Disaster Invades, I Create a Salvation Organization Behind the Scenes

It is now December 9, 2025, and I have read the latest chapter 40. The traditional novel about building an organization to fight against the doomsday is pretty good at describing the weirdness and organization. It can be seen that the author must have thought carefully about it for a long time, but there is still a lot of room for improvement. ①The plot is not coherent enough. For example: after the protagonist solves the first weird thing at the beginning, the plot jumps directly to a few days later. This greatly affects the reading experience. Regarding this issue, I hope the author will try to avoid it in the future. ②The writing is not delicate enough. Although there is a reason why the plot has not been fully developed, I still want to give feedback. The weirdness and powerlessness of Cthulhu are not described (at least I can't relate to it at all). ③ (Maybe I have higher requirements for group portraits) If the description of the character's process from struggle to transformation is not strong enough, it will feel inexplicable. [Current characters: Chen Ming, Huang Wenlong, Gu Qingyao, Li Hao, Chu Xixue. My current impressions of them are: a middle-school sultry boy, a tough guy with a story, a middle-school girl, a middle-school young man who longs for power, and a little girl who longs for love. My request to the author is to increase the description of the characters (whether it is language, psychology, or appearance, it is better to write more). Don't regard all the characters as tools to advance the plot. Even if the plot slows down a little, the characters must be written in a more three-dimensional way. If it doesn't work, let's just focus on a few descriptions, otherwise it's better to label group portraits. Five stars for encouragement. [Sending Hearts]

The story and plot are quite attractive