HP: the Rescue Journey of Hannah Amber

It's a great article. There are a few flaws in the first grade. There are some problems with the plot. The heroine is a bit arrogant, but it's really very small. The overall style is healing and heartwarming. It makes people's hearts warm when they watch it. I hate those kinds of stories that just start with the emotional line. They are all 11-year-old brats. The direct focus on the emotional line makes people speechless. , But this one is very good. The heroine's original wish was to keep Mrs. Abbot alive and slowly develop her emotional line. Many people did not die. Tonks, Professor Lupin, Creevey, Lavender and Fred were all alive. It really cured the regrets of the original work. There is also a small amount of GGAD, and the whole thing is perfect!

The heroine of this book would do what I would do if it were me. Very everyday life. But as she established a friendship with the protagonist Hermione and began to participate in various accidents, she was indeed a growing heroine. The daily life of the little badgers is also very warm. However, Dumbledore's setting is a bit weird, but it is understandable. If a person suddenly appears and says that he can predict the future, he will be suspicious in the early stage. Overall it's good. The main heroine is Hannah Abbott! It's so novel!

The whole book is very shocking to read. It can be said to be the most special HP fanfic I have seen so far. The heroine does not have a powerful golden finger. She only has the understanding of the plot in her previous life, and she even paid the price (lost the book) after violating the original world line. (Her eyes), the character creation is very consistent, as if parallel time and space really happened. This book has saved the original meaning, whether it is Cedric, Professor Snape, Sirius, Mr. And Mrs. Lupin and Fred, it is really I feel very lucky, especially the description of the war is thrilling, making people feel nervous as the war progresses. Part of the article is the heroine's views on Severus, Draco, and Regulus, the very contradictory characters in the original work. It can be said that the author's description really fits the image of them in my mind. The author's extra story at the end is really heartwarming. I seem to see that each of them has their own bright future. No matter it is ordinary or whatever, everyone is doing well...

A growth-oriented heroine, Hannah Amber is a novel heroine. The friendship line is very annoying to me. Currently it is the warmth and healing line. There is no forced cool text.

The overall atmosphere is very warm, and I like the character of the protagonist very much.

Very beautiful! I was very touched, and I always had a sour feeling after reading it!

Wow, this is really a great HP fic written on Tomato! Awesome, worth watching

Don't stop updating, the author is great~~~~Hungry, hungry, rice~~~~

I like it, please give it a thumbs up, author

Well written! Like

Very peaceful, gentle and beautiful

Don't poke it, just try to see it

The writing is good, and the plot direction is relatively reasonable. It's just that I just saw Hannah lose her left eye because the future direction was revealed, which was quite uncomfortable.

The writing is smooth, the relationship between Hannah and Fred is not passionate but very warm, and the plot has the feeling of being told in a trickle.

It's great to watch. I look forward to having more emotional scenes next time.