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I Beg the Hokage to Read the Novel and Not Lick Konoha! ! !
Villain writing is the best
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Naruto, the Heroine Is Best Tsunade, the Content Is Better
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Is There No More Masterpieces in Naruto's Current Life?
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Naruto's Single Heroine Hinata Is Invincible in the Later Stage.
Written on the topic.
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It's True That Naruto Is Getting Worse with Each Passing Year, so We Can Only Use the Previous Books to Compare.
I want to read a book similar to "Naruto: Beginning with the Twin Kamui".
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Looking for High-Quality Naruto Stories
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Lots of Words, Naruto, Lots of Heroines
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I Don't Believe There Are No Good Books About Naruto Anymore.
Looking for a good book on Naruto, rated 8 points or above, urban, invincible
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Hand over All the Books on Naruto: Another World
I want to read a book similar to "The Eternal Kaleidoscope of the Beginning, Shocking the School Beauty Queen".
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Reading the first few chapters, I feel pretty good. They have the thinking of a normal person. They don't deliberately show off or suppress anyone. They can also face the internal problems of the Byakugan family. Generally speaking, they are positive and thoughtful. My rating is more objective, which should be above the passing line, but not excellent, but for friends who are not good at reading, it is a rare and good pastime.
Pretty good, more than 90% of Naruto fans The writing is so taken for granted, it feels like a joke
I've seen the Zabuza chapter so far, and I think it's pretty good. The author has something of his own to write I gave it to Tsunade, right? [Pauses face] It's too late to know if you don't read the book review. Isn't it good to let her be beautiful alone?
Serious five stars! It's a good review. I rarely read fanfics about the protagonist Naruto, but the author handles light and darkness very well, retaining the possibility of turning into darkness and the bond with his companions. Most Naruto fans are blindly dark, but we have watched more than 700 episodes of Naruto. Isn't the friendship among the Twelve Strongest that impresses us the most? This novel writes things that we haven't seen in anime. It's great that Naruto is no longer just silly and sweet. I have my own bottom line, I am no longer a virgin, I have feelings but I don't know how to kneel down and lick. Awesome, very handsome Naruto
It's a rare Naruto story with Naruto as the main character. It doesn't have that kind of mindless kid pretentiousness. It ranks first on the must-eat list [full] At this stage (Konoha's collapse) it's not poisonous yet, but the updates aren't enough, and I'm afraid it'll kill me [face covering]
Is there a female protagonist, one or more? I hope there will be more heroines [eating melon]
I hope everyone here has one Beautiful end! Incense flowers bloom majestically There is indeed something wrong with My Youth Love Story Dressing doll falls in love Tamago Market Even if you are a middle-aged child, you still need to fall in love The moonlight is so beautiful Something dangerous in my heart Miss Kaguya wants me to confess my love charlotte national team dragon and tiger Steins; Gate Anyway, very cute naruto your name CLANNAD cardcaptor sakura the other side of the realm Violet Evergarden fireworks Unknown flower name The funeral of Florian Red-haired Snow White Princess Takagi-san who is good at teasing game life The God of Yuanqi Girl Yuanknot Sword Art Online My sister can't be this cute Life in another world from scratch April is your lie I want to eat your pancreas Three Doomsday Questions Also, this book is really good. Come on, the author [laughs evilly] [like]
At the beginning, there was a wave of Kumo Hokage, and the second Wood Release was eliminated by the Blood Successor. The official written Wood Release was the Blood Successor's limit. According to this, after a while, the Blood Successor Deidara was exploded, and the Sharingan finally evolved into the Rinnegan. [Vomit] Goodbye. Originally, it would be okay to pass the time with a second set, but the system you set up is too messy. There is wood escape and soft fist for a while, not to mention that the Yaosigami air attack itself is a powerful thing, but this has nothing to do with soft fist. Is it necessary to learn soft boxing? Give me a feeling of writing wherever I want
The Naruto fanfic series is quite outstanding, why is the rating so low? Someone deliberately suppresses the score [eating melon] Uh, so-so
It ranks among the top five Naruto books I have read. The author portrays Naruto very well. Although it is a cliché about time travel, I want him to be a Naruto who understands the plot. This book makes up for my shortcomings when reading the original work. Excellent work
The front part is particularly good, the personal design of each character satisfies my fantasy about them, and the fantasy about the ninja world. [Understood][Explore] However, since the destruction of Konoha, there has been a strong sense of fragmentation [face covering]
I read it in one sitting. It is a rare masterpiece. It has a good balance between daily life and cultivation content, and the character creation and time points are also very rigorous. The writing is smooth and natural, and it's very comfortable without drama. The shortcoming is that so far there are missing some explosive points of the plot, and there is no conflict and friction, resulting in the plot being too smooth and smooth. It cannot be said to be bland, but it cannot be said to have ups and downs. I hope the author can optimize it.
The emotional description is very delicate, and the plot advancement is not laggy. Although it is a little lacking, as long as the level is maintained, it still has a place in Naruto fan fiction.
