Lu Mingfei: It's Broken. the System Treats Me as a Dragon Ancestor.

Not bad, better than Jiangnan who writes fan fiction Why do so many people like it?

This fic is so cool, this is the Dragon Clan fic I want to read Other fans wrote according to the original timeline. There is no point in grinding or moaning. What I want is this kind of self-assuming, it's so flammable

So cool! Ahhhhhhhh! Strength! Strength! Strength! Strength! Strength! ! ! I declare! This is the official history of the Dragon Clan! He knows nothing about the Dragon Clan in Jiangnan!

This is the best Lu Mingfei fanfic I've ever read. In my opinion, other Lu Mingfei's Return of the Heavens stories were all taken away by people from other worlds and possessed Lu Mingfei's body and memories. The bad boy needs to be whipped hard!

I want to see the Valkyrie version of Lu Mingfei in the end, he is decisively handsome! Can the author provide some illustrations for us to try? I haven't watched The Dragon[shy][shy][shy][shy]

After reading the fanfic written by Jiang Nan, I came to read this original work [laughs]. Only then can I feel the refreshing feeling of Shaozi Lu Mingfei growing up little by little [laughing]

Lu Mingfei changed for the better, but retained the weird metaphors and trash talk to let us know that we were watching the Dragon Clan, not Xiao Yan Pretty good. There are many female protagonists, but it is not a romance novel, which is just right.

It's a very nice book. How can I put it this way? If you go in and read it, you will understand that this is the best book I have ever read among fan works. I dare not say absolutely, but it is already very good. It's really good-looking, I'm not going to lie to you, compared to other fanfics, I think it's very good-looking. There are not too many poisonous points, maybe there are some, but it does not affect the overall reading of it. Worth a closer look.

I declare that this is the real Dragon Clan [laughs]. The plot is not laggy, and the fighting scenes are well described. Moreover, the plot is no longer a copy of the original. There are quite a lot of original plots, but the original plot is very interesting and interesting, and the level of the secondary level is also very good. I felt very happy watching it. There is basically no grievance plot, it is just a refreshing novel. Lu Mingfei is not the kind who becomes stronger inexplicably. He really relies on his own training. Every time he shows signs of grievance, he is immediately spurred on. It is very good, very good. If you read the original work, you can watch this if you like Hong Wen.

It's a very good Dragon Clan fanfic. The character changes are very good. It makes the process comfortable to watch. Sudden strength will drive people into madness. Only by working hard on one's own and stepping forward one step at a time can one realize how difficult it is to become stronger, rather than being invincible in one step and playing the game in the world.

This book is really interesting, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on! It was really exciting, especially when Wu Song fought for Lin Daiyu and Nezha for thousands of rounds. Wu Zetian's strength was as high as the ceiling. If Jie hadn't launched the golden body big move first and followed Yongshuang's body, she would have been shot by AK from a long distance and she would have definitely lost on the spot. What I like the most is what Liu Bei said to the 30,000 shrimp soldiers in the East China Sea: "Young people don't know the heights of the world, so don't be presumptuous in front of Brother Bei." It shows Liu Bei's anger after being knocked down by the Dragon King with a fork. In general, the plot of this book is ups and downs, the clues are sufficient, the fighting scenes are lifelike, and the personality portrayal of each character is very vivid and three-dimensional!

So far, it is the best I have seen in terms of imagination and plot in Dragon Clan. Regardless of whether it is consistent with the original work or not, just one sentence allows us to see a difference. Lu Mingfei should be like this. This is something that many books cannot do. It is worth reading.

