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1. The protagonist travels through time, and has only seen one or two and some short video settings in his previous life. 2. The cheat entry system adds talent and learning ability. Magic requires real learning rather than adding points through plug-ins. 3. The protagonist, Badger Yin, lives with the Twins for a year. The character setting is more biased towards the original work than the movie (not very friendly to Sri Lankan fans). The current timeline has not yet reached the Sorcerer's Stone. Harry has to enter school next year and has not yet entered the main plot. The protagonist is still in the stage of accumulating strength, so it is relatively routine. However, the interactions between the protagonist and his classmates and professors were well written in the first two years. I also like the character of the protagonist. He is not an abstract and brainless character, but a protagonist who has a clear understanding of himself and a plan.

My thoughts after reading it, it's good to read, the 2-star rating is pure lies, and there is no poisonous point at the moment.

Compared with other HP novels, this one is better. The introduction of the plot and the shaping of the characters are very good. I just have a question. I have been reading for more than 200 chapters about the heroine Luna, but there is no news about the heroine at all! I'm still looking forward to the author writing about the protagonist's emotional line with the heroine, and I hope I won't give up. Looking forward to (*^o^*)

After watching it for so many years. Harry Potter fan fiction. The first one to look seriously at the original work, he may have referenced most of the fan fiction. The original work, but most of it is a fan fiction written after watching the movie. Not yet. After watching all these movies, I watched Sorcerer's Stone. The novel was also written at a very young age. I watched it when I was in the first or second grade of elementary school. Seriously, the author's first two were until admission. It's very touching to see. I haven't read the rest yet, but I clicked on the comment section to see it. I really don't understand this kind of statement. Isn't watching Harry Potter just about watching daily life? What do you say? When you first entered school, did you want to learn the rules of the world? ? Why are you saying that the first grade can't defeat Voldemort now? Is this protagonist too useless? I really don't understand. . . . That kind of golden finger is so awesome that you can see it. But I think this kind of daily writing is okay. I can tell from the author's introduction. The golden finger is not strong and the sense of presence is not high. Just everyday writing. As a result, when you come in and see an ordinary person scolding you, you can't understand it.

I really want to laugh at it, the friendship between Cedric and the protagonist is so awesome! This is how Cedric should finish seven years of school and then do what he wants to do the most. The sadness he felt when reading the original novel is always slowly healed like this. He deserves it, and he should live happily.

Not bad. It's just that it's too far-fetched for the protagonist to find the meaning of existence for himself. The plot arranged by the author also becomes far-fetched. The protagonist comes from time travel and is a character that was not originally in this story. The author doesn't seem to want to change the plot, so what's the point of the existence of this extra character? Therefore, the author arranged a lot of inner drama for the protagonist, making him entangled, fearful, and doubtful, and finally chose to protect his friends as his own meaning. So judging from the chapters updated so far, the protagonist is a nanny. [Laughs] The meaning of his coming to this world is to strive for a happy ending. Friends who like this can continue reading. I'll just say goodbye.

The writing is very good. I hope I will keep writing. I hope the heroine will be changed to Fleur Delacour, who is about the same age and has the most beautiful HP. She is much better than Luna.

The protagonist has a golden finger, but it is more about his own hard work and his growth is traceable. It is not a sudden golden finger. The golden finger does not seem to have much effect. It feels like it only serves as a progress bar (I like this). The friendship between the protagonist and his friends is also very touching. It is not the one-sided attraction of the protagonist, but the mutual achievements and mutual growth between the friends. I rarely follow serialized articles, but I will keep following this one. I hope the author can update it every day.

