Raven What Are You Doing? I'm the Warden

Don't let the raven play the fool ( It is a very divine (human) book. I like the author's portrayal of Said very much. I can call it mother. The shortcoming is that there are a lot of typos and omissions. Author, please update

The writing style is very good and the genre is novel. Well, I guess, I haven't seen any similar novels so far. I'm talking about the gender of the boss. Oh, by the way, if you want to avoid the problem of keeping books, it is recommended to write 4,000 words a day, or update it twice a day.

At present, the only CP article on the entire Internet about Raven's sex change and the warden😋. It's really delicious. I hope it will be updated more, faster, and faster😋 It's a very good book. The emotional lines are really beautifully written. I hope the author's next book will also have such delicate emotional lines. [Sending my heart]

Rare delta female videos. Most of them are emotional scenes, so those who want to see a Machiavellian shootout can run away.

Absolutely a good book. This book develops and expands around the theme of what love is and the pursuit of love. The writing is delicate but not confusing, and the plot is huge but not confusing. The pair of star-crossed lovers in the article are also touching. Look.

It's very well written. I can't make any comments. I can only say that this is the best Delta fan fiction I've ever read. I'm also a stubborn person. I've also admired the ideals of the warden. I've thought about the dreams of those who challenge order and hurt others for no reason. How could they sleep peacefully? The teachers always said that they should just obey, but listening to the teacher's words could not restrain those thugs. When the pillars of cognition were broken, I knew that blindly giving in would only make the bullying worse, so I tried to fight. In the end, I succeeded, and the bully gave in. #Foreveryone who breaks out of the cocoon and is reborn

I feel that Hayate's scene is really impressive. On the other hand, the role of the protagonist seems to only say two sentences each time. The deputy warden in Hafk is more impressive than the protagonist [facepalm]. I have met almost everyone I should see, but the rewards given by the system are not many. Even if your warden's value is high, you can still reward some things such as life-saving amulets, necklaces, teleportation devices, etc. Even if it is not a cool article, you should at least protect the brothers you trust around you. Otherwise, it would be very frustrating if the brothers are gone and the protagonist can't do anything. But it still interests me a bit. Come on. [Laughing]

A novel about a man of gods [face covering], but the score of 6:00 is indeed a bit low, 8:00 is almost the same (ºº) Apart from anything else, the life of the soldiers is like grass, the plot is too hasty, and the character of Chuang makes me a little annoyed (a bit OOC), Samsung will give it a look first

Very nice. Extremely funny yet heartwarming What does high quality but not popular mean? Please give me five stars, guys.

It's a very good plot. It describes the cruelty of war, thoughts about human nature, and the confrontation of forces. However, the protagonist's emotional line does not have much development. Except for Hayate in Tidal Prison, other times he kills when he should and has no mercy. The rest is basically like a real warden doing things, very vivid. Boss, is this really a love story? Why is fighting so exciting?

What I say is very in line with my taste, and I will also add some internet jokes to make people laugh. The relationship scene between Luna and Hayate was so enjoyable. The yandere Luna and the milk dog Hayate, Hudson and the nameless girl are really miserable mandarin ducks, and neither is the protagonist Gherroth. Invincible, but also confused, painful, and decisive in killing. The supporting characters are also well created, such as the adjutant, with inner descriptions and background stories. The author is very good at describing the background and psychology. The criticism is that the fighting scenes are a bit lacking in exciting operations and all the numerical charm is.

It's okay. If it's purely a sentimental story, it's okay, but there are some problems at the moment, that is, the protagonist has always chosen to let it go. The raven has caused chaos in some places where it appeared, causing the death of the protagonist's men and injuries, but the protagonist has not chosen to punish the raven seriously. The pairing of Hayate and Luna also has problems (I personally like Hayate Luna's CP). Hayate chose to backstab many times in the plot, deliberately letting the enemy go, killing his subordinates or seriously injuring others. Luna also killed one of Hayate's subordinates and made Hayate defect. In the current final plot, either some people from GTI came to support, otherwise at least one of Hayate and Luna would have to die. It depends on how the author arranges the plot later [Thinking] The author handled it very well. As a traitor, death is the best ending. The last thing I want to say is that Luna Hayate is really a pair of hard-luck mandarin ducks [crying]

Let me review it (I'm not asking for help). I've read Chapter 116 so far. This book ranks at the top of all the Delta books I've seen so far. His emotions are very delicate. He wrote about the cruelty of war, and through the death of his men, the protagonist underwent some changes, and he became merciless in dealing with Delta operators. It also writes about the relationship between the raven and the protagonist. That's all I've read so far, but because I can't accept the death of game characters, I may not read this book anymore. But this book is really a very good book, with plots and inner monologues. It's very interesting to read. Finally, I wish the author good luck in writing and getting more and more traffic. I also hope that the author will finish it. Come on