What is the origin The god descended from the sky to an unknown homeland The seed that represents the origin grows from Later, the tree that connected everything The power of bond from one to how far The endless rainbow from destruction to creation Falling apart due to war Then to the strife and plunder that abounds in conspiracies And then to the peace afterward… When will this era end? The fate we carry is the endless road The lonely and confused person who destroys and saves the world From the water mirror called reincarnation, I saw the fog of the past and the future. The power connected in series is called a bond It's about putting aside disputes and joining hands to fight together. The fusion of the Eye of Destruction and the Power of the Carrying Body It is from the Supreme God, bowing and watching Endless time and space is filled with collapsed dimensions The desire to be resurrected after being destroyed The boundless pure land is the immortal memory in the soul It is the name of the era and the ninja who carried it on his back)!
It's a pretty good Naruto story. The author's title is pretty good. The only shortcoming is that the pace is too slow. I've seen too many fast-paced stories. It's hard to get used to this slow pace. I hope there will be more conspiracy stories.
I agree with you. It would be nice to have more heroines. Why do I feel the back? The more I look at the back, the weirder it looks.
As a fanfic, it is rare that this book does not overwhelm the protagonist's fighting ability. It is quite strange. Although it adds various obstacles to the protagonist for the sake of water plot, such as the death of the old man of the Six Paths himself, Asura Indra regaining consciousness, the protagonist's various blitzes in the plot are not enough time to enter the Six Paths level, and Sasuke planted a mine to foreshadow the trouble? But he can kill Otsutsuki Isshiki and Kamashiki. Kamashiki's superior Otohime is original, right? It's quite fresh. It seems that the protagonist may be a bit lazy. In the early stage of the plot, it is said to be the bond between the 12 Xiaoqiang. In the middle and later stages, it is the plot of pure Naruto and the harem group. The protagonist's fighting power is basically cultivated by himself. He is very fluent without any external force. , It's just that I don't understand that the protagonist only started to rise to prominence during the Konoha Honkai Plan. He has already mastered the Great Spiral Rinyu and the Wood Release Thousand Arms Kannon and still has to wait for Orochimaru to launch the Honkai Plan [laughing], and in order to trick the protagonist, I wrote an Izanagi b In the UG plot, after sealing the corpse, Izanagi will create a new one with a kaleidoscope. He directly gives two Shisui right eyes, and then gets a bunch of Obito's Kamui Eyes. He also adds kamoki and time-travel elements and Uchiha Hikari to let the protagonist take shortcuts. Generally speaking, it is not a Naruto plot that leaves no regrets. It is more like the feeling of a lucky child in a fairy tale. Other small flaws can be ignored for the plot, but you may need to read the original to enjoy it.
After reading Chapter 108, the pace is not sluggish, the plot is reasonable, the characters are rich, and the details are also very particular. I have read too many fast food articles, and reading this kind of delicate and refreshing article that makes people calm down and read without any flaws is simply a pleasure. By the way, regarding the issue of the heroine, there is actually nothing wrong with the writing. It's pretty good and I love reading it. But it will become a big problem in the later stages. I'm looking forward to how the author will deal with it when I read it. Follow-up review: In the chapters when Orochimaru attacked Konoha, he told what happened to Naruto. I didn't pay much attention to Naruto's childhood when I watched the anime, but I just know that now it's a bit emotional and heartbreaking. Follow-up review: Chapter 222 suddenly jumps to 20 years later. It seems to be centered on the future, but... Why? This can be used as a side story, but the separation of the main plot would be too obvious. Follow-up review: Fortunately, the story of returning from the future to the present almost made me quit. Fortunately, I continued to watch and found that the main plot is still the same. This is the main plot. It feels like it is just a small side story to get special props. It was a false alarm. Follow-up review: It can be seen that there are a lot less comments on the future plot and the following sections. It should be the same misunderstanding as before.
The writing is pretty good so far
Not bad, keep writing
So far it's pretty good, but after all, there aren't many chapters, so I'll give it a conservative four stars [laughing]
Do more different techniques, learn more and create more, you will definitely be able to give Otsutsuki a lot of surprises [laughing evilly] Zakla is also a little unsafe, I will change to natural energy in the future, the method of my ancestors is more reliable
The rating is low. Many female protagonists are most afraid of not handling the emotional line issue well. The author handles it very well. He is not brainless and has his own ideas. He does not all follow the original text. It can be regarded as a rare high-quality product.
I have read less than half of it, and I found that there are several new books by Tomato Naruto recently that are pretty good, and this one is one of them. There are not so many conspiracy theories, the bond between the protagonist and his partners, the plot + daily life together, so far the writing is good, I hope the author can keep it up.
The plot is delicate and I just like the characterization. I hope it can make up for the regrets in Naruto
Okay, the writing is pretty good in all aspects.
It's rare that there are no conspiracy theories [blowing kiss]
This book is very good
A good Naruto fanfic
Naruto, the time traveler, looks pretty good for the time being. I hope it can make up for the regrets. However, there is a tendency to whitewash some of the original supporting characters, and the supporting characters are also given a little too much ink.