su Muyu are really reborn, and they are heading for a better ending together. Su Muyu does not have to live with guilt for the rest of his life, and Su Changhe does not have to repeat the same mistakes. The two of them can go on and on, and truly die of old age instead of dying casually.

It's great to watch, and I feel like the characters are still there. It's the ending I want. I really hope they can be a pair of masters of leisurely clouds and wild cranes together, regardless of the affairs of the court.

The writing is delicate and so beautiful! Mu Yu Changhe will always be together to save each other!

Legend of the Dark River: Changhe, follow me! The cool breeze is slightly hot If only Suchanghe was reborn, Suchanghe would "stay away" If only Su Muyu was reborn, Su Muyu would choose to be optimistic about Su Changhe But they were reborn together, and Su Muyu would not let go, so Su Changhe would ask Su Muyu Shuangsu is very close to the original drama, not OOC at all

Yes, I personally think this is quite in line with the original plot, and the character is in line with my fantasy, but it doesn't feel OOC, the emotions are sincere and warm, the pace is fast but not too fast, and it doesn't deliberately rush the plot. I sincerely recommend it. I really recommend it, I really like it, I really do

Super good-looking, the most comfortable Mu Changwen so far

The author's writing style is very good, and the psychological description is vivid and not OOC at all. It is still my favorite Mu Chang CP!

One of the best books I have read recently, bar none

It's really beautiful. The two little bitter gourds must have a happy ending [crying]

It's really good-looking. Don't be affected by the first two articles. According to the original work and the author's personal understanding, some of Su Changhe's mental states are okay. The rest is really sweet and there is a wedding [Adoration]

Recommended! Looks good!

Very well written

Omg, author, how can you write so well [cry][cry][cry][cry] Cry well, such a good post

The emotions are very delicate. The first few chapters made my heart skip a beat.

The author's writing is really good, not OOC at all, very vivid.

This Mu Changhe article is super well written. From the beginning when Changhe was targeting and hating Mu Yu to the end when the two reconciled and reconciled, it was really great. Our Xiaochanghe was firmly chosen by Mu Yu this time

The psychological description and emotional expression are really well written.

It's quite good-looking. I feel that the character's personality is more in line with Shao Ge's. It feels more like Mu Chang.