Among all the Hufflepuffs, this is a rare book that doesn't have a strong female flavor. The writing is good, the story is interesting, and there are no cliche plots that are too bloody. It is at the forefront of Tomato's Harry Potter fans. But there are still some serious problems. For example, there is a common problem of the protagonist's understanding of the plot of the original work. At first, it was said that the protagonist had only watched the first two movies and some short videos, but had not read the fanfic or novel version. So here's the problem. The protagonist can remember the name of a female member of the Gryffindor Quidditch team and recognize her at a glance, but she doesn't know who the name "Tom Riddle" is. For another example, the author writes that both Snape and Filch are really hateful poor people. They inexplicably target the protagonists from the beginning of their first year. However, the protagonists accept it and accept it without any retaliation or even resistance. They just suffer silently. Finally, there is the "sense of relaxation" written in the title, which is not reflected in the text at all. The protagonist has a lot of things to do and is extremely busy. There are at least five or more important things at the same time, all of which are troublesome tasks that require a lot of time. I haven't seen Harry Potter Admissions yet, so I don't know how it will perform once the plot unfolds, so I won't comment. Above.

Specifically, I saw Chapter 19 of Volume 3. Before this, I liked the development of the plot very much and was very satisfied. I like this type of story where the protagonist steadily becomes stronger through a traceable path, leading the people around him to move towards a better future. But starting from Chapter 19 when I started to pass through the level, I found that I couldn't stand it anymore. Because the setting is that the protagonist has watched the first and second movies, so he knew the intensity of the original level. However, after discovering that the intensity had been strengthened countless times, he didn't have any doubts at all (I didn't see where the protagonist had doubts), and continued to pass the level unswervingly, emphasizing the entries related to the protagonist's introspection. Therefore, it is estimated that I will not read this novel for a long time until I am vague about this plot. Otherwise, when I see the various actions of the protagonist, I will recall this plot again and the protagonist's "abandoning the brain" operation. See you in a month or two.

It's a very interesting book, I'm sure it has a female protagonist, right? I always feel that the hero and Cedric have something going on, and Dai Ying has his own national conditions here. I finally found a book that said the heroine is Luna. The progress is too slow and I have no patience to read it.

Nice! I think the rating is a bit low now. If I hadn't come in out of boredom, I would have really missed it. I really like this kind of wizard who has a clear plan and acts according to his ability, and why does he still come to school when he is so fierce with Avada from the beginning? But Chef Snape may not like it, so I'll leave a lightning protection point.

Very good. The protagonist is a hard-working player. The single heroine Luna only appeared after more than 360 chapters. The protagonist of this book does not kill and eat magical animals like the protagonists in other novels. He is a protagonist who protects and loves magical animals. It suits my taste.

Fortunately, there will be some minor flaws, which may dissuade some people, but overall it's okay. After all, the overall logic and plot are pretty good. It's just that Harry made amulets for them after he entered school. What dissuades me is that I feel like I want to write about the nanny but I don't want to write about it explicitly. Giving Ron the amulet, being friends with the Geminis, getting along with Ron and Ginny during the holidays, it makes sense to give it to them. I made it for Harry, and it was mentioned several times that it was Aiwujiwu. Well, it was barely reasonable. Do it for Hermione... Call it intuition, I feel that the three of them will... Another point is that after the protagonist gets the Sorcerer's Stone, he can only know that the Sorcerer's Stone will be destroyed based on his past life memories. According to the normal plot, neither Nicolas Flamel nor Dumbledore has expressed the intention to destroy the Sorcerer's Stone at this time, so the Sorcerer's Stone still belongs to Nico's property is only kept by Dumbledore... So the protagonist destroys (can't say destroy, just waste) the Sorcerer's Stone with the idea that it will be destroyed. How should I put it? From my point of view, isn't this destroying other people's belongings? [Petrification] Of course it's just my opinion.

I'm about 100 chapters into it, and it's very well written, but I always feel like there's something a little bit off between the protagonist and Cedric. If I hadn't seen the heroine mentioned in the introduction, I would have been a little doubtful. Maybe I felt wrong, but it's still very well written.

