I Corrected Feng Aotian at Every Turn.

The writing is very good, and it is not watery. It has only written six episodes of 100,000 words, and there are no real lilies in the harem. This is a good review, but the author should not mix in some lily elements later.

The Holy Son in the Qi training stage, with the best spiritual root and holy body, has not even passed the foundation building in 50 chapters.

It's okay, mainly because I don't like the behavior of the protagonist. It's too awkward. The role-playing genre still doesn't suit me. I still prefer the feeling of freedom. It's not this kind of rigidly dressed holy monk. It's too frustrating.

I've also come to evaluate. I can really rate myself [smile]

It's a pity. I feel that if it hadn't been discontinued, it would have been very exciting. I think the second book can be written about magical girls. As the author said, the second part of the book was originally about magical girls. The author can write the second part of the book as a new book. The perspective of the new book can also be developed from the perspective of Yun Qingge or the heroine of the second part of the book [Thinking] (Consider this idea. Author [cry][cry][cry])

It's really beautiful. Please keep writing. [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's a very novel subject, and I predict it will be popular.

This novel is really good so far [laughing]

It's not bad for now, it's pretty good-looking

It's funny, let's take a look.

It's okay, but it's finished early

It's not bad and suitable for people who are book-hungry to pass the time.

I just watched a little bit, and it's okay. After all, it's too short and I can't see any major problems. Is the combat power system here based on mortals? The Nascent Soul can step through the void. I misjudged it, it's a god.

Not bad, pretty good-looking. I'll wait and see.

It's great, it feels like watching anime✪ω✪

It's very beautiful and written with great care. I highly recommend everyone to read it. Really, don't think the name is strange. The author writes it very well.

The plot is smooth and the writing is witty and interesting.

It's roughly similar to the one next door called Tiandao Siming, but it's a rare book to read.

It's okay, author, come on

Look, this book is useless With your progress, your realm has not changed at all in more than a hundred chapters. Is it so laborious to build a foundation? Why not exchange the five elements?

Come on, come on, come on⛽( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧ It's good to watch, but it's a pity that the data is not good and only the first volume is available [crying]

Not bad, well written

Interesting, fun, I like it

It's okay, it'll look better at the back

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Big cheers for the author

The plot is very interesting and the characters are good

It looks good, come on author [got it]

Okay, come on, author

I can decide whether it looks good or not [salute]