The characters are well drawn and the plot design is novel. However, the relationship and interaction between the protagonist and other characters (such as raven and gti) are somewhat inconsistent. Moreover, I came in to read this book after reading the introduction. At first, I came with the mentality of having fun. I didn't expect the plot design to be so heavy. This is not very to my liking, but it is well written. I was amazed by this plot. After seeing it finished, I came back to read part of it and the ending. It shocked me, but the plot is as heavy as ever. It killed me. The ending can only be said that the upper narrative is powerful. The author's tangible hand allows us to see him [Thinking]

Interesting, very interesting. I have to say that this is the only book I have read about the warden and the raven (sexual transformation). The subject matter is so novel and interesting. Come on, author! ! [Smile][smile][smile]

It is well written, connecting the protagonist's emotional line with the plot direction, and analyzing the order understood by the warden or the protagonist from the heart.

This book is really amazing. It is one of the best in the Delta. It is very, very beautiful. Actually, I'm just a lousy reader of novels. I usually play Delta just for the fun of fighting, and I don't really understand the plot. In fact, I clicked on it at the beginning just to watch the fun of fighting (of course it's also for curiosity reasons). I think the author's writing style is quite delicate, and at least he portrays the image of the raven quite well. As for the collapse of the Warden's character, I think it comes down to personal preference. The protagonist in the book starts out as an ordinary person whose soul passes into the Warden's body. He is the kind of person who travels through time in a daze. His various behaviors at the beginning are just for the sake of stability. Personally, I think it's pretty cool.

The setting is quite interesting. I've actually always wanted to make fun of the raven and the warden. Now that the raven's gender has changed, I feel like I can make more fun of it [laughing] [laughing] As for the character problem of the protagonist that many people talk about, I actually think this is the behavior of a normal person. How could someone who just traveled through time travel be absolutely righteous and then be invincible to suppress everything? The original owner was an ordinary person, so isn't it normal to be confused? People will grow slowly, it depends on the author, come on

Urgent to update, come on, come on, it's so beautiful. It's the first time I've seen something so interesting, and it's also the first time, so here's my support, please speed up the update, I will always see you finish it!

The plot is good and the book is good, but I suggest you close the comment section to read it. The protagonist is still in no hurry, the author is in no hurry, and the readers are anxious first. There are three battles in the comment section of the following chapters😅 As for the bloodthirsty audience, there will be rivers of blood, and everyone is like the blood path Gu Immortal

After playing Delta for so long, I discovered that Silver Wing is the one who cheats on me the most, Hayate is the one who chases me the longest, Luna is the one who looks for me most seriously, Weilong is the one who sends me red envelopes, Lao Hei is the one who cares about my dentures, and Wuming is always behind me and makes me laugh. The one who waits for me the longest is the red wolf, the one who blocks me the most is Uluru, the one who tickles me is Bit, the one who cares about what I wear is Gu, the one who likes to tease me is Dark Blue, the one who likes to hide and seek with me is Horrible Claw, the Delta operators are so considerate

I love watching it, but I don't know when to let the warden eat it? [What] The plot is getting more and more bizarre. Basically all the characters who appear later are dead.

It cannot be brought into the game, and can only be regarded as a whimsical idea of ​​a parallel world. There are too many personal settings included in it, and the timeline and character settings are not rigorous. However, it is still acceptable as a female channel Delta fanfic, and the subject matter is relatively novel compared to similar genres. Therefore, the overall evaluation is between NPC and human superiors.

It would be great if this book had two male protagonists [Crying] Woohoo I don't like to read about male and female protagonists. I think a good book will either have only male protagonists or two male protagonists. I have a problem, I get annoyed when seeing women (I just want to feel sorry for you, feel free to complain if you want)

The writing is good, but the author seems to have a lot of prejudice against old ladies. Or maybe it's because he hasn't watched the latest season plot. Those who didn't know better thought the old lady was possessed by Hudson. Then there are the dark sides of prison that have never been reflected at all. I personally highly recommend the author to read those brain-computer stories. And although I quite like the Warden, there is no denying that. The pile of "dolls" under the warden's office is a crime he cannot escape.

The overall writing style is okay, if you like The Warden you can read it

It's a very good book. Personally speaking, it's pretty good-looking and well-done. The characters are pretty well created, and the emotions are quite delicate and detailed. It satisfies the yearning for a better life, and the redemption is worth savoring.

Yes, more updates, please watch Gehroth's ruthless cb raven and fall into the Shura field 😋 I have come to Tomato to write a book and still continue to abuse myself. It is identified as a form of literary youth disease😋

It's great. It's so great. The warden and the raven's thunder story with the thunder language system and understanding ability is really great.

Generally, I don't watch it if I'm curious, but if I'm curious like this, I have to watch it.