[Ensemble cast + saving the world + female supporting characters, no female lead]
"Ding! Binding successful. The World-Saving System is at your service!"
That day, I fell ill. Tests revealed an incurable disease, and I didn't have long to live.
That night, I let myself go and drank until I was dead drunk. I started hallucinating, and even hearing things...
Wait! This doesn't seem to be a hallucination!
The blood moon hangs high, disaster has arrived, and the boundary between reality and illusion is beginning to collapse.
Strange beings of unknown origin breed in the shadows, feeding on human fear;
Nameless evil gods whisper in people's ears, tempting their reason toward destruction;
And the contract objects scattered across the world are dangerous gifts. Their holders might gain supernatural powers, or pay a terrible price...
Fellow humans, are you willing to join us and face this endless abyss together, doing your part to keep the spark of human civilization alive?
"I am!"
It is now December 9, 2025, and I have read the latest chapter 40. The traditional novel about building an organization to fight against the doomsday is pretty good at describing the weirdness and organization. It can be seen that the author must have thought carefully about it for a long time, but there is still a lot of room for improvement. ①The plot is not coherent enough. For example: after the protagonist solves the first weird thing at the beginning, the plot jumps directly to a few days later. This greatly affects the reading experience. Regarding this issue, I hope the author will try to avoid it in the future. ②The writing is not delicate enough. Although there is a reason why the plot has not been fully developed, I still want to give feedback. The weirdness and powerlessness of Cthulhu are not described (at least I can't relate to it at all). ③ (Maybe I have higher requirements for group portraits) If the description of the character's process from struggle to transformation is not strong enough, it will feel inexplicable. [Current characters: Chen Ming, Huang Wenlong, Gu Qingyao, Li Hao, Chu Xixue. My current impressions of them are: a middle-school sultry boy, a tough guy with a story, a middle-school girl, a middle-school young man who longs for power, and a little girl who longs for love. My request to the author is to increase the description of the characters (whether it is language, psychology, or appearance, it is better to write more). Don't regard all the characters as tools to advance the plot. Even if the plot slows down a little, the characters must be written in a more three-dimensional way. If it doesn't work, let's just focus on a few descriptions, otherwise it's better to label group portraits. Five stars for encouragement. 💕
With the name of this organization, don't you think it's shameful to sign up at that time? Not to mention how high-quality it is, it must be catchy at least 🤦, such as the abbreviation: Xinhuo! Not like the name of the organization, but more like the slogan of the organization? Declaration? Wishes [what]
The story and plot are quite attractive
Come on, author!!!!!!!!
Well written.
Very well written
Well enough…