Personally, I like it a lot. I didn't let Luna enter school early because of her age. The author didn't mention Thorne's age probably because he wanted to go back to participate in the Goblet of Fire. I feel that Luna is a single female protagonist. If the protagonist's panel is raised to gold, he can create the Snorlax, but it doesn't fit the original meaning of the panel. How about raising the magical beast to gold, creating a magical beast, and then both parties confirm their minds and officially become boyfriend and girlfriend. But the time is too tight, so it is too deliberate. It is better to let the protagonist teach the Patronus Charm, create the Bend-Horned Snork, raise the potion magic to gold, cure Neville's parents, and create the werewolf recovery spell in Lockhart's novel. I just express my opinion. The author does it in his own way. It is too slow to write now, and it is only in the secret room that it explodes [take a closer look] The current pace is very good, and the writing is also very good. Come on. @Fireelk

No poisonous spots have been found so far, and overall it looks good. The character of Snape is very different from the original work. The author restored it very beautifully and gritted his teeth.

Very good, not the kind of invincible routine where first-year students are beaten by Hogwarts students, and second-year students challenge Snape. The protagonist has been improving, but he is only slightly better than Cedric. Secondly, don't believe in yourself blindly and solve all problems by yourself. Many other fans just want to use the diary, and then lose control due to various accidents. That kind of plot is really disgusting. At the time of the current review, the plot of Chamber of Secrets has ended and Prisoner of Azkaban is about to begin. Voldemort has not been strengthened yet. This is also where I want to complain about other fanfics, because the protagonist is too strong and then crazily buffs Voldemort. Come on, he is just a madman with a split soul. The reason why he still has followers is the legacy and power of the past, as well as the dissatisfaction of many wizards with pure blood and the law of secrecy. He is just a madman who was pushed out. There is no need to strengthen it too much. In the follow-up, we can write about Grindelwald, the fusion of wizards and Muggles, the solution to lycanthropy, the solution to Squib's inability to cast spells, and the breaking of the three unforgivable curses.

I have read more than half of it now. The quality of this book is actually higher than that of most fan fiction. The author also knows the Harry Potter settings quite well. Most of the settings are quite reasonable, but the subject matter is not novel enough and the cheats are not too big. (To be honest, those articles that always boast that technology is more outrageous than magic are more embarrassing, making the wizard look like he is useless without the stick, but in fact, Newt's box alone is enough to eat a pot of the human world) However, the score is lower than some of the more hip-drawing novels, which is quite difficult to understand. It may be because of the inexplicable deduction items such as having a female protagonist and not showing off the plot.

After all, bsgm has been chasing the book for almost a year, and it's gone if I say it's gone.

It's pretty good, very casual, and finally someone looks at Snape squarely, without whitewashing.

The author's interpretation of the original work is profound; The content is detailed and extremely readable. It's not recommended by Snape, but you can watch it. This book is more original, and the male protagonist has a golden finger. Can I say that it's right for me to knock the male protagonist CP Said? So sweet!

Emmmmm Now that you have a top student, where is the slack?

Within the framework of the original story, the protagonist's abilities will not be too abrupt or excessive, allowing readers to experience Hogwarts immersively.

It looks great, the writing is delicate, and the protagonist's character is also very complete. I like Thorne very much! What the hell, where is my book? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I have more than three hundred chapters! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

A new idea was written. It has a unique perspective on the depiction of the magical world and the portrayal of characters. There are also some sloppy details, but the flaws are outweighed. I hope the author can give a happy ending.

I have been reading for a long time, and there are still many that I haven't read yet. I prefer to keep books. I really didn't expect that it would be removed from the shelves.

It seems pretty good so far, but did the author use AI when creating? If it is used, I hope the author will use it less because although AI is easy to use, the content it writes is too cumbersome and no one can think well on their own. Of course, this is just a suggestion. It depends on the author [laughs]

This book is very good, but it has a little strange feeling, but I feel that their friendship between the protagonist and Cedric is a bit beyond the scope of a normal friendship. [Laughing awkwardly]

The only shortcoming is that it is not enough to read. This book is very suitable for those who like a slow pace, because it describes the friendship between them in detail on the same level as the Weasley twins and Cedric, and also changes the character of Ron in the original work. More would be better [laughs] ? Why is it gone?