Five star book review This is definitely a treasure among "Dragon" fandoms! The author played with the idea that "the system mistakenly regarded Lu Mingfei as the Dragon Ancestor and cultivated him", perfectly captured the bad boy background of Lu Mingfei in the original work, and gave him a completely different counterattack path. No longer the transparent little person who only shouted "Nono", Lu Mingfei relied on the system buffs to soar all the way. Not only did he fool all the big guys in the dragon clan, but he also found his own blood and confidence. The author's grasp of the characters in the original work is terrifyingly accurate. Chu Zihang's coldness, Caesar's arrogance, and Ange's old fox energy are all authentic, and even the interactions between the supporting characters are full of familiar laughter. The cool points are dense but not suspended, and the emotional lines are delicate and poignant. It has the pleasure of a counterattack and a slap in the face, as well as the warmth of a failed boy growing up. While your blood is boiling, you can also regain the feeling of chasing "Dragon" in the past. Produced by bean bags, it must be a high-quality product [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

So cool! This is the real king of the dragon clan. He reaches the top step by step. He has partners and people who touch his heart. The story is passionate and there are no forced lamentations and sadness. This is the story of a male protagonist! ! !

A dragon that truly meets the public's expectations. I am looking forward to the relationship between Lu Mingze and Bu Zeng in the future. I hope this book will not focus on Chen Motong. The little monster is the final destination. But this does not prevent Lu Mingfei from making some other friends. The relationship between the characters is handled very well. Unlike some other fans who have a stubborn relationship with Zero One, which seems very deliberate. This book is written very naturally [Like] [Love]

Very nice looking and high quality. Although there is a system, it is not a systematic document in the traditional sense. The system usually unconditionally helps the host to hunt for treasure, find opportunities, point out targets, and search for enemies. But this system is specially designed to polish the protagonist, allowing Lu Mingfei to transform and grow bit by bit, as if we are also transforming and growing. It's better than many Dragon Clan fics I've read, so good luck to the author! ! [Like][Like][Like]

I have read a lot of Dragon Clan fan fiction, and now I feel that fan fiction is about giving the characters in the book more and more exciting lives. What the author writes makes me want to read it, regardless of whether it is official history or not. As long as this kind of re-creation can give the characters in the book a happy ending and give readers an explanation, I think it is a good book. The characters are all virtual, but there is a distinct image that gives the name a soul. I hope there will be more chapters for this character, it will be fun to watch. Bad news, we've caught up with the main force [Petrochemical]

，，，，，！ ! ! ! ! The author must finish writing it and give me a Lu Mingfei who is so strong that he leaves no regrets and is so strong. In addition, I personally don't want to set up a cp for Fei Zai. Can we all express my friendship? Please, I finally found such a good article

The teacher's writing is so beautiful! [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] It's simply a masterpiece. By the way, there is someone who wrote this novel for you. Teacher, do you know? Oh, yes, my wife's name seems to be Jiang Nan, but he wrote it so many times that it is simply incomparable with your original text [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The writing is very good. The only flaw is that I feel that the author likes the little goddess very much. Just write it in the front. If you can skip it in the back, don't keep writing. The ones in Longyuan Pavilion are a bit forced. Try to hurry up and get to the main plot. There is enough foreshadowing in the front. You can write the main plot in the back. In Japan, if you want to write a plot, you can still write Lu Ling. I like this very much. Of course, this is just my objective evaluation. The role of the little goddess is a bit too much. After all, she is a person without blood. There is no help, especially when fighting Samson in Longyuan Pavilion, you can only watch from the sidelines, so I feel that the author is forcing the plot, and why the little goddess of Kassel Academy still follows it is really purely forcing the plot to be logical. Why is this person without blood going to be a vase? The author should try his best to change it himself. And try to have as few heroines as possible, just have a single heroine, just an imperial daughter. If you really want to have one, choose one of Nono or Eri. I think this novel is very interesting if it has only one heroine, so try to have as few heroines as possible. It's a bit difficult to write the harem in the later stages of the novel "For the Dragon Clan". Of course, this is just because I personally don't like harems, but if you continue to write emotional scenes with multiple heroines in the later stage, it will seem a bit boring. I have a careful personal opinion. I read it and it's a little bit poisonous. What does it mean to suddenly have dragon blood? No matter how much you like it, you can't force it. If you like him, just write a single heroine. Can't you just give a lot of the heroine's plot to the little goddess? If you give most of the plot to the little goddess, then you have to write about the harem, the princess, Nono, Eri Yi. Tell me how you write in the future, only the heroine, not the plot? Can you delay it? Can you not add it, try not to add it, skip it as much as possible.

