I just want to write my own version of Dragon Raja, and the Lu Mingfei I love.
What if Lu Mingfei wandered into Odin's Nibelungen during his winter break in his final year of high school?
Alone and without help.
Odin sees through him and covets the dormant Black King bloodline within him.
Odin captures Lu Mingfei and subjects him to unimaginable physical and mental torment, crushing his bones and draining his marrow, tearing out his tendons and replacing his blood to extract the Black King bloodline.
Unable to live, unable to die.
As he lies dying in despair, the little devil awakens inside Lu Mingfei ahead of time and, in exchange for a quarter of his life, gravely wounds Odin and escapes the Nibelungen.
Can Lu Mingfei, after enduring all this, rise again from the ashes? How will his personality, his view of the world, and his attitude toward those around him change? Will he pursue power like Chu Zihang, regardless of the cost? Can he become a man as openhearted, carefree, unrestrained, dangerous, and captivating as Qiao Feng in The Legend of the Condor Heroes?
“We've already died once. This little injury is no big deal.” Lu Mingfei tore off the arm that had been broken, its bone fragments jutting out.
He smiled calmly at the wide-eyed classmates around him, their scalps prickling with horror.
“Run, all of you. If you don't, it'll be too late. I have to deal with a few minnows first, then catch up with an old friend.”
The author's writing is very good, but I hope not to make up for the regrets of the original work by giving Lu Mingfei a cp, after all, the original work does not have one. Some people are quite suitable to be alone all the time. It has nothing to do with anything else, this is the happiness and loneliness that belongs to myself alone. I hope that Lu Mingfei will always be his own dead child. Even if things and people change and he is no longer him, he will still be him.
It's pretty good. I personally like this style of writing. I haven't read much of Dragon Clan and I'm not an experienced Dragon Clan reader, but personally it's well written. I really like the part where the relationship between Chen Wenwen and Lu Mingfei is dealt with. It's very logical and supported by the writing. It's a very comfortable part.
It's quite beautiful, but the front part is very distressing 🥺
A very novel beginning
Very good, good-looking
The writing is okay, you can take a look
The writing is very good, not as frustrating as the original work
This is not a brainless piece of writing. So far so good.
Awesome book, completely breaking the setting of the original book. It's very good, but there are too few.
It's a very novel beginning. I personally think it's very interesting, but it's not interesting enough😦