My Dongguan Dream: Sister Mei

I felt an inexplicable sadness when I read it. It felt too close to life. If possible, I hope the writing is better. Although I have never experienced this kind of life, I saw the miserable side of those girls, and I felt an inexplicable sadness in my heart. They were also forced to live, but they have their own future. The male protagonist is not offensive either. It is really good.

It's good to read, it's a semi-cool Shanghai type of writing, with a slow pace and delicate writing style, and it's a bit hard to get popular. Nowadays, everyone likes the system bonus, and a beautiful girl flirts with each article. Fast-paced and refreshing article. Do you want to make money or write good works? This is a Hamlet-like question.

The relationship between No. 7 And No. 7 Is really described in a delicate way. I feel a little lustful when I look at it. It's so over the top. The relationship between No. 18 And No. 18 Is also written so delicately. Oh my god, this author is really touching when writing emotional scenes.

To be honest, I mainly read urban novels. Please give me a 100-word review. It stands to reason that even if a city book has multiple female protagonists, there will be one or two fixed female protagonists throughout. After all, the writing is not a cool novel. When I read this book, I thought the fixed female protagonists were Sister Aya and Sister Mei, but suddenly Sister Aya entered the game, which made me very puzzled. The character image has already been created, and there are many emotional lines. Some places are inexplicable. Many of the explanations are not clear. No matter what the character of the male protagonist is, every author has his own way of writing it. The pace is very slow, very slow. It is really the same as writing one day at a time. We are busy alone and it is impossible for new things to happen every day. Just skip the timeline by a month or a week. Since we want to write a story around 2000, we must always remind ourselves of this time period. Many heroines have temporarily gone offline. The pace is still very slow and the timeline is also very vague. This is not right for a novel with this theme. Readers have favorite characters, and this slow pace will greatly affect the reader's reading experience. The author's writing skills are above average, there's nothing wrong with it, but it gives me a feeling that I can't even describe as someone who has been watching the city all year round. I can't give it five stars, but it's not too bad either.

The writing style is very good, not YY; you can be called a writer. Delicate character and psychological portrayal

The unique perspective of an era gives people a strong and real sense of immersion. The text is exquisite, the history is true, and the story is vivid. It is a classic in the great era!

The detailed description technique is amazing and the psychological activities are clear.

A perfect work, the author depicts the psychology of the characters very delicately, and uses the background of the times to connect the development of the story.

The novel is good, each character is relatively vivid, not just a paper character. There are not many flaws and poisonous points in logic. A rare good book!

Lu Wenjing was in too much pain. She had no chance to go to college, and her parents were gone. She was forced to take an unreasonable path to pay off her debts, and she was not able to get together with the one she loved... When I saw the quarrel between Lu Wenjing and her husband on the phone in Chapter 781, I felt very uncomfortable. I originally thought that the so-called marriage was all an excuse and a subterfuge, but I didn't expect it to become true. I hope the author treats Lu better and has some achievements in Dongguan beauty, flower shop, house selling or other fields, and it is enough to be able to stand by Wang Lei's side. Discuss with book friends: If Lu Wenjing did not open a store back then, and followed Wang Lei to Dongguan, developing other industries to accumulate experience and lay a foundation for the future, even if she and Wang Lei could not get together, she would have grown up with someone who was kinder to her. Just like the author said: There are you, me and him in the story. Come on, the more you write, the better. Master Zeng, write well! It's been more than ten chapters and I'm still learning to get a driver's license. The lives of us readers are passing day by day. You have the golden finger of God. With a slight movement, dozens of days have passed and the supermarket has opened. Lu Wenjing and Xiaolian have begun to do big things together. [Laugh]

I'm about halfway through it. The minor shortcomings are that the male protagonist's inner monologues are a bit too many and repetitive, and his growth is a bit slow. The confused and depressing atmosphere is a bit visual fatigue after watching it for a long time. The emotional descriptions are quite delicate. I hope the pace can be faster. Come on.

It is one of the few online articles that brings to life the wildness, sweat and human touch of old Dongguan, the "world's factory". There is no floating boss, only the crowding of the green car, the humidity of the urban village and the bitterness under the neon lights of the nightclub; it does not describe the sisters as facial expressions of "amorous symbols", but describes their fierceness, righteousness and softness when they are struggling to survive at the bottom. The bond of "sisters and brothers hugging together for warmth" is very poignant. The rhythm is not bad, the punches are intense, and the grudges are settled. In today's routine-oriented Shuangwen market, this kind of "old time narrative" with a rough texture and a quaint atmosphere is indeed powerful and decompressing enough.

Every book is like a person, with its own personality, advantages and disadvantages, and this one is the same. The disadvantage is that the progress is a bit delayed for some mothers-in-law, but I think the plot is very real. Just like Sister Yan, fame needs to be accumulated little by little. Although it is slower, it will still become popular in the end!

The writing is quite good. It's the first time I've seen this kind of thing. It's quite interesting, but the 77 offline version is a bit too crisp! It's so crumbly and meaningless.

Only if you experience it yourself will it be so real! A good book worth recommending!

It's rare to see such a novel written with so much heart, and it's so real.

It's very depressing, but also very real, more like an autobiography, and the questions are also very good.

The writing is exquisite, the characters are exquisitely drawn, and he expresses the times and everything around him very well. The author is very attentive.

It was quite cruel and caused strong psychological fluctuations in me. The male protagonist is very contradictory. He has a strong sense of deservingness and at the same time a very low self-esteem. A typical elm head. It's good to watch, but it's a bit difficult to lay out the plot once you enter the palace. I'm looking forward to how the author will open the second copy.

Delicate writing style and coherent storyline

The author uses the halo of the protagonist to gradually enter the world of the novel, allowing readers to have a strong sense of immersion into the chaotic real era background and feel the twists and turns of life. This is a great story 👍 Great, great, great, great

The content of the novel is good. It should be based on the plot of real life in that era. Many young people today have never heard of it. Give it a listen and learn about the popular accident. It is a good novel and worth appreciating.

Not bad, very realistic and real, awesome.

It feels like the old movies "Happy Together" and "Chungking Express". The description is very similar to Wong Kar-Wai's. Really good book. It's a lot of regret that the supporting characters are offline when they should be. However, it may be a bit depressing for readers who have more troubles in reality. But this is my problem. Don't blame the author. Come on. I hope this book gets better and better.

Direct five-star praise. So far, the writing is good. I hope you will continue to work hard.

This book is suitable for people who really have stories and depth, and can easily resonate; of course, it is not suitable for those who want to read refreshing articles.

Super pretty, like the days when I just left school.

The plot is twists and turns, the protagonist is emotionally tangled, and humane, worth watching! The protagonist in his 20s is very realistic in his thoughts, strategies, and emotions! Guan Jian has a kind heart and so much luck that everyone envies him!

It's pretty good, a small day for ordinary people to work hard.

I rarely read urban literature, but I finished it in two days... I just want to update it soon... Although there is a feeling that the world revolves around the protagonist, whether it is a brother or a woman, the writing is quite real.