Cultivating Immortality, and Leading the Rat Race

This novel by the author should be considered the best among the "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality" fan novels. The golden finger is not too big or too small, just right. It is novel and does not make the protagonist a waste waiting for Gold Finger to feed it to his mouth. What is even more valuable is that the protagonist does not go to the Mo Mansion to acquire a girl or something like that. Come on!

The writing is wonderful [like it], it has a mortal frame, but is not limited to the plot. The protagonist has his own path to immortality. The current combat system relies on setting up formations in advance. Unfortunately, the combat details are not as detailed as Lao Mo Yin. With the formation of formations, the close combat that I was best at before is basically no longer needed. Other people's formations are supplementary. The protagonist can eat all over the world with one move. If it were a real world of immortality This kind of cross-border battle can be significantly achieved by relying on krypton gold. Many children from wealthy families should carry a lot of array disks instead of talismans and magic weapons. Therefore, there should be a certain threshold for the use, cost, and consumption of this system. Moreover, high-level monks have dabbled in it and have their own countermeasures. Like the illusion in Naruto, it is very advanced, but rarely used by people. Moreover, the title of the protagonist's Sword Demon makes me always think that the protagonist will obtain a skill that specializes in spiritual consciousness, and then rely on flying swords to move and kill the formation. The inherent impression of the formation is fixed. If the formation pattern is engraved on the sword, for example, the flying sword passes by the phantom formation pattern, but the actual image next to it is the image of the light absorbed and refracted by the formation pattern. The main body is coming towards the person. At the same time, there may be lightning paralysis and frost reduction effects on it. Speed, poisonous gas and other debuffs, if you have the money to use flying swords as missiles, hundreds of superimposed array patterns can be used to deliver express delivery. In darker space arrays, dozens of flying swords will fly around, making it difficult to prevent. It seems that Nascent Soul can teleport in space, so it is more difficult to kill. The old demon has wind and thunder wings to teleport briefly. Common space types are mass storage bags, teleportation arrays, and moving arrays. It is quite gloomy to shoot a flying sword over the other side and put up a shield on the other side. The result is to be teleported to a volcano ten miles away. After reading a lot of stories about cultivating immortals, it's easy to fall into a fixed pattern. It's easy to guess what will happen next, and then start to rely on drama and growth to enrich the core of the plot. If the drama is not well written and lacks innovation, it will become boring later [Chigua]

Excellent fan fiction about mortals cultivating immortality. The story line is independent and the hook is very unique. There is no intersection with the original work Han Li, Nangong Xin Ruyin and others in the early stage, which avoids the plot being repetitive and boring. It is even better at breaking up. There are problems with the lack of enough content in many chapters. After patching, I still feel it is not reasonable, but it is still fun to read.

It's very well written (Liangcao). The author's ideas and writing style are excellent. [Like][Like][Like] Are you driving high and driving low? After Chapter 10, it's like a different person. Are there such big differences in plot narrative and even description? I thought it was a good book, but it's a pity. Forget it, I guess it's a new author who is better at polishing the details. Don't waste your writing. It shouldn't be. Apart from the fact that this book is not cool enough and the protagonist is not awesome enough, the writing, plot, and logic are all very good. Why is it not popular?

The Mortal fanfics on Tomato are considered to be the better ones. They are very imaginative, Golden Finger is also good, and the application is reasonable. The protagonist also follows his own path, and does not follow the main plot around Han Li like other books. It is a pity that the update has been discontinued for more than 2 months.

The biggest problem with fan fiction is that you meet the protagonist group too early. Don't you know that meeting the protagonist group is one of the biggest hooks! This mortal novel can be said to be an excellent masterpiece. The settings used by the protagonist group to align the timeline are really good! What you are reading is a fanfic, but it is actually your own story. The setting in the book is very interesting. I like the metaphor of hitting the target! Gave me a hint of inspiration about reality

The explanations and interpretations of cultivating immortality are innovative and creative. Re-depicting ordinary people without getting stuck in barriers. Very good novel

Will the next step be to launch a revolution in cultivating immortals so that everyone in the world can cultivate immortality first? The backward immortal technology will eventually be eliminated Then sweep across the world and build the Immortal Realm again [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

"I, a mortal martial arts cultivator, the fairy cried and begged me to form a clan of immortals." Although the novel has been discontinued, I think it can be used as a reference for you. You can also read and learn from the book "Building Immortality with the Body and Formation"

This book is really well written, I have read more than eighty chapters! If you don't have enough knowledge of reading classic literature, you won't be able to write like this! The current score of 6.6 For this book is too low! At least 8.9 Points or above!