The biggest highlight of the book is the detailed description of the transformation process of the protagonist Lu Mingfei from a cub to a monarch. The author not only constructs a clear growth path, but also deeply explores the character's inner struggle, awakening and transformation. Whether he was forced to become stronger due to fear in the early stage, or took the initiative to hold the knife to protect his loved one in the later stage, the emotional logic progresses layer by layer, and has a strong sense of substitution. Especially the description of Lu Mingfei's psychological activities when he faced the heavy pressure of fate is delicate, real and moving. However, this high emotional concentration also brings a certain reading burden. The emotional expressions of the protagonist and supporting characters in the book are so rich that even within one chapter, more than half of the book is devoted to inner monologue and emotional elaboration. Readers who prefer fast-paced progression or plot-driven narratives may find the pacing dragging. In addition, as a fan work, the "overload" of emotional description weakens the cold, mysterious and passionate atmosphere of the original work to some extent, making the work more inclined to "emotional flow" and refreshing writing. In terms of writing style, the style of this book is significantly different from Jiangnan's original work. Jiang Nan is good at wrapping the core of tragedy in a humorous and self-deprecating style, with concise and pictorial language; while this work is more inclined to direct and strong emotional expression, lacking the "implicit pain" and literary blankness of the original work. Although this helps to strengthen the appeal of the characters, in fan creation, if it deviates too far from the original temperament, it may affect the immersive experience of old readers. Overall, this is a work with equally distinct strengths and weaknesses. It successfully created a more proactive and emotionally tense Lu Mingfei; but there is still room for improvement in narrative rhythm and style fit. For those who like deep emotional descriptions and pursue the strong rise of the protagonist, this book is worth reading; but if you prefer the style and tone of Jiangnan's original work, you need to adjust your expectations.

I have to say that it is really well written, and the transformation of Lu Mingfei is also very natural. I hope there will be no female protagonist.

This is the orthodoxy of the Dragon Clan! ! ! ! ! ! Jiangnan, get out of here! ! ! ! ! !

The characters in Jiang Nan's works are rich and full, and the unwillingness and sadness of the young man revealed in his writing made me want to stop watching the Dragon Clan. However, I always think that the story of the Dragon Clan should not be like that, and Lu Mingfei should not be the weak child who has not changed or grown. Perhaps the Lu Mingfei in this book is the real Lu Mingfei, who controls his destiny instead of being swayed by Jiangnan's bad taste.

It's quite good-looking. It solves many of the knives in the original work, but I think it makes Lu Mingze worse. I don't think Lu Mingze is a bad guy. I quite want to see them team up.

I can only say that this is the orthodoxy of the Dragon Clan. Jiangnan is a fanfic. He only deserves to sit at the same table with Herzog (just for fun, please don't take it seriously). This book is well written and has a reasonable plot. The transitions are smooth and smooth, just like the animation transitions. Some of the plot changes are well arranged and will not make people feel inconsistent. It makes up for the regrets of the original work in a very cool way. I hope you don't give me a hard shock [laughing]

This is the original book of Dragon Clan, and the one by Jiangnan is obviously a fan [shy]

It is considered to be the best among all Dragon Clan fanfics. The setting is very novel. There is no timeline for the beginning of the story or the rebirth of Lu Mingfei. Instead, it is the second year of high school before entering Kassel. The writing is good and the character is not ruined. As long as you give the order, we will name you Shanbei [laughter]

It's not bad. The writing style is good. I don't think it should be replaced by AI. The characters are also quite suitable. You can focus on some life and skip it directly. It's okay at first, but there are too many words and it's a bit boring. You can write something funny or romantic. . Forget it, let's just give it 5 points.

Wow, no kidding, I have read a lot of Dragon Clan novels, and this one is really excellent. It has changed since Lu Mingfei, and some of the author's personal settings are also great. Not much more to say, just added it to the bookshelf, waiting for the author's update