Xiao Ren*******

I would like to make some suggestions. Some similar descriptions, especially those that have appeared many times in the previous article, can be reduced. Too much description will make the plot drag. The writing style feels quite novel, like that of a chapter novel, but the written feeling can be weaker, so that the characters' reactions are more natural and not limited to fixed reactions. But of course it still depends on what the author thinks. After all, books on this subject are rare. Please support me and hope the author can continue writing! Come on

I gave myself a five-star reward myself. I updated more than n chapters today. Because this is the first time Xiaoxiao has written such a novel, and I want to show everyone what I think of Bai Xiao. Maybe the writing style is a bit insufficient, but Xiaoxiao will continue to work hard. Xiaoxiao wanted to pave the way for some of Bai Xiao's experiences, but maybe he didn't write it well. As a result, it seems that everyone didn't read the story of Yuanyi during the Warring States Period carefully. Well, Xiaoxiao will handle it better next time. Xiaoxiao will also mention some of Bai Xiao's life experience later. In the second chapter, Xiaoxiao will slow down the story process and have more interactions between Bai Xiao and them. I hope everyone will continue to support Xiaoxiao by commenting and reading. It is best to finish it. Xiaoxiao is going to drink the northwest wind, hahaha. Let us continue to get closer to them. Xiaoxiao hopes that everyone will accompany them to the end with me. Xiaoxiao's fragile heart can still accept reasonable opinions. Of course, if you don't like it, then write thousands of good articles on Tomato. I hope you find something you like soon. Then, thank you all again for your support. I hope Xiaoxiao can create articles that make everyone happy and satisfied. Hey, this is the first time Xiaoxiao writes a long review for herself, hahahaha!

The writing is great, the writing is better as you go to the back! ! ! The big cat is really cool and cute🥰🥰 The second chapter is even better! The writing style is getting better and better🥰 Come on, it must be finished! !

Five-star recommendation: Tachibana Tachibana, a Demon Slayer fanfic with a single female protagonist, Butterfly Ninja. Snow Leopard is not good at words, but her heart is as warm as her thick down. Her appearance brings a little warmth to the butterfly world. The author uses an ingenious way to let Bai Xiao span hundreds of years. The interaction between the two worlds is a berry carefully shared by a child. It was the young girl who measured the wind and frost of this land step by step with a body different from this world. When the girl is in full bloom, she has a decisive beauty, and the blade in her hand burns into the clouds. Her eyes are full of spring, but also full of fleeting coolness, and this strong body is still wrapped in the softness of her bones. Such a snow leopard makes butterflies dance around her and cannot leave. Snow Leopard is much older than Butterfly. She has already seen everything in the world and is used to seeing people's hearts, but Butterfly is reluctant to let go of all the old years with Snow Leopard, let alone all the scenes of entanglement with Snow Leopard. Butterfly is very selfish. Even if she secretly makes a painful decision for Snow Leopard, she still wants to let Snow Leopard remember her forever, wants to keep herself in the deepest part of her heart, and wants to be the only one that Snow Leopard cares about. Fortunately, butterflies in this life are not lonely butterflies. Although she has been beaten by wind and rain, her sister is still healthy and serving as the gentlest harbor in her life. The snow leopard beside her quietly guards her no matter where she goes. In her arms, she holds the crystallization of love she gave birth to, the little snow leopard who is the continuation of her life. With the blessing of the beast god Hajixiao, fate must have taken pity on this purple butterfly. Thanks to the beast god Hajixiao for sending Bai Xiao from the beast world to Butterfly, the snow leopard disturbed the fate of fate with its agile figure, letting the waves it stirred up gently ripple through too many kind people, and letting the beast god's blessings spread to everyone who deserves a better future. It was neither too early nor too late when Orange met Haki. The beauty of your depiction of the delicate emotions between girls made me unable to stop. Later, I gradually became immersed in the story and felt happy and sad for the snow leopard and butterfly. The story is coming to an end, but she is very reluctant to leave. Butterfly doesn't love Fluffy but she loves her big snow leopard and baby. Orange doesn't like to say goodbye but hopes to add a gentle annotation to this beautiful story. A sweet article worth reading. The reliable snow leopard is full of security. She can be tough, gentle, and reflect on her respect for butterflies. It is suitable for friends who want to heal their little hearts. [Sending Hearts]

Taitama is so beautiful! I watched it all in three days! I just don't know why the rating is so low. Anyway, I think this is the best Demon Slayer fanfic besides "Demon Slayer: Snow Solstice"! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The emotions of the characters are so delicate that people can't help but want to read on. The protagonist's identity is not obtrusive in the plot of the story, so people don't feel too much discomfort. This is one of the relatively better Demon Slayer fanfics I have seen.

Highly recommended! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Important things to say three times, highly recommended, highly recommended, highly recommended

It's good to watch and the plot is smooth.

It's good to watch. Some people may find it boring when they read it at the beginning, but it's really interesting when they read it at the back. The author is also so cute [laughs] [laughs] I love reading it.

Big cat and little butterfly! ! !

Take a good, good, good look, look, look, look

It's good to read, love to read, and read more! The author likes to update, loves to read, and will update more!

It's very interesting, the emotional line is well written, thank you to the author.

I didn't expect to eat such a beautiful Demon Slayer heroine at Tomato [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Yes, Haku and Shinobu get along very well. Xiaoxiaonu, try your best to write more

The author writes so well (^0^)/The writing is delicate and rhythmic.

Very delicate description, looks very warm

Looks great, the writing is great

It's really good

Looks good, keep posting. [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Anyway, it looks good! !

This is really beautiful. I support you, the author, and I look forward to your second book.

A very good novel that makes up for a lot of regrets in the Demon Slayer storyline.

Show them all to me. It's very, very beautiful.

The big cat is dull, with a black butterfly belly

[Eating melon] It's so sweet and reassuring

Good-looking, interesting, not annoying [like]

I also ate fine chaff.

Not bad, good-looking, good-looking

I watched it overnight and it was great [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]